Commander Fox x Reader X Commander Thorn
Thorn didn’t storm. That wasn’t his style. He walked with purpose, armor humming low with motion, cape swaying behind him like a whisper of discipline.
But Hound noticed.
He was lounging against a supply crate near the barracks entrance, tossing a ration bar to Grizzer, who promptly ignored it in favor of chewing on a ruined training boot.
“Evening, Commander,” Hound said, biting back a grin. “You walk like someone just voted to cut rations for clones with sense.”
Thorn didn’t answer. He brushed past, stopped, and then turned around so sharply Hound blinked.
“Why the hell does she smile like that?” Thorn muttered.
Hound blinked again. “…Pardon?”
“Senator,” Thorn said curtly. “The senator. She smiles like she doesn’t care that we’re built for war. Like we’re not walking weapons. Like she’s not afraid of what we are.”
Grizzer let out a soft woof.
Hound tilted his head. “So… what’s the problem?”
“The problem,” Thorn said, pacing now, his helmet under one arm, “is that I find myself caring about her smile. Noticing it. Waiting for it. The nerve of her—walking between two commanders like it’s nothing. Like we’re not trained to see everything as a threat. Like she’s not a threat.”
“To what? Your assignment?” Hound asked, amused. “Or your emotional stability?”
Thorn glared. Grizzer whined, wandered over, and bumped his head into Thorn’s shin. He reached down and idly scratched behind the mastiff’s ears.
“She got under your skin,” Hound said, chewing on the stem of a stim-pop. “Happens to the best of us. She’s clever. Looks good in those robes. Has a backbone of beskar. What’s not to notice?”
“I don’t want to notice.”
“Ah, but you do.”
Thorn didn’t reply.
He sat down heavily on the bench beside Hound, setting his helmet down beside him.
“I shouldn’t even be thinking about this. About her.”
“She flirt with you?”
Thorn hesitated. “Not… obviously.”
“But enough to make Fox irritated.”
Thorn raised a brow. “You noticed that too.”
“Please. Fox’s expression didn’t change, but the man started walking closer to her like she was carrying his damn tracking chip.” Hound chuckled. “Bet he doesn’t even realize he’s doing it.”
They sat in silence for a minute.
Grizzer dropped the training boot in front of Thorn and wagged his tail.
Thorn stared at the mangled leather. “That’s about how my brain feels.”
Hound laughed. “Commander, you need sleep.”
“I need a reassignment.”
“You need to admit she’s under your skin and figure out how not to let it compromise your professionalism.”
Thorn exhaled slowly.
“Can’t let it show.”
“Good,” Hound nodded. “Now come inside before Grizzer starts thinking you’ve become a chew toy too.”
Thorn stood, gave the mastiff a final scratch behind the ears, and retrieved his helmet.
He didn’t say another word—but the weight in his steps had shifted. Just a little.
Not lighter. Not heavier.
Just more aware.
⸻
The city was unusually quiet that evening. The hum of speeders far below faded beneath the hush of twilight. The Coruscant skyline glowed, glass and durasteel kissed by soft reds and purples.
Fox didn’t linger in beautiful places.
He was there on duty, posted near the upper balcony where the senator had stepped out “just for a breath.” He hadn’t planned to engage, only observe, protect, return.
But she hadn’t gone back inside.
She leaned against the railing, alone, hair pinned up loosely, a datapad forgotten beside her, as if the very idea of responsibility repulsed her in that moment.
He waited a respectful distance. Still. Silent. Like always.
Then she spoke.
“You ever wonder if all this”—she gestured to the skyline—“is actually worth protecting?”
He said nothing. He was trained for silence. Expected to maintain it.
But her voice was quieter this time. “Sorry. I know that’s dark. I just—feel like I’m holding up a wall no one else wants to fix.”
Fox found himself responding before he thought better of it. “That’s the job.”
She turned slightly, surprised.
He added, “Holding up the wall.”
The senator gave him a faint, exhausted smile. “Do you ever feel like it’s crumbling under your feet anyway?”
He didn’t answer. Not with words.
He took a step closer instead.
A small thing. Measured. Not enough to draw attention.
But enough for her to notice.
Her gaze lowered to the space now between them. “Commander,” she said gently, teasingly, “if I didn’t know any better, I’d think you were getting comfortable.”
“I’m not,” he said flatly.
She tilted her head. “Shame. It’s a lovely view.”
He said nothing, but his eyes didn’t move from her.
And then—
She turned away. Not dramatically. Just slowly, thoughtfully, brushing a finger along the rail’s edge.
“It’s funny,” she said, voice soft again. “I think I trust you more than I trust half the Senate.”
“You shouldn’t,” he replied, too quickly.
She looked over her shoulder. “Why not?”
He didn’t answer.
Because the truth was—
He didn’t know.
He looked away first.
You stared.
Fox was composed, always. The kind of man who spoke with fewer words than most used in a breath. You’d watched him through Senate hearings, committee debriefings, and those long silences standing at your side. He was built for control—stone-set and unshakable.
Which is why this moment felt like seeing a fault line in a mountain.
You stepped toward him.
Just slightly.
“I asked why not,” you repeated, your voice lower now. Not coy. Not teasing. Just… honest.
Fox’s helmet was clipped to his belt, his posture precise. But his jaw had locked. His brow was tight—not angry, not annoyed.
Guarded.
“You don’t know me,” he finally said, eyes fixed on the horizon like it might offer him cover.
“I know enough,” you replied, softer.
He didn’t move.
You tried again.
“You think I trust people easily?” A dry laugh left you. “I sit beside men who sell planets and call it compromise. I’ve had allies vote against my own bills while smiling at me from across the chamber. But you—when you walk into a room, everything sharpens.”
That got his attention. A flicker of his gaze, brief but direct.
You stepped closer.
“You don’t talk unless it’s important. You watch everything. And no one gets close, not really. But I see the way your men listen when you speak. I see how you stand between danger and everyone else without asking for anything in return.”
His expression didn’t shift. Not much.
But his hands curled faintly at his sides.
“I trust you, Commander,” you said. “And I don’t think that’s a mistake.”
The wind picked up slightly, rustling the edge of your robe.
Fox was quiet for a long time. And then—
“Don’t.”
One word. Clipped. Too sharp to be cold.
You blinked. “Don’t… what?”
He turned to face you fully now, and there was something there—in his eyes, usually so still. Not anger. Not fear.
A warning.
“Don’t mistake professionalism for something it isn’t.”
You looked up at him for a moment, unmoving. “I’m not.”
His jaw flexed. “Then don’t ask questions you don’t want the answers to.”
That hit a nerve. You stood straighter, chest tight.
“You don’t get to blame me for not hearing the things you’re too chicken to say,” you said quietly, your voice clipped but steady.
His breath caught—not visibly, not audibly. But you saw it. In the eyes. In the way his shoulders tightened, like something had landed.
But he didn’t respond.
You watched him another moment, then stepped back, retreating into the cool hallway of the Senate building without another word.
He stayed there.
In the quiet.
And stared after you like the words had hit him somewhere unarmored.
The marble under your boots echoed with each step, but you walked without a sound.
The exchange with Fox still thrummed in your chest. The way he’d looked at you. The way he hadn’t.
The way his silence had said too much.
You pressed a hand to your temple, trying to will the flush in your skin to cool. You hadn’t meant to push that far—but stars, you had been waiting for something. Anything. A sign that the wall wasn’t so impenetrable.
You didn’t expect the next voice you heard.
“My dear senator,” came the smooth, silk-wrapped timbre of Chancellor Palpatine.
You froze.
Not because of fear. But because his voice always had that effect.
You turned and offered the practiced smile you reserved for… certain company.
“Chancellor,” you said, clasping your hands politely in front of you. “I didn’t see you.”
He stepped into the corridor from the far end, draped in red and black, expression benevolent, but sharp beneath the surface.
“I was passing through after a long meeting with the Banking Clan representatives. Tense discussions, I’m afraid. I trust you’re well?”
“Well enough,” you replied smoothly. “Just getting some air.”
“Ah,” he said, folding his hands behind his back as he walked beside you. “We all need moments of reflection. Though I imagine yours are far and few between these days. The Senate rarely allows much rest.”
You gave a short laugh. “No. It certainly doesn’t.”
He glanced at you, unreadable.
“I hear the Guard’s been paying close attention to you lately. Commander Fox himself, no less. It’s good to see such… attentiveness. You must feel very safe.”
Your spine straightened slightly. “They’re dedicated men. I’m grateful for their protection.”
“I’m sure you are,” he said, the warmth in his tone not quite reaching his eyes. “Still… I hope you remember where your true allies lie.”
You offered him the same tight smile. “Of course, Chancellor.”
He regarded you for a moment longer. “You’ve always been a passionate voice, Senator. Young. Decisive. I do hope you’ll continue to support the efforts of the Republic, especially as we move into… more delicate phases of wartime policy.”
You didn’t flinch. “I serve the people of my system. And I believe in the Republic.”
“But belief,” he said, gently, “is only part of the duty. Sometimes we must make difficult choices. Unpopular ones.”
You met his gaze and gave nothing back.
“Then I hope the right people are making them,” you replied.
His smile thinned. “As do I.”
You inclined your head. “If you’ll excuse me, Chancellor, I do have a report to finish.”
He stepped aside, allowing you to pass.
“Of course. Rest well, Senator. You’ll need your strength.”
You didn’t look back.
You didn’t need to.
The shadow of his presence stretched long after his footsteps faded.
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Fox sat in the dark.
Helmet on the table. Armor half-unclasped. Fingers pressed to the bridge of his nose.
He hadn’t even made it to his bunk.
The locker room was silent, most of the Guard long since rotated out or posted elsewhere. The overheads were dimmed. Only the soft mechanical hum of the lockers and the occasional flicker of red light from an indicator broke the stillness.
But his mind wasn’t still.
He’d heard people raise their voices at him before. Angry senators, frustrated generals, clones pushed to the brink. That was easy. Anger rolled off him like rain off plastoid.
This was different.
She hadn’t said it to wound him.
She’d said it like she meant it.
Like she saw him.
And for the first time in a long time, he didn’t know what to do with that.
His hands flexed in his lap, slow and deliberate. He remembered how she looked tonight—standing under the red-gold skyline, eyes bright but tired, speaking softly like they were the only two people left in the galaxy.
