šsend this to the twelve nicest people you know or who seem to have a good heart and if you get five back you must be pretty awesome.š
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Aw, this is so sweet! Thank you! š
L. V., i found this poem whilst staring at your favourite painting for too long that the lines started to blur and the colours looked like mud
L. V., i found this poem falling like lightning from heaven
L. V., i found this poem in the backwaters of your subconscious
L. V., i found this poem running down the butter knifeĀ like blueberry jam
L. V., an almost haiku [i found this poem in my drafts, where it should have remained (pt. 2)]
L. V., i found this poem wilting in the garden
L. V., i found this poem on my last day as a child
Feedback for your writing project (sorry this took so long)
I'm not good at writing or giving reviews that's why I'm sending this anonymously but your words are always beautiful and heartwrenching. I think it's generous of you to take the time to listen to other people's stories and write them a poem. This includes people like me who don't write but have a lot on my mind and sometimes I want a poem that I can relate to haha
Thank you and just keep writing. And no criticism from me on the technical level because like I said I'm not a writer. I hope this feedback is okay!
No, this is perfect! Thank you so much. I love listening to people's stories and writing them something based on those experiences. I just get worried sometimes that I might not have been able to capture what they wanted, or do their story justice, as some stories people have sent me, I haven't gone through personally, so I'm glad to hear this. Again, thank you <3
L. V., i found this poem as i swept the confetti away
Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.
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