What are the stages of drafts? I'm trying to write my own book but I dont know how to draft properly and I feel like I'm gonna be stuck in a gutter if I don't know
Yesssssssssssssss someone finally asked it!!!
I’ve been waiting for the perfect opportunity to explain this and show everybody my inverted pyramid :D :D :D
I present, The Inverted Pyramid of Revising a Book
Now I’ll explain each section of the inverted pyramid:
THE FIRST DRAFT
This should be self-explanatory. You write the first draft. For novels, 75-150,000+ words of the world inside your head.
PLOT, CONTENT, SCENES, AND MAJOR CHARACTERS
Go back and fix it all up. Did you tell the story you wanted to tell? Did you include scenes and events that add up to the conclusion you present?
Are there any unnecessary scenes you could delete, or scenes that are redundant to other scenes? Get rid of them. If this means entire chapters have to go, wave bye-bye.
Do your main characters have believable back stories and arcs, and do they act appropriately in character at all times?
Is there any point in time when your characters do something that they literally WOULD NOT DO? Change that up.
WORLD-BUILDING, CHARACTERIZATION, HONING IN PLOT POINTS
Now pay attention to the deeper aspects of the story. Delve into the world your characters live in. Do they react appropriately? Does any part of society influence them more than others?
What does your world look like? Delve into the setting. The cultures, the technology, the history.
Work with your secondary characters and how they interact with your main characters. What role do they serve overall? Does the main character’s journey affect them at all, or vice versa?
Tighten up plot points. Stay concise if possible.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE, FLOW AND PACING OF SCENES
Now that the major parts of your story have been patted down, you can begin focusing on the technical stuff. Start broad.
Do you have redundant sentences? Do you start multiple sentences the same way?
Throw in short sentences.
Drop the pronoun from the beginning of a sentence every now and then.
Use commas instead of ‘and’ if you find you use ‘and’ a lot.
Does the flow of sentences and paragraphs fit with the tone of the scene?
Chop sentences apart. Use quick, sharp words.
Or combine sentences and flowery language and soft words.
BETA READER CRITIQUES AND SUGGESTIONS
Now that you’ve really patted this thing down, find people willing to read your work (hopefully for free).
Ask them to point out inconsistencies. Are they confused by anything?
Beta readers can tell you when things are boring or exciting. They’ll laugh. They’ll fangirl. They’ll beg you for more chapters.
Your brain is soft from so much revising. Beta readers are fresh, and will pick out things you’ve glossed over from seeing it so many times.
Shake things up and host a video chat for you and your betas! It’s a great way to make friends :)
PUNCTUATION AND MISSING WORDS
NOWWWWW you’ve finished all the major revisions and your story makes sense!!! All that’s left to do is get the broom and sweep it up (or the vacuum cleaner, or generate a black hole from the Large Hadron Collider to suck out all the errors because that’s super-effective**).
This is the nitty gritty stuff, and I highly recommend either forcing yourself to read really, really slow, or better yet, read your book out loud, start to finish.
You’ll trip up over misplaced commas and periods.
You’ll literally hear when a sentence is awkward.
Your brain will get confused when there’s a missing word.
Fill in the gaps, hammer down the boards, tidy up the place like you’ve got guests coming over.
THE FINAL DRAFT
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OMG IT’S FINISHED AND YOU CAN SHARE IT WITH THE WORLD AND BUY PHYSICAL COPIES THAT YOU CAN HOLD AND SMELL AND RUB ALL OVER YOUR FACE AND DRAW IN AND DOG-EAR AND TOTE AROUND TO SHOW PEOPLE AND SIGN AUTOGRAPHS AND BECOME YOUR OWN LITTLE CELEBRITY!!!
Email the newspaper (I’ve appeared multiple times).
Email the local TV station (I’ve appeared on live TV).
Email book talk radio shows (I’ve had a Q&A for an hour on live radio).
……..Marketing is hard.
I hope that helps!
N.B. **please do not ask CERN for permission to use the Large Hadron Collider to create black holes that suck out all the errors in your book. You’ll look silly, and you might destroy Earth in the process.