It was wrong. Letting it get to him.
She was a senator. He was a soldier.
It wasn’t supposed to matter what her voice did to his chest.
What the scent of her did to his focus.
He wasn’t Thorn. He didn’t lean in. He didn’t get rattled by conversation, didn’t let his mouth run ahead of his orders.
But… she’d gotten under his skin. Somehow.
Fox exhaled slowly and reached for his gloves.
Then paused.
His thumb hovered over the comlink tucked beside his helmet.
He stared at it for a moment. Not to call her. He wouldn’t.
But just knowing she could.
That if she needed him, his name would be the first thing spoken through the channel.
He set his jaw, stood up, and locked his armor back into place.
Duty first.
Always.
But his mind stayed behind, somewhere on a balcony, in the dusk light… with her.
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The door slid open with its usual soft chime. You stepped inside, heels clicking gently against polished stone, and leaned heavily against the wall the moment it shut behind you.
Exhausted didn’t quite cover it.
The encounter with the Chancellor still lingered like static. And Fox—
Stars above, Fox.
You kicked off your shoes, dropped your bag, and made your way into the kitchen. You poured yourself something strong and cold, letting the silence of your private apartment sink in.
And then—
The soft buzz of your datapad.
You blinked.
A message.
Not from the Guard.
Not from your aides.
But…
Commander Thorn: Heard there was a rough hearing. You alive in there, or should I break down the door?
You smiled.
And for a moment, the tension eased.
You didn’t reply to Thorn right away.
You stared at the message, lips curving despite the weight still pressing behind your ribs. A chuckle slipped out—quiet, private. The kind meant only for a screen, not a roomful of senators.
Your fingers hovered over the keys for a second before typing:
You: Alive. Barely. Tempted to fake my death and move to Naboo. You free to help bury the body?
The typing indicator blinked back almost immediately.
Thorn: Only if I get first choice on the alias. I vote “Duchess Trouble.”
You: That’s terrible. But I’m keeping it.
Thorn: Thought you might. Get some rest. You earned it today.
You stared at that last line.
You earned it today.
You weren’t sure why those words hit harder than anything in the hearing. Maybe it was because it came from someone who saw things most senators never would. Maybe because it was real.
You typed back:
You: You too, Commander.
And then you set the datapad down, changed out of your formal wear, and let exhaustion carry you to bed.
You weren’t asleep long.
The shrill tone of your emergency comms broke through your dreams like a blaster shot.
You jerked upright, blinking against the haze of sleep, reaching for the device without hesitation.
“H-hello?” your voice cracked, still hoarse from sleep.
A voice—clipped, familiar, urgent—responded.
Fox.
“Senator. There’s been another incident. We’re en route.”
You were already moving. “Where?”
“Senator Mothma’s estate. Explosive detonation near her security gate. No confirmed injuries, but it’s close enough to send a message.”
You froze for only a heartbeat.
“I’ll be ready in five.”
Fox didn’t waste time on reassurance. “We’ll be outside your building. Don’t go anywhere alone.”
The line cut.
You stood in the dark for a second, pulse racing, mind already shifting into survival mode.
Whatever peace you’d clawed out of tonight had just shattered.
⸻
It was a controlled knock—no panic, no urgency—but hard enough to rattle the stillness of the apartment. You flinched, fumbling with your robe as you darted from your bedroom barefoot, still half-dressed.
“Stars, already?” you muttered, cinching the robe at your waist.
The buzzer chimed again.
You hit the panel to open the door.
And there they were.
Fox. Thorn. Towering in crimson armor, backlit by the corridor lights and the glint of Coruscant’s neon skyline. Visors staring forward. Blasters holstered—but you could feel the tension radiating off them like heat from durasteel.
Neither said anything at first.
Then, in a voice low and composed, Fox spoke:
“Senator. We arrived earlier than anticipated.”
“Yeah, no kidding,” you breathed, pushing a damp strand of hair behind your ear. Your robe was thin—too thin, you realized, as the air from the hallway crept over your skin. You crossed your arms instinctively, but it didn’t hide much.
Fox’s helmet tilted slightly—eyes dragging across your form in a quiet, tactical sweep. Not leering. Just… a longer pause than necessary.
Next to him, Thorn cleared his throat.
You raised an eyebrow at both of them. “Enjoying the view, Commanders?”
They didn’t flinch. Of course they didn’t. Both statues of composure, helmets hiding any flicker of reaction.
Fox spoke again, brisk. “We’ll step inside and secure the apartment. You have five minutes.”
“Yes, sir,” you muttered with mock-formality, brushing past them with bare feet against the floor. As you turned, you caught it—Fox’s head slightly turning to follow your movement. A fraction too long.
And thank the stars for helmets, because if you saw his face, you’d never let him live it down.
They moved through your apartment in practiced rhythm, clearing rooms, scanning corners, locking down windows and possible points of breach. Thorn stayed closer to the door, back to the wall, but his shoulders were taut beneath the red of his armor.
You emerged a few minutes later, dressed properly now—hair pulled back, expression sharpened by the adrenaline still running its course.
Fox glanced your way first. His visor tilted again, more subtle this time.
“All clear,” he said, voice crisp. “You’re to be escorted to the Guard’s secure transport. We’ll be moving now.”
You met his visor with a crooked smile. “You didn’t even compliment my robe.”
Thorn, behind him, let out a breath. It might’ve been a laugh. Or a sigh of please, not now.
Fox said nothing.
But his shoulders stiffened just slightly.
And as you stepped between them, one on each side, the heat of their presence pressed in like a second skin.
Danger waited out there.
But for now, this tension?
This was its own kind of war.
⸻
The hum of the engine filled the silence. City lights flared and blurred past the transparisteel windows as the transport cut through the lower atmosphere. Inside, the dim blue glow from the dash consoles painted all three of you in a cold, unflinching light.
Fox sat across from you, arms folded, helmet still on. Thorn was beside him, angled slightly your way—watching the shadows outside like they might reach in and pull the vehicle apart.
No one spoke at first.
It was you who finally broke the silence.
“This isn’t random, is it?”
Fox’s head turned. Slowly. “No.”
Thorn added, “Three incidents in four days. All different targets, different methods. But same message.”
You nodded, arms tucked around yourself. “The threat’s not just violence—it’s disruption. Fear. Shake up the ones trying to hold the peace together.”
Fox leaned forward, resting his arms on his knees. “Senator Organa’s transport was sabotaged. Padmé Amidala intercepted a coded threat embedded in one of her Senate droid updates. And now Mothma’s estate.”
“All prominent senators,” Thorn said. “Known for opposing authoritarian measures, trade blockades, or Separatist sympathies. Whoever this is… they’re strategic.”
“And the Senate’s pretending it’s coincidence.” You exhaled a sharp breath. “Cowards.”
Fox didn’t respond, but you saw it in the turn of his helmet—like he’d heard a truth too sharp to name.
Thorn’s voice cut the quiet next. “You’re on the list too, Senator. Whether they’ve moved or not, you’ve been marked.”
You met his gaze, even through the visor. “That’s not exactly comforting, Commander.”
“You wanted honesty,” he replied quietly.
You blinked, caught off guard—not just by the words, but the tone. Low. Sincere. Laced with something warmer than protocol.
Fox shifted, barely. A turn of his body, a flicker of subtle tension.
“They’ll keep escalating,” he said. “We don’t know how far.”
The transport took a turn, and city lights streamed in again, outlining their armor in a way that made them seem more like war statues than men.
And yet, when you looked at them—Fox silent and braced for anything, Thorn watching you with just the slightest flicker of concern behind the visor—it wasn’t fear that struck you.
It was the creeping awareness that maybe the danger outside wasn’t the only storm building.
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Star Wars Rebels and Andor both begin in 5 BBY but are aimed at two different audiences and even if they weren't it's entirely realistic to expect that even in dark times like the Empire there's going to be silly light-hearted days for our heroes
All this to say it's kinda funny to imagine that while Andy Serkis was giving a rousing speech to prisoners to rebel against a fascist gulag system building a nuclear weapon, somewhere across the galaxy some punk-ass street rat who always calls himself Jabba the Hutt is trying to corral a herd of panicked pigs that literally turn into giant balloons when they get scared
Summary: Pre-Attack of the Clones leading up to the first battle of Geonosis. inspired by “Cat’s in the Cradle” by Harry Chapin as I feel this song is very Jango and Boba coded.
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Rain never stopped on Kamino.
It drummed a rhythm on the windows of the training facility—sharp, persistent, lonely. You stood by the glass, arms crossed, eyes scanning the endless gray. Somewhere outside. Another bounty. Another absence. Another silent goodbye.
“Back soon,” he always said, planting a kiss against your temple with a touch too light to anchor anything real. You used to argue—beg him to stay, to train, to raise the boy he brought into the world. But you learned quick: Jango Fett was a man of war, not of roots.
He was strapping on his vambraces when he noticed you watching him.
“Don’t start,” he muttered, not looking up. His voice was gruff, frayed from too many missions and too little sleep.
You didn’t move. “He asked if you were coming to training tomorrow. I didn’t know what to tell him.”
Jango paused, only for a second, before clicking the final strap into place. “Tell him the truth. I’m working.”
You stepped forward. “You could take one day off. Just one. He looks up to you—he waits for you. When you’re not here, he starts acting like you. Staring out windows, keeping things inside. Like father, like son.”
His jaw twitched. “I didn’t bring him here for you to turn into his mother.”
The words hit like a slug round.
You swallowed, trying to keep your voice steady. “I’m not trying to replace anyone, Jango. But you leave him here alone. What do you expect me to do? Pretend I don’t care?”
He finally looked at you. Those eyes, dark and calculating, softened only for seconds at a time. This wasn’t one of them.
“I expect you to train the clones. That’s the job. Not to start playing house.”
“I didn’t fall in love with you for the job,” you said, quieter now. “And I didn’t stay on Kamino because I like watching kids grow up as soldiers. I stayed for you. For him.”
Jango adjusted the strap on his blaster. “He’s not yours.”
“I know.”
You did know. You weren’t trying to be his mother. Not really. You just wanted him to have one—someone who remembered to ask if he’d eaten, who noticed when he had nightmares, who held him when he tried not to cry. Someone who didn’t just see a legacy in him.
Jango stepped close, pressed a kiss to your forehead, too soft for someone always on edge. It almost made you forget everything else.
