MY STARTER FIGGY DIED!!!!! This Is The Worse Day Of My Life, First My Eevee Otto Von Dies Before I Can

The “Jayfeather is Rock” theory has to be my favorite warriors theory, but imagine it in an alternate way.

When Jayfeather dies, Jay’s Wing gets to go to StarClan, where he’ll be able to reunite with Half Moon. He can even keep his memories as Jayfeather and he gets to reunite with Hollyleaf and Leafpool.

But Jayfeather himself? He’s thrusted back to the beginning of time, and he has to watch it all over again. He’s not exactly alone; Midnight is there with him, but he just watches as life begins. As the cats gather in the lake territories. As he watches Fallen Leaves die. As he watches Jay’s Wing, the cat he used to be, lead the cats away from the lake. And for decades he is practically alone. It takes so many moons until the cats arrive at the lake, and for the first time in a long time he’s ecstatic. He can see his adoptive parents arrive, and later come back with the rest of the clans.

Moons past, and he realizes it’s time. The Great Battle is almost approaching. He sees his brother in the tunnels for the first time in millenniums. And later, both of his siblings are in the tunnels with him.

And he finally gets to meet Jayfeather.

Playing with the windows error screen some more

French version because my family thinks I'm forgetting how to speak it.

Who's this 🤔💭

I couldn't agree more, it's just worse warrior cats and the average person is not going to enjoy

Mini review of Clouded moon

I was curious about the story, but I just can’t find the right words to explain it.

The writing felt dull, relying too much on telling rather than showing. For example, the explanation of the character’s tragic backstory lacked depth—it was just handed to the reader instead of being woven into the narrative.

I also couldn’t connect with most of the relationships, like Wildfur and Spottedshadow. They constantly talk about how much they love each other, yet their bond never truly comes to life on the page.

As for the deaths, they were painfully predictable. Instead of feeling sad, I was just frustrated—it all felt like forced emotional manipulation rather than natural storytelling.

Their world is barely explained. Sure, it’s like Warriors but with different names, but if I knew nothing about Warriors, I wouldn’t feel invested in the story.

I shouldn’t have to pay for your Patreon just to understand the story you’re trying to sell me.

Tenelle, I love your artwork, but writing novels just isn’t your strong suit.

Avalon, seriously, man—why didn’t you say anything about the prose?

I miss a vision of shadows so much, avos would never put tawnypelt and crowfeather together, avos had good writing, avos was the best arc, bring back whoever was writing avos.

yeah i'm mad

i believe that, with the power of friendship, we as a community can normalize rootspring hate

can this dude get a break