a brozone blast from the past (also sorry for making it emo at the endš)
*sounds of Eda whooping and hollering in the bg*
Image description: digital art of Raine from The Owl House, wearing a yellow shirt with a lemon pattern on it. They have scars from possession and receding white hair, and they're rubbing the back of their neck with a slightly flustered smile. End description. Description by anistarrose.
Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says āIām madā but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way youāre only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Donāt overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
āMoment of truth, Hankā
What happens if connor and hank already built a relationship when connor suddenly goes red. A lil comic i drew back then on my dbh high and felt nostalgic so uploading it now.
HEY DID YOU KNOW THAT YOU'RE ONLINE???
AND SOMEHOW MY WORDS APPEARED ON YOUR SCREEN
THE CHANCES OF THAT ARE ASTRONOMICALLY LOW YET SOMEHOW YOU'RE READING MY SENTENCES
HELLO PERSON I DON'T KNOW, YOU'RE WONDERFUL, HAVE AN AMAZING DAY!!
State-of-art androids are something else.
Bonus:
the employment trilogy