“I’ll be back soon,” he said.
“You always say that,” you whispered.
But he was already turning away.
Slave I rose through the Kamino rain and vanished into cloud cover.
You didn’t cry. You just went back inside and checked Boba’s room. He was asleep, curled up with one of his father’s old gloves tucked under his pillow like a security blanket.
You didn’t belong in their family. You knew that. But in Jango’s absence, you became something Boba needed. A voice when silence was heavy. A shield when pain crept too close. Not a mother—but a presence.
Even if Jango never wanted you to be.
So you stayed behind. For Boba.
He was quiet, sharp, and already wearing boots two sizes too big—trying to fill his father’s shoes before he even hit puberty. You weren’t his mother, not by blood, not by name, but someone had to care enough to keep him human. To make sure he didn’t disappear behind armor and legacy.
You cooked for him. Taught him hand-to-hand when Jango was gone. Helped him with clone drills, even when he rolled his eyes and said, “I’m not like them.” You tried to make him laugh. He rarely did.
One night, while putting away gear, he asked, “You gonna leave too?”
You paused. “No, Boba. Not unless I have to.”
“Dad says people always leave. That it’s part of the job.”
You crouched beside him, met his eyes. “He’s wrong. Or maybe he’s just scared to stay.”
⸻
Geonosis burned red.
Jango’s signal cut out too fast. Too sudden. You heard Mace Windu’s name in the comms, and something inside you fractured. Still, you led your squad—your clones—into the fight. They needed you. They trusted you. Jango didn’t.
When the battle ended, smoke still rising from the arena, you ran to the landing zone—knew exactly where the Slave I would be.
And there he was.
Boba, small and shaking, helmet too big in his arms. He looked up, eyes glassy but sharp.
“You’re with them,” he hissed, his voice more venom than grief. “You helped them.”
You stepped forward. “I didn’t know he’d—Boba, please. This isn’t what I wanted.”
“You’re a traitor.”
He turned, walking toward the ship, the ramp already lowering.
“You can’t do this alone,” you warned. “The galaxy isn’t kind. It’ll eat you alive.”
“I’ve got his armor. His ship. That’s all I need. I don’t need you anymore”
You reached for him—but he was already walking up the ramp, shoulders square like his father’s, jaw clenched with fury too big for his body.
You didn’t follow.
⸻
Years passed.
The Empire rose. You faded into shadows. The clones you once trained died in unfamiliar systems, stripped of names and purpose. You lived quiet, took jobs on the fringe—nothing that put you on anyone’s radar.
Until you crossed paths again.
Carbon scoring lit the walls of an abandoned outpost. A bounty had gone sour. You moved through smoke with the ease of memory—blaster in hand, breath steady. And then he stepped into view.
The armor was repainted, darker, scarred, refined. The stance, identical. The voice, modulated but unmistakable.
“You always did show up where you weren’t wanted,” Boba said.
You stared. He was taller now, broader. His face—Jango’s face, down to the line of his brow.
“I didn’t know it was you,” you murmured.
“Wouldn’t have mattered if you did.”
You lowered your weapon first. “You’re good.”
He gave a single nod. “Learned from the best.”
A beat.
“You look just like him,” you said quietly.
“Yeah. No surprise there”
There was no warmth in his words. Just steel. Just the ghost of a boy you tried to protect.
“Was that what you wanted? To become him?”
Boba stared at you for a long time. Then: “I didn’t have a choice. He left me everything… and nothing.”
You stepped closer, heart tight. “I tried, Boba. I tried to give you more than that.”
“I know,” he said, voice barely above a whisper.
He walked past you. Didn’t look back.
As he disappeared into the dusk, all you could think of is how he turned out just like him. His boy was just like him.
“on all levels except physical, i am a wolf”
Commander Fox x Reader X Commander Thorn
The Senator didn’t move right away. Fox hadn’t left yet.
His presence lingered like a storm cloud—helmet still on, posture rigid, arms crossed as if restraining something darker beneath the surface. She watched him from the threshold of the corridor, neither of them speaking, the silence dense with unspoken heat.
“You disapproved,” she said softly.
He didn’t answer.
She stepped closer. “But you didn’t look away.”
Fox’s chin dipped, visor tilted down as if to hide the twitch in his jaw.
“Careful, Senator,” he said, voice low, cold, and shaken in a way only she could catch. “You’re playing a dangerous game.”
“And you’re already in it.” Her tone sharpened, but her eyes stayed locked on his visor. “Don’t act like you haven’t been circling me like a hawk since day one.”
Silence.
Then,“You don’t know what I feel.”
“Then say it,” she challenged. “Say something real for once.”
Fox took a slow step forward, closing the distance between them—his body tense, his words tight and deliberate, repeating what she once said to him. “You don’t get to blame me for not hearing the things you’re too kriffing scared to say yourself.”
Her breath caught.
He stared at her for a moment longer. Then turned and walked away before either of them could cross a line they wouldn’t come back from.
⸻
The door to the barracks slammed open.
Fox stormed inside, the hard stomp of his boots warning enough that Thorn didn’t need to look up from the locker he’d been staring into for ten solid minutes.
“You disobeyed every line of protocol.”
Thorn stood. “So now you want to talk about it?”
“You kissed her on duty.”
“You watched it happen.”
Fox ripped off his gloves. “And you still did it.”
There was a pause—just long enough for tension to turn electric.
Thorn’s voice was quiet, but sharp: “You don’t get to pull rank on feelings, Fox. We both want her. Don’t pretend this is about regulation.”
That was it.
Fox swung.
Thorn caught it—barely—and shoved back hard. A scuffle broke out, fists colliding with durasteel lockers, helmets clattering to the floor. Fox grabbed Thorn by the collar, slamming him against the wall.
“You crossed a line.”
“You already crossed it—you’re just mad I got there first.”
A loud bark broke the chaos.
Grizzer lunged.
Hound rushed in a second too late as the mastiff clamped down on Fox’s arm with a growl. Stone grabbed Grizzer’s collar, Thire threw himself between the commanders, and Hound pried the dog off with a sharp command.
Fox’s arm bled. Thorn’s knuckles were bruised. Tension crackled like static.
Everyone froze.
“Stand. Down,” Thire barked, out of breath, eyes darting between them.
Fox wrenched his arm away from Hound, teeth gritted. “Keep that beast on a leash.”
“You two need to sort your osik out,” Hound snapped, patting Grizzer’s head with one hand and pointing at them both with the other. “Because if you don’t, you’re going to get someone killed. And I don’t mean each other.”
They stood in silence—breathing hard, eyes still locked.
It wasn’t over.
Not even close.
The medbay was dim, quiet. Just the way Fox liked it.
He sat on the edge of the cot, undersuit peeled down to his waist, jaw clenched as the auto-dispenser hissed out a cauterizing agent onto the bite wound on his arm. Grizzer had strong jaws. Too strong. The bastard left deep teeth marks, even through his sleeve.
Fox didn’t flinch.
He never did.
But rage simmered just beneath his skin—about the senator, Thorn, himself.
He’d lost control.
Again.
The door slid open.
Fox didn’t look up. “I said I wanted to be alone.”
“You say that every time you get mauled, Foxy.”
Fox’s spine stiffened.
No.
Not him.
Quinlan Vos strolled in like he owned the place, clad in his usual half-buttoned robes, smug grin painted across his face, and Force help the galaxy, his hair was down. That ridiculous mop of beach-bum locks falling into his eyes like he hadn’t just walked into the nerve center of the Republic Guard.
Vos whistled when he saw the blood. “Damn. That a Mastiff, or did Thorn finally snap and bite you?”
Fox didn’t answer.
“You know, for a guy with so much discipline, you really do attract violence like a magnet. It’s almost poetic.”
“Get out.”
“Now now, is that any way to talk to a Jedi Master who just happened to be in the neighborhood and heard a juicy rumor about a senator and two commanders trying to kill each other over her?”
Fox finally turned his head, slow and deliberate, eyes burning. “This is none of your business.”
Vos grinned wider. “That’s the thing about me, Foxy. I make everything my business.”
He walked over, casually picking up a bacta patch. “So which one of you kissed her first?”
Fox didn’t answer. Vos hummed.
“Ah. That’s how it is.”
He peeled the wrapper off the patch and handed it to him. Fox snatched it, slapping it over the wound with unnecessary force.
“You’re in deep, huh?” Vos said quietly now. His voice lost some of the usual lilt, turning thoughtful. “I can see it.”
Fox didn’t look at him.
“I’ve seen men go down this road,” Vos continued, watching him. “Some of them clawed their way back. Most didn’t.”
“She’s not yours,” Fox snapped.
Vos raised an eyebrow. “Didn’t say she was.”
“Then why are you here?”
“Because whether you like it or not, you’re coming undone, Commander. And I have orders to keep the Guard functioning. You spiral out, the whole tower burns with you.”
Fox stood. “I am not spiraling.”
Vos looked him up and down—shirtless, bleeding, jaw bruised, and still trembling with rage.
“Sure,” Vos said, slow and sarcastic. “Totally fine.”
Fox grabbed his gloves and helmet off the tray and stalked past him.
Vos called out as he left, “Tell Thorn I’ll be by to heal his bruises too. Or at least watch Hound chew him out again.”
Fox didn’t stop.
But the door nearly dented when it slammed behind him.
⸻
Thorn sat alone in the barracks’ quiet lounge, nursing a bruised knuckle and a splitting headache. Hound’s lecture was still ringing in his ears. Stone had suggested they cool off with a drink—Thire offered him a frozen steak for his eye. Grizzer, after biting Fox, had the audacity to curl up beside Thorn like he hadn’t instigated an all-out brawl.
The door slid open.
“You know,” came that too-smooth voice, “for a guy named after a sharp object, you sure wear your heart like it’s blunt.”
Thorn groaned and leaned back without looking. “Vos.”
“Commander,” Quinlan said, dropping onto the couch beside him uninvited. “Heard you and Fox went a few rounds over a senator.”
Thorn said nothing.
Vos smirked. “You’re both lucky Grizzer didn’t go for the face.”
Thorn rubbed his temple. “Why are you here?”
“Curiosity,” Vos said breezily. “And because I happen to be good friends with a certain Jedi who served with your senator. Back when she wasn’t a senator, but a commander. Small galaxy.”
Thorn looked over slowly. “You know someone who served with her?”
