The Classic Betrayer

The Classic Betrayer

The classic betrayer

This is where everyone subtly knows that this guy's going to turn the other way.

The betrayer puts on a show for our heroes - kind, compassionate and supporting at first.

it just so happens that the villainthinks the heros are the bad guys.

make them actually likable.emotionally ruin the hero upon betrayal.

The remorseful traitor

whether he had bad intentions from the start or was deceived by others, the betrayer regrets his choices.

when he realizes his mistakes, it's too late to stop the evil, which introduces guilt.

throw the guilt and shame on the character.

even the protagonist can be a traitor! will others forgive him?

The Double Agent

this type of traitor will keep the readers wondering whether this guy is truly on your side.

keep your readers guessing. is that an evil smirk or a genuine smile? does he really love drinking, or is he just trying to get the hero drugged?

Snape in Harry Potter is a great example.

The guy can be good or bad - just keep balancing the two

Unrealiable narrators

these characters are not entirely betrayers, but horribly misinformed. they can make others appear like traitors - when in truth, they just have it wrong.

pit your narrow-minded narrator against his allies.

these characters are great for misunderstanding plots.

have your narrator do irreversible damage to the hero. would they forgive him?

Tragic betrayers

these are characters, due to their past wounds and trauma, cannot help but betray the group.

they confess the hero's secrets under physical/mental torment and doesn't have the backbone to do otherwise.

these characters can either be pitiful or frustrating would the hero still fight for the betrayer?

Play around with pov

you can have the readers know about the upcomong betrayal by switching points of view, building up anticipation to the moment of realization.

on the flip side, you can change povs in a way that the reader doens't see what's happening at the hero's back.

If you like my blog, buy me a coffee☕ and find me on instagram! 📸

More Posts from Ajkiranwrites and Others

2 months ago

Hi, I love your blog!

Do you have any ideas for archaic words relating to sailors/ships/voyages/ocean?

Archaic Words: Nautical-Related

Frigate under sails (detail)
Ivan Aivazovsky
1838

Avast - a sea term, meaning stop, hold, enough. It always precedes some orders or conversation. Usually used by sailors.

Banyan day - a sea term for those days on which no meat is allowed to the sailors

Bat swain - a sailor

Breechmen - sailors

Calmewe - a kind of sea bird

Cobkey - a punishment by bastinado inflicted on offenders at sea

Doutremere - from beyond the sea

Fitty - a term applied to lands left by the sea

Landfeather - a bay of the sea

Laveer - to work a ship against the wind. An old sea term.

Loom - to appear larger than in reality, as things often do when at sea

Maryn - the sea coast

Nikir - a sea monster

Osprey - the sea eagle

Reeses - waves of the sea

Shamming Abraham - phrase common among soldiers and sailors, used when they counterfeit sickness or infirmity. It was probably derived from the Abraham men of Shakespeare's time, described in King Lear.

Se-stoerre - sea star

Sea nag - a ship

Shere - to run aground, as a ship does

Ship spy - a telescope used on the coast

Slug - a ship which sails badly

Soger - a sea insect that takes the possession of the shell of another fish

Swashway - a deep swampy place in large sands in the sea

Transfret - to pass over the sea

Viage - a voyage, or journey

Source ⚜ More: Notes & References ⚜ Word Lists ⚜ Writing Resources PDFs

Hi, thank you so much! Hope this helps with your writing.

3 months ago

Ah shit my bowling team has unionized

2 years ago

WEBSITES FOR WRITERS {masterpost}

E.A. Deverell - FREE worksheets (characters, world building, narrator, etc.) and paid courses;

Hiveword - Helps to research any topic to write about (has other resources, too);

BetaBooks - Share your draft with your beta reader (can be more than one), and see where they stopped reading, their comments, etc.;

Charlotte Dillon - Research links;

Writing realistic injuries - The title is pretty self-explanatory: while writing about an injury, take a look at this useful website;

One Stop for Writers - You guys... this website has literally everything we need: a) Description thesaurus collection, b) Character builder, c) Story maps, d) Scene maps & timelines, e) World building surveys, f) Worksheets, f) Tutorials, and much more! Although it has a paid plan ($90/year | $50/6 months | $9/month), you can still get a 2-week FREE trial;

One Stop for Writers Roadmap - It has many tips for you, divided into three different topics: a) How to plan a story, b) How to write a story, c) How to revise a story. The best thing about this? It's FREE!

Story Structure Database - The Story Structure Database is an archive of books and movies, recording all their major plot points;

National Centre for Writing - FREE worksheets and writing courses. Has also paid courses;

Penguin Random House - Has some writing contests and great opportunities;

Crime Reads - Get inspired before writing a crime scene;

The Creative Academy for Writers - "Writers helping writers along every step of the path to publication." It's FREE and has ZOOM writing rooms;

Reedsy - "A trusted place to learn how to successfully publish your book" It has many tips, and tools (generators), contests, prompts lists, etc. FREE;

QueryTracker - Find agents for your books (personally, I've never used this before, but I thought I should feature it here);

Pacemaker - Track your goals (example: Write 50K words - then, everytime you write, you track the number of the words, and it will make a graphic for you with your progress). It's FREE but has a paid plan;

Save the Cat! - The blog of the most known storytelling method. You can find posts, sheets, a software (student discount - 70%), and other things;

I hope this is helpful for you!

(Also, check my gumroad store if you want to!)

1 month ago
Uh Hard Disagree With This. Medical Student Damian Wayne Would Be So Fucking Fascinating To Explore (based

Uh hard disagree with this. Medical Student Damian Wayne would be so fucking fascinating to explore (based on his character archetype, growth and also his unusual skillset), followed by Doctor Damian Wayne (ER doc/trauma surgeon is where my money's at):

Firstly, Damian balancing the corruption of Gotham and navigating the system of medical care and the evilness/cruelties embedded and going after those is fascinating. He could solve medical cases in a House MD style fashion (without the pills) AND find organ thieves or provide evidence for serial killers to the Batfam.

