I Wrote A Poem. This Is The First Time I Have Posted Anything Like This So Any And All Feedback Is Appreciated,

i wrote a poem. this is the first time i have posted anything like this so any and all feedback is appreciated, even if you don’t think it’s worth it i would love it. this is just straight from pen to paper in like 10 minutes so it won’t be a masterpiece, but if you see this please let me know what you think.

my mind’s gone mad.

did you notice?

gone by whispers

like soft smoke (tendrils).

my mind went mad.

I did not notice (did you?)

I mourn the normalcy

I never had.

my mind was mad.

for so long (clouded over)

did you notice?

my mind’s gone mad.

the clouds are gone

but my loss remains.

have you noticed?

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2 months ago

It amazes me how the National Park Service is the most vocal department against Fascism. Even the Democrats are a mumble when compared to these park rangers' adamant denouncement and exposing of this administration. Support our bravest federal workers who keep our world one worth living in.

It Amazes Me How The National Park Service Is The Most Vocal Department Against Fascism. Even The Democrats
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2 years ago

as an eldest sibling i am mortified it has taken me almost a decade to see mycroft in this light im gonna go cry now

My aunt: But how can you like Mycroft? He's unpleasant and he always makes messes and he is so full of himself-

Me, on the verge of tears: IT'S ABOUT THE KIN, IT'S ABOUT THE MAKING IT ON HIS OWN, IT'S ABOUT THE INDEPENDENCY, IT'S ABOUT THE LONELINESS, IT'S ABOUT KEEPING THE FAMILY TOGETHER, IT'S ABOUT ABSORBING THE BLOWS OF EMOTIONALLY UNAVAILABLE FAMILY MEMBERS, IT'S ABOUT THE SELF HATRED, IT'S ABOUT BEING THE ONE YOU DON'T NEED TO WORRY ABOUT, IT'S ABOUT KEEPING SECRETS, IT'S ABOUT SURVIVING WHEN YOUR FAMILY IS GOING DOWN-

2 months ago
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3 months ago

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2 years ago

i think if the only two shows to exist were rupauls drag race and hannibal i would be perfectly fine. not mentally but socially.


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2 years ago

father’s day as an eldest daughter who was parentified but also very close to their dad growing up is. complicated to say the least happy father’s day to all u eldest daughters i see u i feel u

2 years ago

"New Folderr"

if you could have a new folder on your computer what would you put in it? ?

"New Folderr"

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2 years ago

sorry for not posting. found myself in a precarious sexual situation, yknow. why do my genitals have to take over my brain my god i am depraved

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