Tuesday Tips - “Don’t just stand there!” A surprisingly simple yet challenging exercise. Try to draw as many standing poses of a simple character. Try not using props or things to lean on. It will make the exercise more fulfilling. Go through your first ideas quickly. Get those out so you can start thinking more specifically about how a character would behave or feel if he/she was cold, impatient, worried, late, hurt, angry, etc. We often forget that the whole body is engaged in expressing a feeling. Also, more technically, it forces you think of weight distribution (makes your poses more solid and believable). As always, stay loose and do it fast to surprise yourself with what you come up with. Norm #grizandnorm #tuesdaytips #100tuesdaytips #dontjuststandthere #tuesdaytipexercise
Good morning, New Year’s night survivors, good luck if you’re still to face it \ or it’s still going on. I’m watching the apocalypse outside my window and hope for more fun and less fatalities. 2017′s been a bitch. Awwwkay. You know I’m pretty sure that Murdoc’s actual father is Keith fucking Richards, so I found a few high-quality pics of old fella and gave them a gentle treatment, they look like real-life photos of Murdoc now. This is my gift for you. Hashtag #KeefEdits if you repost these anywhere! Thanks! Also, Jamie has really nice tattoos and I appreciate them. Happy New Year!
Please write stories that are problematic.
Stories need conflict.
Write them to show what’s healthy. Write them to show what’s unhealthy.
I see so many people telling writers to avoid anything that could be problematic, like writing about it is supporting it. They fail to see the importance of writing with depth and meaning.
Writing has always been about conveying thoughts and ideas without fear of censorship. Being able to present problematic situations in a healthy way is important.
𝘙𝘢𝘪𝘯𝘥𝘳𝘰𝘱𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘧𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘭𝘶𝘭𝘭𝘢𝘣𝘺
Same argument here!
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binned, all colours in one .package file
I used Poppet’s textures as a base
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This is the timeline that I use when I’m writing nine times out of ten
2016- Reinhardt Wilhelm is born
2017-Ana Amari is born
2020- Torbjorn Lindholm is born
~2021-Gabriel Reyes is born
~2022–Jack Morrison is born
[2027-Serena “Veil” Jones is born]
2028- Mako “Roadhog” Rutledge is born
~2036- Mei-Ling Zhou is born
2038- Hanzo Shimada is born
2037- Jesse McCree is born
Angela Ziegler is born
2039- Genji Shimada is born
[2039: Naomi “Cherub” Williams is born]
[2040: Ava “Gadget” Kelly is born]
~2043- Amelie ‘Widowmaker’ Lacroix is born
2044- Fareeha “Pharah” Amari is born
~2046- The Omnic Crisis Began
Overwatch was founded, enlisting Gabriel Reyes, Jack Morrison, Ana Amari, Reinhardt Wilhelm, Torbjorn Lindholm and Lio
2046- Sombra is born
Bastion is made
2047- Winston is born
2048- Satya “Symmetra” Vaswani is born
Aleksandra “Zarya” Zaryanova is born
2050-Omnic Crisis ends
2050- Lucio Correia dos Santos is born
Lena “Tracer” Oxton is born
2051- Jamison “Junkrat” Fawkes is born
~2053-2055- Sombra is taken in by Los Muertos
~2054- The Omnium is destroyed in the Australian Outback
~2056- “The Reaper” starts appearing
Mercy joins Overwatch
McCree is forced to join Blackwatch
This picture is taken
2056- Tekhartha Zenyatta is either made or gets consciousness
South Korea is attack by omnic monstrosity from the sea
2057- Hana “D.Va” Song is born
~2060- A polar storm hits Ecopoint:Antarctica and Mei and her team are forced into cryostasis
~2066- Ana is shot by Widowmaker and presumed dead
~2069-2070- Allegations against Overwatch are made
Blackwatch is revealed to the public
2070- Jack Morrison and Gabriel Reyes are caught in the explosion at the Switzerland Overwatch headquarters, presumed dead
~2070-2071- Overwatch is shut down
~2071- Mei is discovered in cryostasis
Mei saves a nest of endangered arctic wildlife
Lucio leads an uprising against the Vishkar Corporation
~2073- D.Va becomes the #1 StarCraft player in the world
~2075- D.Va joins MEKA