L. V., Something I Wrote A Decade Ago

Detail of "Young Painter at His Easel" by Théodore Géricault (French, 1791-1824)
you fell in love with an artist
who covered up white lie after white lie
like they were blank canvases

with raspberry sunsets and ocean blue
eyes, sometimes with midnight forests

that waited in still silence for fires to
devour them because it’s the only way
for them to ever light up.

- L. V.
Detail of "The Painter in his Studio" by Francois Boucher (French, 1703-1770)
don’t fall in love with an artist.
they collect tears to wipe excess rain
bows off their brushes. they’d collect yours
to wipe their hands clean.

- L. V.
Detail of "A Painter at Work" by Paul Cezanne (French, 1839-1906)
i fell in love with an artist once,
who punched fault lines into my heart
and concealed them with red finger paint.

he hung it up to dry and everyone called it
beautiful.

- L. V.

L. V., something i wrote a decade ago

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11 months ago

Enjoyed reading the book of strangers. My favorites are Chrysanthemum for part 1 and a toss up between Snapdragon and Winterberry in part 2. I wish I was able to send in my story too.

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing with me your favourites. As for a part 3, maybe I'll just keep the submissions open? I won't give a deadline this time, and just have the collection out once I have gotten enough requests. I'd love to read your story as well :)

Same as before, just include an alias or let me know if you prefer to remain anonymous.


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11 months ago

I love your 'in my drafts' and 'combing through my old poems' posts because as a non-writer (is that even a thing?) it's interesting to see like it's the behind the scenes of a movie. The drafts are especially intriguing. They feel raw and like I'm not supposed to be seeing it but you're letting us take a peek of your writing process. It feels like a secret.

It's a thing now, haha! Thank you for telling me this. I was very hesitant posting those because they might not be pretty enough or something along those lines. But I adore your description. I call it my "poetic autopsy" of sorts, but I like the behind-the-scenes analogy better. And that's the "feeling" I was aiming for with the drafts. To feel "raw", unedited, the emotions and thoughts allowed to run free, finally untethered—and if any of them come back to me, I'll be here to welcome them with open arms.


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Original Writings by L. V.

Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.

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