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Prompt: “Who are you? Show yourself!”
The job had gone wrong. It was supposed to be a small break-in. Get in, grab the artifact and leave. They had practiced it multiple times, and it had gone flawlessly. It all went wrong when they did it for real.
They had found the window, gotten into the house, and found the artifact. Or where it should have been.
“Where is it?” Chief whispered. “We’ve been watching this house for days, and no one has touched it.”
“What do we do now?” Clara asked. “Do we leave or look for it?”
Chief paced back and forth fiddling with his hair.
“Chief what do we-”
“Shh, I’m thinking.”
Clara nodded and sat down on the floor. Chief kept pacing, switching between fiddling with his hair and his belt.
Clara sat for what felt like hours before Chief stopped pacing.
“Did you hear that?”
Clara stood up. “Hear what?”
Chief didn’t respond, and they both fell silent again. The faint sound of footsteps echoed down the hall.
“We have to go. Now.” Chief grabbed Clara’s arm and took off running. They retraced their steps through the house.
Once they got to the window, both out of breath, they stopped.
“What’s going on? Who is that?” Clara knelt breathing heavily.
Chief, still holding onto her arm, pulled her up. “We have to get out of here. I’ll explain later.”
Clara nodded and opened the window. Chief let go of her arm, and she crawled out. Chief crawled out after her, and they both climbed down to the backyard.
Chief pointed to the forest that surrounded the house, Clara nodded, and they took off running.
“Clara go to the right. I’ll go to the left.”
“Why? Shouldn’t we stay together?”
“They want me. You’ll be safer if we split up.”
“Who are-“ Clara stopped. She didn’t want to leave Chief’s side he had helped her through so much, finding her on the street after her parents died and raising her like she was one of his own. Tears started to fill her eyes.
Chief grabbed her by the shoulders. “I will see you at home. I promise. I will not abandon you.”
Chief pulled her into a hug and wiped the tears from her eyes. Chief let go of her and took off running. Clara wiped her hands on her pants and ran in the opposite direction.
Clara’s lungs started to ache. Not being able to run anymore she sat down on a nearby log. She closed her eyes and focused on getting air back into her lungs.
Who was chasing them? The family that lives in the house was out of town for another week. They would have seen the family car outside and would have called the job off.
Where was the artifact? It was their ticket out of the city. Chief promised Clara that they would move to the country and live a normal life.
Her thoughts were cut off by the sound of approaching footsteps. She jumped to her feet. “Who are you? Show yourself!”
The footsteps stopped. Clara cautiously took a step towards the sound. She saw a large shadow standing in the distance. “Chief is that you?”
“Nope.” A gruff voice said. The figure started to run towards her.
She yelped and ran. The footsteps were getting closer. Clara, ignoring her screaming lungs, kept pushing forward.
She wanted Chief to be with her. He said that this guy would go after him, not her. She closed her eyes for a second pushing back the tears that were forming in her eyes. She opened her eyes and jumped over a log. She almost cleared it, but her back foot caught the edge, and she fell hard on her stomach.
She curled into a ball and tried to get her breath back. The footsteps got closer and closer until she could see black boots standing right in front of her.
“You must be the new sidekick.” A rough hand grabbed her by the hair and pulled her to her feet until she was face to face with him.
“Who are you?” Clara clawed at the hand holding her hair.
“I was the last sidekick. Until he found you and pushed me aside, now I’m going to make him pay. I thought the artifact would be enough until I saw you.” His lips parted into a wide smile. “We are going to have so much fun.”
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Posting again because this is so important and it has helped me out so much!
I love this quote so much. It is such a good reminder. Thanks Jack, for all your PMA, and you want to help people. I love it so much!!
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Requested: Yes. Anon asks, “5 Anti and fem!reader”
Fandom: JackSepticEye
Pairing: Antisepticeye/Reader
Pronouns: She/Her
Warnings: Violence
A/N: The prompt is~ “Teach me to fight.”… Enjoy!
(Y/N) shoved the door open, throwing her bag onto the couch. She stomped through the house, slamming things as she worked in the kitchen. Angry was an understatement and Anti knew this as he ventured into the kitchen. He leaned against the archway and watched, in amusement, as she shoved things around huffing angrily when things knocked over.
“Bad day?” Anti chuckled as she knocked the tea leaves over.
“Bite me.” she snapped at him, grabbing the broom to sweep up the mess. Anti’s grinned widened, raising an eyebrow at the suggestion, thus causing (Y/N)’s glare to harden.
“That can be arranged, Doll.” Anti purred, going to wrap his arms around her waist. (Y/N) slammed her palms against the countertop, surprising Anti.