Vos held up a hand. “Before you ask—no, I won’t tell you who. Jedi confidentiality and all that. But I could get them to talk to her. Maybe help… unravel this whole little triangle you’ve got going on.”
Thorn tensed, then forced himself to relax. “She’s not in a triangle.”
Vos laughed. “Oh, my friend. She is the triangle.”
Thorn didn’t answer.
Instead, his tone shifted. “So it’s true. She really was a commander.”
Vos tilted his head. “Didn’t Fox tell you that already?”
“I wanted to hear it again.”
Vos grew slightly more serious. “Yeah. She was a hell of a one, too. Decorated. Respected. Feared.”
“Feared?” Thorn asked, brow furrowing.
Vos shrugged. “Depends on which side of the war you were on. But most of it’s been buried. Whole campaigns sealed. Records redacted. Even my Jedi friend won’t talk much. Said it’s classified—need-to-know.”
Thorn was silent.
“Truth is,” Vos continued, “you’ll only ever get her side of the story… if she wants you to have it.”
Thorn looked down at his bruised hand.
Vos added, softer, “Don’t push too hard, Thorn. That kind of past doesn’t stay buried without a reason.”
And with that, Vos stood and stretched like he’d done nothing more than offer career advice over caf.
“Tell Fox I say hi,” he called as he walked out. “And maybe try not to murder each other tomorrow. I’ve got credits on both of you for different reasons.”
The door hissed shut, leaving Thorn in a sea of silence… and questions he suddenly wasn’t sure he wanted the answers to.
⸻
The tension had a scent—subtle, metallic. Like ozone before a storm.
She felt it in the way the guards shifted in the halls, in how Fox’s voice had lost its usual edge and become tightly controlled. In how Thorn hadn’t so much as looked her in the eye since yesterday. Something had changed.
She wasn’t surprised when her door chimed. But the man standing on the other side wasn’t Fox. Or Thorn. Or a summons from the Chancellor’s office.
“Kenobi,” she said.
Obi-Wan offered a patient, polite smile. “You always answer like I’ve come bearing bad news.”
“You usually do.”
He sighed. “Well, you’ll be relieved to know this time I only come bearing a headache.”
She stepped aside to let him in. “Vos?”
“Vos.”
That earned a smirk from her. “You want a drink?”
“Desperately
They settled on her balcony, the city golden and low in the sky, just shy of sunset. Ed She poured them both a drink—Alderaanian, smooth, aged. Obi-Wan accepted it with a look of wary gratitude.
“Why do I feel like this is some kind of delayed consequence for my past?” she asked.
“Because it absolutely is,” he replied. “But mostly, Vos sent me.”
She gave him a sideways glance. “He’s enjoying himself, isn’t he?”
“Far too much,” Obi-Wan muttered. “You know how he is. Any hint of personal drama and he acts like he’s watching theatre.”
“I should’ve let him get shot.”
“I was there. You tried to let him get shot.”
That earned a grin from her.
They sat for a moment, quiet. Comfortable. The kind of silence only people with shared history could sit in without it feeling heavy.
“You’ve seen them,” she said eventually. “The commanders.”
Obi-Wan nodded. “Yes.”
“And?”
“And I’d say your presence is… significantly disruptive to their equilibrium.”
She snorted. “That’s a very Jedi way of calling me a problem.”
“I didn’t say you were a problem. I said you’re the gravity. They’re just circling.”
She leaned back in her chair. “Do you think Vos said anything to them?”
Obi-Wan arched a brow. “About?”
“About the war. About what I did.”
There was a beat. The drink in her hand warmed between her fingers.
“Vos knows more than he lets on,” Obi-Wan said carefully. “He always has.”
She looked away, toward the skyline. “I can’t afford them knowing everything. Not yet.”
“I doubt he told them everything. But he may have let enough slip to stir their curiosity.”
“I don’t want their curiosity. I want their professionalism.”
Obi-Wan didn’t say anything to that. He simply sipped his drink, contemplative.
“You were there too,” she said quietly. “You and Vos. You know what it was like.”
“I remember,” he said. “And I remember what you did. I also remember how much of it was buried under politics and repainted as something else.”
“That was the deal,” she said, bitterly. “Be the hero they needed, and maybe they’d forget I started as the villain.”
Obi-Wan set his glass down. “You were never the villain. You were a soldier. A leader. Same as the rest of us.”
“Tell that to the people I buried.”
He didn’t respond to that. Just watched her with those clear, tired eyes that had seen too much and judged too little.
“Do you regret it?” he asked finally.
“I regret that people like me had to exist at all,” she said. “But no. I don’t regret surviving.”
There was a long pause.
“I’ll keep Vos in check,” Obi-Wan said softly. “But I can’t stop the past from catching up.”
“Just slow it down,” she murmured. “Long enough for me to decide how I want to be seen.”
He offered a nod. “You always did like to control your narrative.”
“And yet,” she said with a small smirk, “I let you and Vos tell it for me.”
Obi-Wan chuckled. “You never let us do anything. You were just smart enough to make us think we had the choice.”
She toasted him with her glass. “Still am.”
⸻
It hit faster than a bomb and spread twice as far.
By midmorning, every data terminal in the Senate complex buzzed with alerts. Security systems scrambled, slicing units raced against the breach, and a hush fell over the halls more damning than a public outcry—because silence meant everyone was reading.
The cyber attack had been surgical. Dozens of files lifted from the most secure systems on Coruscant. All senators. All sensitive. Not even the Chancellor was spared. But some were worse than others.
Her file made front-page headlines on five Core Worlds within the hour.
Her face stared back at her from an unauthorized holonet broadcast, grainy war footage playing behind text that read: SENATOR OR WARLORD?
It was all there.
The use of the enemy’s uniform in the infamous ambush at Ridge 17.
The unarmed surrendering prisoners shot in the back after being marched into a ravine.
The nighttime raid that ended with a half-dozen civilians caught in the fire.
The public executions. The battlefield tribunals.
The bloody calculus of survival, simplified and repackaged for mass consumption.
And worse—each sealed report had her name etched in full: Commander [LAST NAME], leader of the 3rd Resistance Legion.
Nowhere to hide.
By the time she reached the Senate floor, the stares had already changed. They weren’t hostile, not outright. But the quiet had grown pointed. Even the senators who’d once embraced her at functions stepped back just slightly, their warmth tempered by uncertainty. Some averted their eyes. A few didn’t bother.
Senator Mon Mothma was the only one who stepped forward.
“You don’t need to explain anything,” she said gently. “You led a war. Most of them haven’t even led a debate.”
The senator gave her a tight smile. “You’re kinder than I expected, Mon.”
“I’m pragmatic. And I’ve seen what war does. You don’t owe them anything.”
Except she did. She owed something. Even if it wasn’t an apology.
In her office, she didn’t sit. She stared at the screen instead—at her own record splayed out across a dozen news outlets. There was no way to know how the public would react. A war hero to some. A butcher to others. To the commanders who now guarded her, she wondered what she was.
A knock at the door startled her.
“Enter.”
Thorn stepped inside, helmet under his arm. He didn’t speak. His expression was unreadable, but his eyes held weight.
“Say it,” she said. “Whatever you’re thinking.”
He shook his head. “Doesn’t matter what I think.”
“It does.”
His jaw clenched. “I’ve fought beside men who did far worse than what’s written here. And I’ve fought beside better men who never made it through a single battle. You made it. You survived. You did what you had to.”
“And if I hadn’t? If I hadn’t done what I did?”
“You wouldn’t be here.”
“Would you still respect me?”
He didn’t answer. That was the answer.
“I didn’t enjoy it,” she said. “But I did it.”
“I know.”
She turned away from him, gripping the edge of her desk.
“And Fox?” she asked quietly. “What does he think?”
“I don’t know,” Thorn admitted. “He hasn’t said a word since the report came out.”
Of course he hadn’t. Fox would carry his judgment in silence. He’d probably carry it straight to the Chancellor’s office and beyond.
But it was Thorn still standing in front of her. Thorn who hadn’t walked away.
That counted for something.
That counted for everything.
⸻
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My characters are so happy right now :) Should I... ruin... everything?
It was another night at 79’s, the bar where the clones and the occasional visitor came to unwind after a long day of battle. The flickering lights cast shadows on the grungy walls, but the lively chatter, laughter, and clinking of glasses created a comforting hum in the background. You leaned against the bar, swirling your drink, eyes scanning the room when your gaze landed on a familiar face.
Commander Wolffe, as always, had a commanding presence even when he was off-duty, but tonight he was uncharacteristically relaxed. His armor was discarded in favor of the usual clone-issue tank top and fatigues, his black-and-grey hair tousled in a way that made him look rugged, even more so than usual. You’d bumped into him here plenty of times, always with the same playful banter and flirtatious remarks that made you look forward to your time at 79’s.
Tonight, however, something was different. You weren’t alone.
A new face—a clone commander you didn’t recognize—was sitting at a nearby table, chatting you up with ease. His dark hair was shaved close, a subtle scar above his eyebrow, and his grin was disarming, though his overconfidence was starting to wear on your patience. You were just humoring him for the moment, enjoying the banter and not entirely bothered by the attention. After all, it was 79’s, and a little flirtation never hurt anyone.
It was harmless enough, or at least you thought so, until you noticed Wolffe watching the exchange from a distance.
It wasn’t the first time you’d been flirted with by clones here, but you could sense Wolffe’s usual relaxed demeanor had shifted. The intensity in his eyes was unmistakable as he made his way over to you, standing a little too close, his presence commanding the room.
You flashed him a smile, unfazed by the tension that had suddenly thickened between them. “What’s up, Wolffe? You seem a little tense tonight.”
“Everything alright here?” Wolffe’s tone was sharp, his eyes flicking to Cody, who was now giving him a questioning look. He then turned his gaze back to you, his expression softening for a moment before he added, “Is this guy bothering you?”
You raised an eyebrow, a mischievous grin pulling at your lips. “No,” you teased, “we’re just having a drink.”
Wolffe’s jaw tightened as he turned to Cody, who hadn’t broken his cool demeanor. “Well, he’s bothering me,” Wolffe said, and before anyone could react, he delivered a quick, sharp punch to Cody’s jaw.
Cody staggered slightly, more out of surprise than anything, his usual calm expression barely cracking. He recovered quickly, though, smirking as he rubbed his shoulder. “Well, that’s one way to say hello, Wolffe,” Cody said, voice tinged with amusement.
