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2 years ago

I really hated this girl in my class and we kept exchanging notes with various threats of violence on them but then on a Zoom call I saw that she kept a bunch of them pinned on her wall with little hearts around them and I got the biggest crush on her after that.


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1 year ago
PokΓ©mon Hybrid Ingo And Emmet
PokΓ©mon Hybrid Ingo And Emmet
PokΓ©mon Hybrid Ingo And Emmet
PokΓ©mon Hybrid Ingo And Emmet
PokΓ©mon Hybrid Ingo And Emmet

PokΓ©mon Hybrid Ingo and Emmet

I finished the models only at the expense of my joints, sadly couldn’t get a good pic of them together as I was by myself. It was fun to see them move in an MMD world and would love to try and record them dancing :)


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2 years ago

oh my god I killed him


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2 years ago

Would be asleep right now, but there are Fictional Characters to imagine in emotional situations. You know how it is.

2 years ago
Year Of The Bunny

year of the bunny


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2 years ago
We’ve Had Our Fair Share Of Tumblr Sexymen On This Site, But I Think It’s Time To Usher In A New

we’ve had our fair share of tumblr sexymen on this site, but i think it’s time to usher in a new eraΒ 

1 year ago
No Spoons Left Only Knives πŸ”ͺπŸ”ͺπŸ”ͺ

No spoons left only knives πŸ”ͺπŸ”ͺπŸ”ͺ

2 years ago

I’m LITERALLY going insane


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1 year ago

Some critical rules for writing coherent genre fiction, courtesy of my writing teacher, who is very wise. I don't pretend to have mastered all of these, but their application can do wonders for a story, their lack can cripple it:

Employ the causal chain - every action must be connected to what comes before and after. Each action and beat needs to have impact. They don't all need to be shown but the author needs to know what they are. It is impossible to build suspense without this principle. Things can't happen "just because" or there's no reason for the audience to become engaged with your sequence of events or do things like make predictions. All subsequent rules follow from this principle.

When showing a new type of fictional magic or science, you must show it work before you can show it break. For example, if a character has the ability to summon objects into their hand, we need to see them do so successfully and see how it works, before we see it break at a critical moment during the climax. Otherwise, the audience can't be expected to follow why this situation is unusual because they don't know how it works during normal circumstances.

When claiming a character is good at something, you must show them succeeding at it before you show them failing at it during a moment of pressure. Otherwise, we don't believe you when you establish your character's competence or badassery. For example, when saying your character is an excellent military commander, we need to see them win a fight using those skills and tactics. We can't open with a fight they lose, or else the character and author lose credibility. By all means, show the experienced hero/military leader/ruler/assassin/mage etc break down during a moment of intense pressure, fall down sobbing in terror at a truly insurmountable foe, or otherwise fail to meet the moment, but don't do this before we've seen them succeed at least once, or the moment loses impact.

During the build-up of tension, coincidences should hurt the hero and help the antagonist. This plays into the causal chain rule. Coincidences that help the hero feel cheap. Coincidences that help the villain raise the tension.

Every beat, whenever possible, should be connected to conscious action by central characters (hero, love interest, or villain). The more events are connected to purposeful action by key characters, the more satisfying the causal chain for the reader.

Avoid things that happen "just because" whenever possible. You can have one or two, sure, but the more often things happen "just because" the less interesting the story is, especially if those "just because" moments are core to the story. Fiction is not real life. Audiences are drawn to stories where purposeful actions dictate the success or failure of the characters.


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