Wrecker & Tech for @danielbrulh
#yall ain’t slick
Wrecker and Omega
They definitely take golden hour pics
+ bonus
apologies for the unexplained absence!! i've been working on a couple projects for among us, including an among us animation and a possible comic series! i'll be posting more frequenty from now on however. have a nice day! :>
"They're just waiting, they're waiting for the next thing for me to slip up on, and, Ranboo, I'm not gonna fucking slip up"
some favorites from text chat
I'm so sorry that this is my first post on Tumblr but young Yoda looks like Obama and I need other people to feel my pain
break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared
fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re referring to yet, it’s a-okay to refer to them by an identifying trait)
blunette is not a thing
new speaker, new paragraph. please.
“said” is such a great word. use it. make sweet love to it. but don’t kill it
use “said” more than you use synonyms for it. that way the use of synonyms gets more exciting. getting a sudden description of how a character is saying something (screaming, mumbling, sighing) is more interesting that way.
if your summary says “I suck at summaries” or “story better than summary” you’re turning off the reader, my dude. your summary is supposed to be your hook. you gotta own it, just like you’re gonna own the story they’re about to read
follow long sentences w short ones and short ones w long ones. same goes for paragraphs
your writing is always better than you think it is. you just think it’s bad because the story’s always gonna be predicable to the one who’s writing it
i love u guys keep on trucking
Making a video, but since its gonna be a while till its ready. I thought it would be fun to post some of the art from it. I love drawing this squad as kids. I want more information on what growing up on Kamino was like for them.