L. V., i found this poem staring back at me from across a busy road
L. V., i found this poem on a beer bottle cap you tossed across the room
L. V., i found this poem in a local paper's obituaries
Feedback for your writing project (sorry this took so long)
I'm not good at writing or giving reviews that's why I'm sending this anonymously but your words are always beautiful and heartwrenching. I think it's generous of you to take the time to listen to other people's stories and write them a poem. This includes people like me who don't write but have a lot on my mind and sometimes I want a poem that I can relate to haha
Thank you and just keep writing. And no criticism from me on the technical level because like I said I'm not a writer. I hope this feedback is okay!
No, this is perfect! Thank you so much. I love listening to people's stories and writing them something based on those experiences. I just get worried sometimes that I might not have been able to capture what they wanted, or do their story justice, as some stories people have sent me, I haven't gone through personally, so I'm glad to hear this. Again, thank you <3
L. V., i found this poem at the tip of your lit cigarette
L. V., i found this poem lost at sea, bloated with caffeine
L. V., i found this poem in the right place at the right time with the right people
L. V., i found this poem flickering off, on, off, on
L. V., an almost haiku [i found this poem in my drafts, where it should have remained (pt. 2)]
your page is like going to a museum; each post like a painting. Specifically the ones you weave your poems with classical paintings. i can go over the details for a long while. it feels like taking a magnifying glass to a miniature work of art to fully appreciate the little touches; and when i step back, i see the whole painting -- the bigger picture. thank you for the experience.
This is far too lovely. Thank you, dear stranger. You made my heart feel a little less heavy today.
L. V., i found this poem washed up on shore
Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.
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