Moon 3 - Part 1

Moon 3 - Part 1

A collage-style comic.
The title reads: "MOON 3 - THE FORGOTTEN HOUSE - Morning"
The first panel shows three cats standing in front of a decrepit house.
Babyleg- a large tabby cat with a tear in one ear- has his back to the camera. 
Approaching Babyleg from offscreen are Longpaw- a small grey cat carrying a bag of beef jerky- and Gutterrat- a tall tortoiseshell cat carrying a dead rat. Gutterrat has some small scrapes on her.
Babyleg is saying: “Ho there, clanmates! Oh— strike me lucky, little one– good find.”
Text reads: "Babyleg sniffed at Longpaw’s ‘catch’ deeply– theatrically. Gutterrat would have laughed, at Longpaw’s age. Longpaw did not."

The next panel shows babyleg with his paws clasped and a happy expression, in front of a picture of a bag of beef jerky. 

Text reads: “How I’ve missed this human dross– smell that? That’s nothing your Starclan ever meant for cats t’eat. Heavenly stuff– good catch indeed!”
A collage-style comic.
At the top of the page, dialogue reads "...thanks." next to a talking head of Longpaw looking irritated.
Text below it reads: "Longpaw’s ears flattened, a little. Her eyes slid sideways, trying to catch Gutterrat’s."

The next panel shows Gutterrat in front of a thought bubble that  takes up most of the panel. The words in it are hand-written and hard to make out; they're mostly discussing difficulties with the clan being unable to fight and hunt enough, and not being sure what to do in an emergency.
Gutterrat has a 'thinking' pose.

The next panel shows Gutterrat looking surprised at the thought bubble pops. She says "Oh! “Yeah! Uh– nice job, Longpaw.”

Below, text reads: "Did Longpaw’s ears droop, a little? Gutterrat blinked, jarred out of her thoughts. She ached, all over– rat-bites, and little claw-marks. Her jaw sore, her neck. Eyes like the roads in wintertime; dry salt crust. That wouldn’t do. Not with the two of them, looking at her that way. She shoved her ears forward– hadn’t realized that she’d let them droop. "

“Well! A feast here, and I’m starving. Does anybody want first bite?”

Finally, a thought bubble comes from a talking head of babyleg, looking embarrassed. He's thinking "Wait, I actually gotta eat this now… wonder if I can convince Gutterrat to trade with me. The stuff tastes like hot asphalt…"

Gutterrat’s friend says nice things about Longpaw, but it just makes Gutterrat feel guilty.

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Moon 3, Part 1

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Moon 3, Part 1
Moon 3, Part 1
Moon 3, Part 1

“Stop breathing on me.”

“I’m not anywhere near you, Fogpaw.”

“You are, because you’re close enough to be breathing on me.”

StarClan help her.

“What’s your problem?” Moonpaw asks, unable to keep claws of exasperation from sharpening her voice. She’s not anywhere near him. They’ve been walking side by side for ages, up this horrible, hot mountain to the highest edge of their territory, under the horrible, blazing sun, and only now he’s going to fuss that she’s been beside him this entire time?

“What’s your problem?” He mocks in a poor imitation of Moonpaw’s meow, sticking his tongue out at the end of his sentence. 

Moonpaw scoffs. The fur along her back is so warm it feels as though it’s been set aflame under the full force of the greenleaf sun, and her paws ache with the near-vertical climb up harsh ground. Short on patience, she lifts a paw and bats Fogpaw with it. He should consider himself lucky she kept her claws sheathed.

Fogpaw whirls on her, astonished and angry, and whaps her with a paw of his own. Her ears flatten and her fur bristles as she rears back, tail fluffed up to twice its size.

“Seriously, what is wrong with you?”

“You hit me first!”

“Because you’re being an idiot!”

“Well, if you would stop stepping all over me–”

“FINE!” Moonpaw screeches. A few songbirds lift from the sparse trees that cling to the cliffside, startled. “If I’m just so in your way, I’ll get out of your fur!”

“GOOD!” Fogpaw yowls back. “I’m going hunting by myself!”

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Angry tears gathering in the corners of her eyes, she crouches down in defeat. She can’t do this. She can’t do this – pretending that everything is fine, walking in some random direction and hoping for a miracle. She’s walked every inch of this territory since her earliest apprentice days. The best place for a camp was drowned in rocks and rubble. They’re not going to find another one.

Despair sinks quick claws into her chest, overwhelms her with the thought, I wish StarClan had buried me, too.

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An ear-splitting yowl cuts through the air. The rabbit’s ears go up, eyes round and frightened, and it bounds away. Alarmed, Moonpaw’s ears also fly up, head swiveling in the direction of the noise.

Fogpaw.

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