Secondly, the comics themselves would be a great exploration of whether this means the Gotham Project ultimately fails to make meaningful change and whether Thomas and Leslie's less violent and community-focused treatment was a better strategy.

Thirdly, a discussion about personal freedom in the face of "destiny" and obligations to vigilantism, and also the conflict of whether Damian would want to return or not, especially because this life is all he's known.

Fourthly, I want to see Dami struggle with obeying laws that violate moral principles and balance his own way of doing things with a team he's forced to operate alongside.

6 months ago

How to create an atmosphere

How to create an atmosphere: Coffee Shop

How to create an atmosphere: Library

How to create an atmosphere: Supermarket

How to create an atmosphere: Train Station

How to create an atmosphere: Club

1 month ago

hello fellow non-Black tumblr users. welcome to my saw trap. if you'd like to leave, please name one (1) Black woman author who is not Maya Angelou, Toni Morrison, bell hooks, Octavia Butler, or N.K. Jemisin. bonus points if she's published a book in the last five years.

1 year ago

Can I engulf each sigh from your starlit mouth until it dissolves into my blood? I swear I can feel it bubble with laughter when I do.


Tags
4 months ago

bring back tumblr ask culture let me. bother you with questions and statements

1 year ago

"Can't wait to see where you take this story" well I can't wait to see where this story takes me either

2 weeks ago
EVERYONE(!) I’m Blazing This Post Because At This Pace We Might Barely Hit 1,000,000 Signatures—or
European Citizens' Initiative
eci.ec.europa.eu
Give your support !

EVERYONE(!) I’m blazing this post because at this pace we might barely hit 1,000,000 signatures—or just fall short. PLEASE reblog this post, no matter where you are from, so we can reach as many EU citizens as possible and end this horrible practice!

  • woofdi
    woofdi liked this · 3 weeks ago
  • c-a-amazing
    c-a-amazing liked this · 1 month ago
  • joypuris
    joypuris liked this · 1 month ago
  • eboyxi
    eboyxi reblogged this · 1 month ago
  • eboyxi
    eboyxi liked this · 1 month ago
  • peantbutter-honeycombs
    peantbutter-honeycombs liked this · 1 month ago
  • ssunl1ght
    ssunl1ght reblogged this · 2 months ago
  • chosotallgf
    chosotallgf liked this · 2 months ago
  • asirenbyanyothername
    asirenbyanyothername liked this · 2 months ago
  • lunassupernova
    lunassupernova liked this · 3 months ago
  • tjgraysworld
    tjgraysworld liked this · 3 months ago
  • it-is-what-it-is-what-it-is
    it-is-what-it-is-what-it-is reblogged this · 3 months ago
  • luckykarmasworld
    luckykarmasworld liked this · 3 months ago
  • kirrarae
    kirrarae liked this · 3 months ago
  • wynters-writings
    wynters-writings liked this · 3 months ago
  • lulumallow6
    lulumallow6 liked this · 4 months ago
  • mystictien
    mystictien liked this · 4 months ago
  • haydenigmatic
    haydenigmatic liked this · 4 months ago
  • roselyn-writing
    roselyn-writing reblogged this · 4 months ago
  • mcsupremacy
    mcsupremacy liked this · 4 months ago
  • jaketopygasm
    jaketopygasm liked this · 5 months ago
  • qrovvbranwen
    qrovvbranwen liked this · 5 months ago
  • starlight-drive-in
    starlight-drive-in liked this · 5 months ago
  • naturallysunkisseddaisy
    naturallysunkisseddaisy reblogged this · 5 months ago
  • grangerthegreat-est23
    grangerthegreat-est23 liked this · 5 months ago
  • petrams
    petrams liked this · 5 months ago
  • friendly-neighborhood-gremlin
    friendly-neighborhood-gremlin liked this · 5 months ago
  • moonlitflames
    moonlitflames liked this · 6 months ago
  • johnnysh0e
    johnnysh0e liked this · 6 months ago
  • rainy-dayz55
    rainy-dayz55 liked this · 6 months ago
  • swagdonutmuffinneck
    swagdonutmuffinneck liked this · 6 months ago
  • vssmtvs
    vssmtvs liked this · 6 months ago
  • magicbystarlight
    magicbystarlight liked this · 6 months ago
  • mltauthor
    mltauthor liked this · 6 months ago
  • dylansjustme
    dylansjustme liked this · 6 months ago
  • jerrgirl003
    jerrgirl003 liked this · 6 months ago
  • ariannalitvin
    ariannalitvin liked this · 6 months ago
  • snake-and-his-dragon
    snake-and-his-dragon reblogged this · 7 months ago
  • blogmissribbons
    blogmissribbons reblogged this · 7 months ago
  • agent6v6
    agent6v6 liked this · 7 months ago
  • sanana4
    sanana4 liked this · 7 months ago
  • midnight-symphonia
    midnight-symphonia reblogged this · 7 months ago
  • midnight-symphonia
    midnight-symphonia liked this · 7 months ago
  • nerdy-chocomallow
    nerdy-chocomallow liked this · 7 months ago
  • convictshipcaptain
    convictshipcaptain liked this · 7 months ago
  • supremecuttlefish
    supremecuttlefish reblogged this · 7 months ago
ajkiranwrites - SphinxofBlackQuartz
SphinxofBlackQuartz

Original Work Primary Blog. Sideblog for fanfics @stickdoodlefriend Come yell at me! | 18+

241 posts

Explore Tumblr Blog
Search Through Tumblr Tags