“I am so sick of perverts!” (Y/N) growled pushing back to get Anti off of her. She turned to face said entity, a look of determination set in her expression. “This is the fifth time someone has tried to get with me. I’m done with it, the next person who touches me is going to get body slammed.”
“Doll, you can barely move the coffee table without help. There is no way you are going to body slam a grown man… But if you send them my way…” Anti’s voice dropped at the end of his sentence, not liking the fact that people were trying to get with (Y/N).
“Teach me to fight.” (Y/N) stated, trying to leave no room for protesting. Anti scoffed and shook his head, following the human as she went to the living room.
“Absolutely not, Doll.”
“I wasn’t asking.” she grunted as she attempted to push their couch to the wall. Anti rolled his eyes and grabbed her arm, pulling her against him.
“I wasn’t debating, either, Dollface. I’m not going to teach you to fight, you got me, you don’t need to learn.” Anti stared directly into her eyes, as if he were trying to read her mind; trying to transfer his thoughts into her brain and make her obey him.
“Anti.” (Y/N) said, her tone turning sour as she glared up at him. She never liked his mind games. “Please. I want to know how to defend myself. I don’t want to depend on you.” she took the sweet route, but the gears in her mind were turning.
“I want you to depend on me, Doll. Yo-” Anti started, but was cut off by a soft fist hitting the side of his face. The room fell silent and Anti let out a small growl.
“Teach. Me.” (Y/N) hissed, bringing her other fist up, trying to connect it to his face. The air turned heavy as Anti dodged the hit, ducking around her and grabbing her wrists.
“Doll.” Anti’s body glitched against hers. (Y/N) struggled in his grasp, her right foot coming down on his. The lights from the ceiling fan burst as (Y/N) landed a punch to his stomach. Anti grunted, side stepping her next swing and pushing up against her, shoving her into the floor. He stood over her, anger written across his face. (Y/N) stood, crouching into a fighting positions, as Anti shoved the couch back against the wall.
“That all you got?”
“You have no idea, Doll.”
"You call that a family?" My father sneered at the loved ones I had surrounded myself with. "This is your last chance to make the right choice. Come back with me now, and there will be limited consequences. If you don't, you are no child of mine any longer."
I can't believe I didn't post this sooner!!!
Thank you @jacksoopticboop for the fantastic art!!
I also really enjoyed the little notes that came with the art!
You're the best, and I hope your day is full of PMA!!
I was sick for all of Dick’s birthday, so it took me longer than usual to do this for him! Happy (one day late) birthday my most wonderful of boys, thanks for brightening my life.
IF YOURE EGYPTIAN AND LGBTQ+ GET OFF ANY QUEER DATING SITES, THE POLICE ARE TRACKING AND HUNTING PEOPLE DOWN AGAIN. DELETE YOUR ACCOUNTS.
Hey all, here’s a quick tip about showing the passage of short amounts of time in a scene. I see a lot of beats like this:
She hesitated
He paused
A few seconds later
There was a long silence
He waited for her to answer
She didn’t respond
Instead of telling us there’s a brief moment of silence or pause in your scene, try showing us by creating the feeling that time has passed through action, description, or inner monologue. Here are a few examples.
Before:
“Are you coming or not?”
He waited for her to answer, but she didn’t respond.
“Clare? Did you hear me?”
“Huh?”
After:
“Are you coming or not?”
Clare scrolled through her phone, her face illuminating with a eerie blue glow.
“Clare? Did you hear me?”
“Huh?”
Before:
Jared lingered at the suspect’s front gate. If this guy didn’t answer Jared’s questions, he was screwed.
“Hey you!” a voice shouted. “Get off my property!”
Jared hesitated. Finally, he turned to face the man. “I’m afraid I can’t do that.”
After:
Jared lingered at the suspect’s front gate. If this guy didn’t answer Jared’s questions, he was screwed.
“Hey you!” a voice shouted. “Get off my property!”
Jared patted his holster. He had a gun, but he certainly didn’t want to use it. Taking a deep breath, he turned to face the man. “I’m afraid I can’t do that.”
Not only does creating a pause instead of describing a pause allow your reader to feel the moment more vividly, it gives you a chance to explain what exactly that pause is about. People hesitate, pause, don’t respond, etc. for all kinds of reasons. Give us as much insight as you can into your weird quiet moment.
Of course, you don’t need to do this every single time. Sometimes it’s fine to say “he paused” or “the room was quiet for a moment”—it could be the best choice for that scene. But look back through your draft and see if you’ve used those “telling” descriptions more often than you needed to. If so, try to create the feeling of a pause—perhaps one that gives the reader a bit more information—using these techniques.
Hope this helps!
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