“Just a friendly reminder,” Wolffe grumbled
The room fell silent for a brief moment before laughter erupted from the nearby tables, the other clones eyeing the two commanders like they were about to see something more entertaining than a training session. The bartender, however, wasn’t as amused.
“You three! Out!” The bartender called, waving a hand at the trio of you, his patience running thin.
Wolffe flashed Cody a final look, an unspoken challenge in his eyes, before he gave a half-smile in your direction. “Guess we’re kicked out,” he muttered, already stepping toward the door.
Outside, the cool night air hit you, the chaos of the bar quickly fading behind you as you all stood on the street. You couldn’t help but laugh at the absurdity of it all.
“Well, that was interesting,” you said, grinning. “Couldn’t help myself, you know? It’s hard to resist a little harmless flirtation with handsome clones.”
Wolffe smirked, crossing his arms over his chest. “You’re trouble,” he muttered, though there was an unmistakable warmth in his eyes. “Next time, try not to get two clones in a punch-up over you.”
Cody, rubbing his jaw with a slight wince, chuckled. “I’ve had worse, Wolffe. But maybe you’ll want to keep that temper in check next time.”
You grinned, raising an eyebrow. “Yeah, I’ll have to think about it. I mean, you’re both so handsome. It’s hard not to get a little distracted.”
Wolffe shot Cody another look, then glanced at you with a half-smile. “Well, I suppose it’s good to know where I stand,” he said dryly. “But just remember, no one’s going to flirt with you as much as I do. So maybe I’ll keep punching my way to your heart.”
Cody snorted, shaking his head. “Brotherly rivalry at its finest, huh?”
You laughed, amused by the two of them. “Yeah, looks like it.” You gave Wolffe a playful look. “But I have to admit, I like the way you fight for my attention.”
Wolffe grinned, his usual cool demeanor returning. “Good,” he said, voice low and steady. “Because I’m not going to let anyone else take it.”
The three of you shared a brief, comfortable silence, and though the situation had been far from ordinary, there was a sense of camaraderie that you wouldn’t have traded for anything. And even though it had been an unexpected turn of events, you couldn’t help but enjoy the playful rivalry—especially when it involved such intriguing company.
“You two are something else,” you said, shaking your head, a smile tugging at your lips. “But it looks like I’m going to have to pick a side, huh?”
Wolffe gave you a smirk that told you everything you needed to know. “I’m already on your side,” he said, his voice full of quiet confidence.
Cody chuckled, stepping away with a wink. “Don’t think I’ll let you forget this, Wolffe.”
“Wouldn’t dream of it,” Wolffe shot back with a grin. And with that, the three of you parted ways for the night, the bond of camaraderie—and the subtle, unspoken rivalry—lingering between you all.
Ryio Chuchi x Commander Fox x Reader x Sergeant Hound
The lower levels of Coruscant were a different kind of loud—sirens and shouts, hover engines and flickering holoboards bleeding through the smog. It was chaos, yes, but in this chaos, Sergeant Hound felt clarity.
Grizzer padded silently at his side, the massiff’s broad frame alert, nostrils twitching as they passed another vendor selling deep-fried something on a stick. Hound barely registered the scent. His thoughts were louder.
You hadn’t contacted him since the night Fox kissed you.
And Hound hadn’t pressed. Not because he didn’t care. Because he’d needed time—to think, to process, to stop pretending that what he felt for you was just proximity or comfort or familiarity.
It wasn’t.
You had bewitched him from the moment you’d leaned a little too close with that sly smirk, asking if he always kept a massiff at his hip or if he was compensating for something. He’d been intrigued, annoyed, flustered—and slowly, hopelessly drawn in.
He’d watched you orbit Fox like gravity had already chosen. And he’d told himself that if Fox was what you wanted, he wouldn’t stand in the way.
But not anymore.
Fox had kissed you. And then let you go.
Hound would never.
He paused on the overlook just above the market plaza. Grizzer snorted and settled beside him, tail thumping once.
“She deserves better than this,” Hound muttered. “Better than confusion. Better than being second choice.”
Grizzer gave a small bark of agreement.
Hound scratched behind his companion’s ear. His thoughts drifted to the way you’d laughed that night walking home, teasing him about patrol patterns and rogue droids. The way your voice had softened, just a little, when you asked him to walk you back.
You didn’t see it yet—but he did.
You were starting to look at him differently.
He tapped his comm. “I’m going off-duty for the next few hours,” he told Dispatch. “Personal matter.”
No one questioned him.
By the time he arrived at the Senate tower, he was still in uniform—dust and grime on his boots, helmet tucked under his arm, eyes like flint. He approached your apartment with purpose, not hesitation. If you weren’t there, he’d wait. If your droid answered the door with another snippy remark, he’d endure it.
Because this time, he wasn’t going to step aside.
VX-7 opened the door with his usual pomp. “Ah, the canine and his keeper. Should I fetch my Mistress, or are you here to howl at the moon?”
“I’m here to speak with her,” Hound said calmly. “And I’m not leaving until I do.”
VX-7 tilted his head. “Hm. Bold. She may like that.”
“I’m counting on it.”
Ila peeked around the corner from the sitting room, wide-eyed. “She’s still in the steam chamber,” she whispered. “But—she’ll want to see you. I think.”
Hound stepped inside. Grizzer waited obediently at the door.
A few minutes later, you entered the room, wrapped in a plush robe, hair damp, eyes guarded.
“Hound,” you said carefully. “Is everything alright?”
“No,” he said. “Not really.”
You blinked.
He stood a few steps away, helmet still under his arm, the overhead light catching the edge of a fresh bruise on his cheekbone.
“I’ve been patient,” he began. “I stood back while you looked at Fox like he was the only star in your sky. I let it go when he strung you along, when you thought he might choose you. I watched it hurt you, and I said nothing because I thought maybe that was what you needed.”
You stiffened—but you didn’t interrupt.
“But I won’t do it anymore,” Hound said quietly. “Because I see you, and I want you. And if there’s even a part of you that’s starting to see me too—then I’m not backing down.”
Silence stretched.
You didn’t speak. But your expression… shifted. A flicker. Not anger. Not rejection. Something else.
Something softer.
Hound took a step closer. “I’m not here to compete with him,” he added. “I’m here to fight for you.”
And with that, he turned and walked to the door.
Not storming out. Not waiting for an answer.
Just putting it all on the line, finally.
At the threshold, he looked back. “I’ll be at the memorial wall tomorrow. In case you want to talk.”
The door closed behind him.
Grizzer gave a soft whine.
Inside, your handmaiden Maera—quiet as ever—approached and offered you a datapad. “Tomorrow’s agenda,” she said softly. “Unless you’d like to cancel it. Or… change it.”
You didn’t answer.
You just stood in your quiet apartment—heart suddenly too full and too tangled for words—and stared at the door where Hound had just been.
Something had shifted.
And you knew the days ahead would not allow for indecision anymore.
⸻
Commander Fox stared down at the report in his hands, reading the same line for the fourth time without absorbing a word of it.
…Civilian unrest on Level 3124-B has been neutralized with minimal casualties. Local authorities commend the Guard for…
He let out a slow breath, lowering the datapad onto his desk. It clacked quietly against the durasteel surface, the only sound in his private office. The dim lights cast hard shadows across the red plating of his armor. Even here, in the supposed quiet, his thoughts were too loud.
Hound had gone to her.
And she’d seen him.
Fox didn’t need confirmation—he could read the tension in Hound’s body when he returned to the barracks, the uncharacteristic weight in his silence. And worse… the lack of guilt.
Because Hound had nothing to feel guilty for.
You were not his.
Not anymore.
If you ever truly were.
Fox stood abruptly, the motion sharp. His armor creaked at the joints. He crossed the room and keyed his comm. “Patch me through to Senator Chuchi,” he said. “Tell her… I could use a few moments. Off record.”
A pause. Then: “Yes, Commander. She’s in her office.”
He arrived at her quarters just past dusk.
She opened the door herself—no staff, no aides, just Chuchi in a soft navy tunic and loose curls, her usual regal poise set aside for something more honest.
“Fox,” she greeted with a faint smile. “I wasn’t sure if you would come.”
“I wasn’t either,” he admitted.
She stepped back, letting him in.
Her apartment was warmer than his—lamplight instead of fluorescents, cushions instead of steel, a kettle steaming faintly on a side table.
“You look tired,” she said gently.
“I am.” He hesitated. “I’ve been… thinking. About everything.”
She moved toward the kitchenette and poured a cup of tea. “And?”
Fox accepted the cup but didn’t drink. His eyes lingered on the steam curling from the surface.
“Do you think,” he asked, “that I’m blind?”
Chuchi quirked an eyebrow. “You’ll have to be more specific.”
“Hound told me today that I’m so focused on doing the right thing, I can’t see what’s right in front of me. That I’ve made myself blind. That…” He trailed off.
Chuchi sat down across from him, her expression softening.
“He’s right,” she said. “In some ways.”
Fox didn’t argue.
“I know you care for her,” Chuchi continued, voice calm and without malice. “I always knew. And I told myself I didn’t mind being second. That eventually you’d see me.”
Her confession was so unflinchingly honest that Fox looked up in surprise.
“But now?” she added. “I don’t want to be chosen because she walked away. I want to be wanted because I am wanted. Not because I’m convenient. Not because I’m safe.”
“I never meant to make you feel like that,” he said, quietly.
“I know,” she replied. “You’re not cruel, Fox. You’re careful. Too careful. So careful that you might lose everyone while trying to protect them.”
He finally sipped the tea. It was bitter, earthy. Grounding.
“I don’t know what I want,” he confessed.
Chuchi leaned forward. “Then let me help you figure it out.”
He looked up. Her eyes were patient. Warm.
He could fall into that warmth.
He might already be falling.
They stayed like that for a while—talking softly, slowly. Not of war. Not of Senate politics or assignments. Just… of quiet things. Of home worlds and half-remembered childhoods, of what it meant to serve and survive in a galaxy that demanded so much of them both.
At one point, Chuchi placed a gentle hand over his.
He didn’t move away.
Fox didn’t know what the future held.
But tonight—he let himself rest.
Not as a commander. Not as a soldier.
But as a man slowly trying to understand his own heart.
