I'm Very Scared To Repost Anybody Cause I Feel Like I'm Copying Their Ideas In Some Way... Is That Bad?...I

A little bit of a redesign of the concept... It's a little messy, but it works....

my will to lean new things at 20 knows no bones...

go chek them out

Lp: I'm sorry about this felix... but rules are rules... And I have a secret to keep... And you know how hard it is to keep secrets... Don't you?

(How can you say no to that face)

Here's the finished sketch sheet cuz.I couldn't figure out what else to put on it

That cart is the only thing that is yours, isn't it?....

( She pulls up to the finish line, and she waits for puffy pants to finish his speech. After some setbacks, send some realizations. She finally came to the conclusion that if she can survive a system crash who said turbo can't, he needs to go... bad... But how to do it... That is the big question. She looks at King Candy, who lands in his cart right next to her. She gets ready to start the race and just speed off....

A couple minutes in, she found herself a little bit of a struggle she was getting passed. But sense King candy has raced in this game longer than she has. He's gonna pass her, "Oh, no, you remember. Last time you tried to pass me," she giggled to herself, and she pulled out a duplicate steering wheel from the dash and threw it behind her to try to slow him down, "woah! You cheat!" she heard him scream, she cackled darkly, and she trusted her lowrider to give her something else to throw, but then coming up to the ice cream mountains king candy manage to pass her, making her hit her own cart in frustration,"honey sugar, lowrider,...huh what is that sound?"Vanellope past her, wait... Isn't she supposed to be in the fungeon...oh nooo... I will not my little kid reset me!... She speeds up into the tunnel to catch them, i need to see the royal racer crash into the abomination of a cart, as king candy got up to attack it driver, last place quickly reached into the dash, to grab something to bash his head with and pulls out a bat, perfect,

"I'm turbo, the greatest racer ever, and i'm not gonna let you or that -" he didn't even get to finish his sentence before he was face first with a bat, the death glitch a copy of him, fizzling with colors of cyan, black and a couple of others, they're from the game. Was standing on top of her lowrider, trusting it to drive itself, with a bat to destroy the last remaining spotlight, before moving on to the rest of the arcade to remove theirs, Vanellope i looked up at the two violent strangers going at each other, almost looking like each other, as the dark one swings at the light one, "death glitch what are you doing?!"..."What does it look like? I am getting rid of the last light in this game! Once I get rid of you, I will get rid of every main character in this arcade so no one will play, and there will be nothing left, then nobody will get attention ever again! Hahaha!" ... After a couple of swings, Turbo tried to back off into his seat, causing the death glitch to climb closer to Vanellope,"i guess this is cyanara, my little glitch!" she said, with so much mockery and viciousness in her tone, as she places her foot on the cart whail still swinging at her rival, attempting to flip it over underneath the two raging carts against it, luckily, the little name calling gave the small child an idea,

As the death glitch is trying to eliminate her copy. She suddenly jerked back into the seat of lowrider, looking over. Seeing that the little glitch had escaped,"You're crazy!"Turbo was already on top of it, trying to catch up to it, out of sight of last place, she tries to speed up, catch up but crashes into the pillar instead, causing her to tumble out. And getting knocked out)

Ok... Random fight contest!

(Pst, i don't know, for their power levels are not really accounted for, and i'm not clear on abilities. So, at this point, it's just a popularity contest,)

A little fun alternate dimension idea... What if the hero was a doctor nefarious in some way... Making the Lombax and a robot... I never got far with it... Oh well... Reverse au?...mix au?... Either way, Captain Qwark is the bad guy and caused the accident. Basically... Now, nervous system and her squishy friend are looking for a way to get back at him and bring peace to the galaxy. Even though he's president now, and she's hiding in a robotic find and cleaning area...

I've been at this for more than a year... And it doesn't look any better...

Feel free to leave me some tips... I don't know what i'm doing

Still work

I think I would like to share a little thing about spiral. Since they eat souls and kind of stuck in a place without many people in it, they tend to starve to death over and over again, until one day a strange platypus just appears... You can just figure this place is just some form of fourth void hell... Starline is not having fun getting chased around by a smoking freight train after their soul, downright, having trouble navigating this strange scattered place, trying to find things to make his situation a little more bearable...