Here's The Description Of My Character!

Here's the description of my character!

They're a major character in one of my stories, The Moon's Fragments.

It's not Murder Drones related despite what my blog's mainly about. But still, I wanted to post one of my writing stuff since I rarely write my ideas out, almost all of my ideas are just stuck in my mind.

Howhere, please give any feedback on my writing skills!乁[ ^^; ]ㄏ

Starriala, an ancient lanky moth hellhound who was cursed to be immortal by the Creator. Thick pale blue fur coating their cream belly, golden spikes and rib bones poking out from the thin skin of back and legs downward. The countless dark golden legs running along their open wound sitting once their belly, revealing hollowness in only a dark sphere hiding in their crest as if it’s acting as their organs. The golden canine-like skull, mandibles jaws clicking every time they speak, long canine teeth poking forward for ripping a chunk off, a long forked tongue would flicker out and in like a snake to taste the air. The golden spikes hidden under the thick cheek fur. Huge two golden horns sitting once their head, covered in thorns. Dark brown eyes seem gloomy and lonely. Four small dark brown-golden moth wings almost hidden under their thick fur. When bleeding, gold weeping and burning. Bony appearance, shoulders budging noticeably under the thick fur, narrow waist with a ridiculous ratio of their huge crest. A tail armored in the golden scales that turns dark brown as it continues down to the tip, pale golden stripes breaking at the edge of protecting scales.

I will post more about their lore and why they're cursed to be immortal by the Creator, the greater being created the universe itself later. Probably the next day or a few days? I dunno, depending on how I feel comfortable with my writing style.