⸻
The Grand Convocation Chamber was abuzz with tension. Holocams glinted in the air, senators murmuring in rising tones as the next point of order was introduced. Mas Amedda’s voice carried over the room like cold oil, slick and condescending.
“We must return to a more structured approach to military resource allocation. The proposed oversight committee is not only unnecessary, but also a potential breach of central authority—”
“With all due respect, Vice Chair,” your voice cut through the air like a vibroblade, sharp and unforgiving, “—that’s the second time this week you’ve attempted to dissolve accountability through procedural smoke screens.”
A hush fell. Some senators leaned forward. Others tried not to visibly smile.
Mas Amedda’s eyes narrowed. “Senator, I remind you—”
“I will not be silenced for speaking the truth,” you said, rising from your place. “This chamber deserves better than manipulation cloaked in regulation. How many more credits will vanish into ‘classified security enhancements’ that never see oversight? How many more clone rotations will be extended because of your so-called ‘budgetary shortfalls’? Enough. We’re hemorrhaging lives and credits—and for what? For your empty assurances?”
Bail Organa stood. “The senator from [your planet] raises a valid concern. We’ve seen an alarming rise in unchecked defense spending with no direct line of transparency. I support her call for oversight.”
More murmurs rippled across the room. Several senators nodded. A few scowled. Mas Amedda looked caught off guard—too public a setting to retaliate, too sharp a blow to ignore.
You didn’t sit.
You owned the floor.
“And if this body continues to protect corruption under the guise of unity,” you said coolly, “then it deserves neither peace nor legitimacy. Some of us may come from worlds ravaged by warlords and tyrants, but at least we recognize the stench when it walks into our halls.”
Gasps. Stifled laughter. Shock.
Even Palpatine, observing from his platform above, remained eerily silent, hands steepled.
From a private senatorial booth above, Chuchi leaned subtly toward Fox, her elegant features drawn tight with concern.
“She’s changed,” she murmured. “She’s always been fiery, yes, but this—this isn’t politics anymore. This is personal.”
Fox, clad in full red armor beside her, arms crossed and expression unreadable, didn’t respond immediately. His eyes remained fixed on you down below.
Your voice. Your anger. Your fire.
He could hear the edge of something unraveling.
“…Maybe it is personal,” he said eventually, quiet enough that only Chuchi could hear. “Maybe it’s always been.”
Chuchi’s brow furrowed.
She looked down at you, then sideways at Fox—and for the first time, she wasn’t sure if she was worried for you… or for him.
This The Senate hearing had adjourned, but the fire hadn’t left your blood. The echo of your words still rang in the marble columns of the hall as senators dispersed in murmuring clusters—some scandalized, others invigorated.
You made no effort to hide your stride as you exited the chamber, heels clicking with deliberate finality. It wasn’t until you entered one of the quiet side halls—lined with tall, arched windows overlooking Coruscant’s twilight skyline—that you heard someone step into pace beside you.
“Senator.”
You didn’t need to look. That voice—smooth, measured, calm—could only belong to Bail Organa.
You sighed. “Come to scold me for lighting a fire under Mas Amedda’s tail?”
“I’d never deny a fire its purpose,” Bail replied, his tone half amused, half cautious. “Though I will admit, your methods have a certain… how shall we say—explosive flair.”
You turned to face him, arching an eyebrow. “And yet you backed me.”
“I did.” He clasped his hands behind his back, dark eyes thoughtful. “Because, despite your delivery—and perhaps even because of it—you were right. There’s rot beneath the surface of our governance. We just have different ways of exposing it.”
“I’m not interested in polishing rust, Organa. If the Republic is breaking, then maybe it needs to crack apart before we can build something better.”
“And maybe,” he said gently, “some of us are still trying to stop it from breaking altogether.”
The silence between you hung for a moment, not hostile—but heavy with tension and philosophical difference.
Then Bail offered a small nod. “You’ve earned some of my respect. And that’s not something I give lightly.”
You tilted your head. “You sound almost surprised.”
“I am.” He smiled faintly. “But I’ve also been in politics long enough to know that sometimes, the most unlikely alliances are the most effective.”
You smirked. “Is that your way of saying you’re not going to block me next time I set the chamber on fire?”
“I’m saying,” he said, turning to walk with you again, “that if you’re going to keep torching corruption, I might as well bring a torch of my own.”
You gave a short laugh—half relief, half wariness.
For all his charm, Organa still felt like the cleanest dagger in the Senate’s drawer—but a dagger all the same. You’d take what allies you could get.
Even if they wore polished boots and Alderaanian silk.
⸻
You were still in your senatorial attire—half undone, jacket slung over a chair, hair falling from its formal coil as you paced the living room. The adrenaline from the hearing had worn off, leaving only a searing void in its place.
A chime broke the silence.
Your head turned. The door.
You weren’t expecting anyone.
When it opened, Hound stood in the threshold, soaked from rain, his patrol armor clinging to him—helmet in one hand, the ever-loyal Grizzer seated obediently behind him. His gaze was sharp, jaw set with some storm you hadn’t yet named.
“Evening, Senator,” he said, voice rougher than usual. “I… I was passing by. Thought you might want company.”
You looked at him for a long beat. “That depends,” you murmured, stepping aside. “Is this an official guard visit… or something else?”
He stepped in without answering, closing the door behind him. Grizzer settled just inside the hall while Hound placed his helmet on a nearby table. His eyes never left you.
“You looked like fire on that floor today,” he said at last, voice quieter now. “Not many people can stand toe-to-toe with Mas Amedda and walk away without flinching.”
“Flinching’s for people who have the luxury of fear,” you replied, moving to the window. “I don’t. Not anymore.”
He followed your voice. “That’s what I’ve always liked about you.”
You turned, slowly. “Always?”
He stepped closer. “Yeah. Always.”
The air thickened between you—your breath catching slightly as the distance closed, the tension pulsing like the city lights outside. You were used to control. Used to strategy and manipulation. But Hound didn’t play your games.
He was standing just inches away now, rain still dripping from his curls, the heat of him radiating in the cool air of the apartment.
“You’re not subtle,” you whispered.
“No,” he said. “But neither are you.”
Your hand reached for the front of his armor, your fingers brushing the duraplast of his chest plate.
“Take it off,” you said.
He did.
Piece by piece, Hound peeled off the armor until it was just him—tired, proud, burning. When you stepped into him, it was with a crash of mouths and breath, a meeting of fire and steel. Your back hit the windowpane as he kissed you like you were something he’d waited too long to touch—fierce, needy, reverent.
You tangled your fingers in the straps of his blacks, dragging him in closer. He groaned softly when you bit his lower lip, and your laugh—low and dark—only stoked the fire between you.
No words.
Just heat. Just hands.
And when you pulled him with you toward your bedroom, it wasn’t about power. Not politics. Not winning.
It was about claiming something—for once—for yourself.
⸻
There was a silence in your bedroom that felt sacred.
Hound lay beside you, one arm thrown over your waist, your back pulled against the warmth of his bare chest. His breathing was slow and steady, his face buried in your hair. You’d never seen him so at peace—off duty, unguarded, real.
Your fingers traced lazy lines on the back of his hand. A smile tugged at your lips. Last night had been… something else. No games. No politics. Just two people stripped bare in every way that mattered.
“Mm,” Hound murmured against your shoulder. “Y’real or did I dream all that?”
You chuckled softly. “If it was a dream, we were both dreaming the same thing. Loudly.”
He groaned. “You’re gonna bring that up every chance you get, aren’t you?”
You smirked. “Absolutely.”
Hound murmured against your skin, “You think they heard us?”
You tilted your head back against his shoulder. “All of them.”
“Guess I better make breakfast. Bribe my way back into their good graces.”
You laughed. “Oh no, Hound. You’re mine this morning. Let them stew.”
He kissed your shoulder. “Yeah… okay. Yours.”
And for the first time in a long time, it felt like someone meant it.
⸻
In the kitchen, Maera sipped her morning tea with one elegantly raised brow. She leaned against the counter, still in her silken robe, listening.
“Did you hear them?” asked Ila, wide-eyed and flushed, whispering as if it wasn’t already obvious. “I mean—I wasn’t trying to eavesdrop! But the walls—Maera, the walls!”
Maera nodded slowly, utterly unbothered. “They certainly weren’t shy about it. Not that they should be. She’s earned a night of pleasure after everything.”
VX-7, polishing silverware despite having no reason to do so, turned his head with a prim little huff. “It was excessive. Disturbingly organic. I recalibrated my audio receptors three times. And still. Still.”
From the corner of the room, R9 let out a sequence of aggressive beeps, which VX-7 translated almost reluctantly.
“He says—and I quote—‘If you’re going to wake an entire building, at least record it for later entertainment.’ Disgusting.”
R9 chirped again. VX-7 turned with stiff disdain. “No, I will not ask her for details.”
Ila giggled helplessly, her face bright red. “Well… it sounded like she was having a really good time. I mean, we’ve all seen how Sergeant Hound looks at her. Like he’d fight the whole galaxy for just one kiss.”
Maera nodded. “He might have done more than kiss.”
VX-7 sputtered. “Decorum.”
⸻
You were halfway through your caf when R9 rolled up, suspiciously quiet—always a bad sign.
He beeped something sharp and insistent.
VX-7 glanced up from organizing your data pads with a sigh. “He’s asking about the sergeant’s… performance.”
You raised a brow. “Oh, is he?”
R9 chirped eagerly.
You took a sip of caf, deliberately slow, then replied dryly, “He was… satisfactory.”
R9 sputtered in a flurry of binary outrage.
“He’s saying that’s not enough,” VX said flatly. “That he deserves explicit schematics after suffering through an evening of audible trauma.”
You smiled serenely. “Tell him he should be grateful I didn’t disconnect his audio receptors entirely.”
R9 beeped in long-suffering protest.
“I am thrilled,” VX-7 cut in, sounding deeply relieved. “Your discretion is appreciated. Some of us prefer not to know everything.”
From the hallway, Maera passed with a subtle smirk. “He did call your name a lot.”
You turned sharply. “Maera.”
“Ila timed it.”
“Ila what?!”
“I—!” came her squeaked voice from the kitchen. “I only did it once!”
R9 twirled in glee.
⸻
Sergeant Hound walked into the base with a straighter spine that morning, like someone who had nothing left to question.
He didn’t try to hide the way his eyes followed you when you passed him in the corridor, or the brief smirk that ghosted across his face when your gaze lingered a little too long.
The men noticed. Stone nudged Thorn, who muttered something under his breath and whistled low.
Fox noticed too.
He was standing by the briefing room entrance when you and Hound exchanged a quiet word. Nothing explicit. Just a hand brushing your elbow. A smile that lasted a beat too long.
Fox’s jaw tightened. His arms crossed. Thorn looked over and said nothing—but the expression said everything.
Later, when the command room emptied out, Chuchi found Fox still standing there, distracted, his gaze distant.
“Commander?” she asked gently.
Fox blinked out of it. “Senator.”
She stepped closer. “Are you alright?”
He didn’t answer right away.
Chuchi, soft but sharp as ever, looked toward the hall you’d disappeared down. “She was always going to be a difficult one to hold, wasn’t she?”
Fox exhaled, low and conflicted. “She never belonged to anyone. I knew that.”
“But you wanted her anyway.”
He glanced at Chuchi then, just briefly. “I wanted… something simple. She’s not simple. And neither are you.”
Chuchi smiled tightly, painfully. “I’m not simple. But I do make decisions.”
She left him standing there with that.
⸻
Your office was quiet for once. You stood by the window, arms folded, staring out across the city while VX read off your schedule and R9 sat in the corner… drawing crude holographic reenactments of the previous night on your datapad.
“R9,” you said without turning around. “I will factory reset you.”
He beeped, sulking audibly.
“I can hear that attitude,” VX added, passing him with a towel. “If she doesn’t, I will factory reset you.”
You smiled faintly and went back to your thoughts. The air had shifted. The square had skewed. And somewhere deep in the Senate and Guard halls… things were about to get more complicated.
⸻
The morning air at the Senate Tower was unusually crisp. You stepped out of the speeder, flanked by Maera and VX-7. R9 brought up the rear, grumbling about having to behave himself in public.
And then came the sharp sound of boots—Hound, already waiting at the base of the steps.
Not in the shadows this time. Not quiet or distant.
He greeted you in full view of Senate staff, Guard personnel, and the few reporters waiting on the fringes.
“Senator,” he said, voice smooth but firm.
“Hound,” you replied, raising a brow. “Early today.”
“I thought I’d escort you up myself,” he said easily. “I know how the halls get… cluttered.”
Maera gave a discreet cough to hide her knowing grin.
You glanced at him, searching, reading. “Trying to start rumors?”
He leaned in slightly. “No. I’m trying to start a pattern.”
R9 beeped in what sounded like scandalized glee.
You smiled despite yourself. “Careful, Sergeant. I might get used to that.”
⸻
The upper atrium buzzed with mingling Senators, Guard officers, and invited Jedi. Drinks flowed, polite words filled the air like smoke, and nothing important was ever really said out loud.
You stood near the balcony, Hound by your side, his stance casual but unmistakably yours. He made no attempt to hide the fact he was there for you. Every look, every nod, every quiet murmur in your direction made it clear.
And people noticed.
Fox noticed.
Across the hall, the Commander stood with Chuchi, her blue cloak draped neatly over her shoulders, her posture a touch more relaxed than usual.
He wasn’t watching you this time—not exactly. He was watching Hound. Watching how natural it seemed.
Chuchi followed his gaze and tilted her head. “Regretting something?”
Fox gave the smallest shake of his head. “Observing.”
She sipped from her glass, then spoke gently. “You don’t have to talk to me like you’re writing a field report, Commander.”
He blinked, then let out the smallest breath of a chuckle. “Habit.”
She glanced at him sideways, then added, “You know… we could make a good habit of this. Talking. Being seen together.”
He looked at her then—really looked.
She was offering something real. Something without barbed wires. Something that didn’t ask him to fight through smoke to see what was there.
“I’d like that,” he said quietly.
Chuchi smiled. Not triumphant. Not possessive. Just… warm.
⸻
Hound was listening to a brief report from a junior officer, but his hand grazed yours beneath the table. A quiet, firm pressure.
You didn’t move away.
The contact was seen.
Thorn narrowed his eyes from across the room. Cody caught it and just hummed, sipping from his glass. Even Plo Koon gave a slightly more observant glance than usual from where he stood with Windu.
You leaned closer to Hound. “We’re being watched.”
His mouth quirked. “I know. Let them.”
And for the first time in a while, it didn’t feel like a triangle.
It felt like something more complicated.
And far more worth the risk.
⸻
Later that night Chuchi stood at Fox’s side at the landing platform. There was no awkwardness in her presence. She was calm. Solid.
Fox looked out over the Coruscanti skyline and finally broke the silence.
“She’ll always be a fire I’m drawn to,” he said, voice low. “But fires burn, and I’m tired of getting burned.”
Chuchi simply nodded. “Then stop standing in the flames.”
Fox turned to her. “And start standing with you?”
“If you’re ready,” she said. “I won’t wait forever. But I won’t walk away just yet.”
He nodded once. Slowly.
⸻
The skies over Coruscant were unusually clear tonight, a shimmer of starlight bleeding through the light pollution. It was a rare calm.
You leaned back into Hound’s chest on your apartment balcony, a warm cup of spiced tea in hand. His arms were around you, solid and sure, resting just below your ribs. Grizzer snored softly inside by the door, and one of the handmaidens—probably Ila—was humming as she cleaned up from dinner.
“Not bad for a long day of Senate chaos,” Hound said, his voice quiet against the shell of your ear.
You snorted. “Aren’t they all long days?”
“Yes. But lately… you don’t carry them the same.”
You turned slightly to face him, your profile catching in the golden light of the city. “And what exactly do I carry now, Sergeant?”
He looked at you, eyes warm and unshaking. “Something real. With me.”
That disarmed you more than it should have.
You gave a soft laugh, shaking your head. “You’re becoming dangerously romantic, Hound.”
“I blame the handmaidens. Maera’s been giving me pointers.”
⸻
Fox stood beside Chuchi on the outer mezzanine of the Senate complex, watching the after-hours city buzz. They had both left the function early, preferring the quiet.
She offered him a half-smile, something softer than she usually showed in public.
“You didn’t even flinch when they brought up her new bill,” Chuchi noted, nodding toward the echoing chamber behind them.
Fox’s mouth quirked. “I’ve learned when to speak and when to listen. She and I… we’re not at odds. Just walking different roads.”
Chuchi reached for his hand, just briefly. “And now you’re on mine.”
Fox nodded once. “It’s steadier ground.”
Their relationship wasn’t loud. It wasn’t full of sparks or danger.
It was the kind of quiet strength that soldiers rarely got to experience. And maybe that’s why he clung to it.
⸻
Later that week, you crossed paths again at a formal reception. Fox, in his dress armor, stood beside Chuchi. You with Hound, his hand resting lightly at your lower back as he murmured something that made you smile.
Fox saw it.
And for the first time in weeks, the look in his eyes wasn’t longing. It was peace.
He nodded toward you.
You nodded back.
It was over. The tension. The rivalry. The ache.
Not forgotten. But resolved.
Chuchi looped her arm through Fox’s, leaning close. “You okay?”
He glanced down at her, his answer simple. “Better than I’ve been in a long time.”
⸻
Back at Your Apartment Maera was running the evening reports with VX, while Ila played soft music through the speakers. R9, curiously well-behaved, was curled up at the foot of the couch like some pet beast.
You stepped in from the hall, dress heels off, hair let down.
Hound looked up from the couch. “Long day?”
“Long enough,” you replied.
He opened an arm for you. “Come here, Senator.”
And you did.
You weren’t a storm anymore. You were a sunrise.
And it was about time.
No more games. No more waiting. Just choices made, and paths finally walked.
⸻
EPILOGUE:
Several years into the reign of the Empire.
The skies of Coruscant no longer shimmered.
They smothered.
Thick clouds of smog and smoke clung to the towers like rot, and the brilliant spires of the Senate were now reduced to shadows beneath the Empire’s long arm. The rotunda stood silent. Gutted. Museumed. Its voice—your voice—silenced.
You were older now. Not old. But seasoned. A relic by Imperial standards.
The red of your senatorial robes had been replaced by somber greys and silks that whispered through empty hallways. You had not spoken in session in years. Not since the body had been stripped of meaning.
But you returned today.
Not for politics.
For memory.
Your boots echoed across the great hall of the abandoned Senate, your handmaidens long gone. Maera had vanished in the purge. Ila had married a Republic officer and fled to the Mid Rim. VX-7 had been decommissioned by the Empire for “behavioral instability.” You had buried his shattered chassis yourself.
Only R9 remained.
The little astromech trailed behind you, his plated casing dull with age, but still stubbornly functional. A grumbling, violent, loyal thing. When they tried to wipe his memory, he electrocuted the technician and disappeared for two years. When he came back, he returned to your side without explanation. You never asked.
You reached the center of the hall—the old speaking platform.
Closed your eyes.
He had stood here once, flanked by red and white armor. Fox.
You had loved him. Fiercely. Then you had lost him. Even now, you weren’t sure if it was to the Empire or to himself. Word came of his reassignment. Rumors of reconditioning. Rumors of defection. None confirmed. His armor never turned up.
Hound… Hound had died in the early rebellion skirmishes, trying to save refugees in the Outer Rim. You’d read the report yourself. Twice. Then deleted it. Grizzer had outlived him. You received the beast, years later. Half-wild and scarred. You kept him at your estate. The last thing Hound had ever loved.
You opened your eyes.
At the base of the podium sat a pair of red clone boots.
Old. Polished.
Ceremonial.
You placed a hand on them and let the silence hold you.
Outside, a storm rolled over the skyline.
R9 beeped low beside you. A mournful note.
“Don’t start with me,” you muttered.
The droid nudged your leg.
You looked out at Coruscant, then up at the distant shadow of the Imperial Palace—formerly the Jedi Temple.
And you smiled. Just slightly.
“They think it’s over,” you whispered. “But embers remember how to burn.”
In the ruins of the Republic, love and rebellion had one thing in common—neither stayed dead forever.
⸻
Previous Part
Warnings: slightly sexually suggestive
⸻
You swore he was doing it on purpose.
That whole “silent and brooding” thing he had going on? Weaponized. His voice, low and gravelly, the way he leaned against walls like they were built just for him, arms crossed and muscles on full display. He moved like he had time to kill and knew exactly how dangerous he looked doing it.
You were not immune. Maker, you were struggling.
It didn’t help that the Hunter Effect seemed to get worse during downtime. No blasterfire, no missions, just a hot planet, a half-broken fan in the corner of the Marauder, and him doing pull-ups in a sweat-soaked tank top like he was in some holodrama made for thirst traps.
You were trying not to stare. Failing miserably.
Hunter dropped from the bar with a soft thud and turned toward you like he’d felt the heat of your gaze. Probably had. Damn enhanced senses.
“You alright over there?” he asked, voice rich with amusement.
“Fine,” you replied, a little too quickly.
He raised a brow as he walked past, close enough to brush your shoulder with his—on purpose, probably. You bit your lip. Hard.
“Y’look a little flushed,” he said, and there was that grin. The knowing one. “Could be the heat. Could be something else.”
“Could be your ego,” you fired back, refusing to look up from your datapad.
He didn’t answer, but you could feel the smirk behind you.
Later that night, the heat stuck around—and so did he. The others were asleep or off doing their own thing, and you ended up side by side with Hunter near the edge of the ship’s loading ramp, sitting in the dark, stars overhead. You were close—closer than you usually allowed yourself to be.
He didn’t say anything at first. Just passed you a flask of something strong and let the silence settle.
Then—
“You know,” he said, voice quiet, “I’ve noticed how you look at me.”
Your breath caught.
“I don’t mind,” he continued, “but I figured I’d give you the chance to stop pretending.”
You turned to face him. He was already looking at you, intense and calm, like he’d been waiting for this moment.
“Pretending?” you asked, trying to play dumb.
He gave a soft chuckle. “You’re not subtle, mesh’la. And I’ve got good instincts.”
Your lips parted, but nothing came out. Because honestly… yeah. He was right. And you were caught.
Hunter shifted closer, gaze dropping to your lips just briefly—enough.
“I’ve been watching you too,” he added, voice low now, like a secret. “Listening to how your heartbeat changes when I get close. I like the way you look at me. Like you’re thinking about what it’d be like.”
Your throat went dry. “To do what?”
He smirked. “To ride.”
You choked on air.
“I meant a speeder,” he said, utterly deadpan.
You shoved his arm. “You’re a menace.”
“You love it.”
You paused.
“Yeah,” you admitted softly. “I really do.”
His smile dropped into something deeper, something real. His hand brushed yours, lingered.
“Then maybe it’s time we stop dancing around it.”
You looked at him—really looked. The man you fought beside, trusted with your life, laughed with, wanted like nothing else.
“Okay,” you said, voice barely above a whisper. “Let’s ride.”
He leaned in, lips ghosting yours.
“Hold on tight, sweetheart.”
⸻
Summary: After a blast on Umbara, Rex saves you and you are forced to remain in a bacta tank the rest of the campaign. You try to reach out to Rex through the force and he hears your warnings about Krell’s betrayal. When the truth comes out, Rex is consumed with guilt.
The skies over Umbara were poison.
Choked in mist and war.
And somewhere beneath it all, you bled into the dirt.
The blast had taken you hard—chest scorched, body broken. Rex had been the first to reach you, his voice cutting through the chaos, calling your name like it meant something more than rank or Jedi title. He held you as the medics arrived, armor slick with mud and grief.
He didn’t let anyone else carry you.
Not even Fives.
Not even when General Krell barked at him to return to the line.
Once the 501st finally breached the airbase, Rex made sure you were stabilized in the nearest field medcenter. They submerged you into a bacta tank, pale and silent, your saber charred and clipped to Rex’s belt instead of your own.
He stood watch over you every night when he could—alone, visor off, hands balled into fists. Fives had noticed. Hardcase had joked about it once.
He never joked about it again.
_ _ _ _
The First Warning
It came while Rex was reviewing troop formations alone.
A sudden pressure behind his eyes, like a gust of wind had blown through his skull.
“Rex…”
Your voice, faint—like a ripple across still water.
He froze, datapad slipping from his hands.
“General?”
No answer. Just the distant hum of machinery and the low buzz of the bacta tank nearby. He turned toward it. You floated within, unconscious, brow furrowed like you were fighting something that didn’t live in the waking world.
Then—again.
“He is not what he seems…”
Rex’s heart skipped. “General? What—what does that mean?”
But the connection faded, leaving only silence and misty breath against the tank’s glass.
The Second Warning
Rex didn’t sleep that night. Or the next.
Krell was pushing them too hard. The losses were piling. Something was off.
And then it happened again.
He was armoring up when he felt it—a cold sliver down his spine.
“They are not your enemy…”
“He is.”
Rex’s blood ran cold.
“Who?” he whispered into the dark. “Krell? You mean Krell?”
But again, the connection blinked out like a dying star.
He ran his gloved hands through his hair, helmet dangling from his side.
It made no sense.
Krell was a Jedi. Brutal, sure—but wasn’t war brutal by nature? Could he really be turning against them?
_ _ _ _
The Betrayal
And then they were deployed. Told the enemy had stolen clone armor. Told to open fire.
The forest exploded with blasterfire and screams.
And then—
"Cease fire!" Rex’s voice tore through the chaos. “Cease fire!”
It was too late. Bodies littered the jungle floor.
Clones.
Not Umbarans.
His own brothers.
He fell to his knees, helmet slipping from his fingers, the sound of battle replaced by the echo of your voice—
“They are not your enemy. He is.”
He finally understood.
Krell.
He had known. You’d tried to tell him. From inside that tank. From wherever your mind had drifted in the Force, tangled in pain and bacta and fear for the men you both loved.
He felt sick.
Krell needed to pay for this.
_ _ _ _
After Krell’s capture—after the rage, the betrayal, the ghostly silence of the men—
Rex stood outside the medcenter again. Watching you.
You were healing, slowly. Still submerged. Still fighting to wake.
He placed a gloved hand against the glass.
“I’m sorry,” he whispered. “You tried to tell me. I didn’t listen. I should’ve—”
He swallowed hard, guilt a coiled wire around his throat.
“I’m not losing you too.”
And somewhere inside the Force, you stirred.
_ _ _ _
The Force shifted.
Like a breath held too long, finally exhaled.
A weight lifted.
A darkness lifted.
You surged back into consciousness before your eyes even opened—gasping silently in the thick blue haze of bacta, heart racing, the phantom echo of betrayal still ringing through your veins.
He was dead.
Executed.
Dogma.
You felt it.
The weight of his blaster in his hands. The fury. The confusion. The pain.
It is done, the Force whispered.
The war on Umbara was over.
But the ghosts would linger.
You woke gasping, dragging in breath like it hurt. The medical droid flinched back with a startled beep. Your lungs ached. Every inch of you was stiff and raw from mending bones and torn flesh. But you were awake.
And more importantly—alive.
“Captain!” someone called outside. “She’s waking up!”
You barely had time to get out of the tank before boots pounded toward you. Rex stormed in, helmet tucked under one arm, eyes wide and wild and disbelieving. You gave him a weak smile.
“Took you long enough,” you rasped.
He stopped cold. A dozen emotions flickered across his face. Disbelief. Relief. Guilt.
“I thought I’d lost you,” he said quietly.
You leaned back against the pillows, wincing. “You didn’t.”
He stepped closer, slowly, like he couldn’t quite trust the sight of you.
“But I lost them,” he said, voice low. “And I didn’t stop it.”
Your heart cracked open.
“I tried to warn you,” you whispered, reaching out. He took your hand instantly, holding it like a lifeline.
“I know,” he said. “I heard you. In my head. I thought I was losing it.”
You gave his hand a soft squeeze. “You weren’t. I was with you. As much as I could be.”
Rex’s shoulders dropped. The weight of war carved deep into his bones. For a moment, he looked every bit the tired, worn man behind the armor. And you loved him more for it.
_ _ _ _
The medcenter was quiet. Clones moved like shadows—silent, grieving, stunned. You sat upright now, draped in a simple robe, IV lines gone. Still sore. Still healing. But awake.
Rex lingered by your bedside long after the others had gone. He hadn’t spoken in minutes.
Finally, he said:
“They were mine.”
You looked up.
“My brothers. And I shot at them. I followed orders. I didn't question it. Not until it was too late.”
He was shaking. Just slightly. But it was there.
You moved closer, taking his hands again.
“You trusted Krell because he wore the robes. Because that’s what they trained you to do,” you said gently. “You weren’t wrong for trusting him, Rex. He was wrong for abusing it.”
His jaw clenched.
“I should’ve listened to you. I should’ve—”
“Stop.” You reached up, brushing a hand against his cheek, the first real touch you’d shared in weeks. “You did what you could with what you had. And when it mattered—you stopped him. You saved who you could. And you survived.”
He closed his eyes, swallowing hard.
“I don't feel like I did.”
You leaned in, brushing a soft, chaste kiss against his forehead. The kind only you were allowed to give him. The kind no one else could ever see.
“You did,” you murmured. “And you’re not alone.”
Rex didn’t say anything, but his fingers tightened around yours, grounding himself in your warmth.
The battle was over. But the war, within and without, would go on.
The fortress was carved straight into the mountainside — dark metal and cold stone, its towers punching through the mist like jagged teeth. Separatist banners snapped in the wind, and scout droids buzzed along the perimeter like angry insects.
You crouched with Obi-Wan behind a ridge just above the valley floor. The cadets were lined up beside you, low and quiet, eyes locked on the compound.
Anakin was, unsurprisingly, nowhere to be seen.
“Alright,” you whispered, tapping your datapad. “I count four main patrol paths. One blind spot. Minimal aerial surveillance.”
Kenobi nodded. “We can use the cliffside tunnel. I’ve seen this kind of layout before — there’s usually an access vent leading into the communications wing.”
You turned to your boys. “No heroics. Stay behind cover, stick to the plan, and no loud noises. Got it?”
They all nodded.
Except for Bacara, who raised a hand like he had a question.
You narrowed your eyes. “If this is about blowing something up—”
“I wasn’t gonna say that.”
“No loud noises.”
“Fine.”
Just as you leaned in to start your descent, a distant buzz and then a crash echoed from the other side of the fortress wall.
Everyone froze.
Obi-Wan sighed deeply. “That wasn’t us, was it?”
You didn’t answer — because right then, Anakin skidded down the slope, cloak half-burnt, covered in dust and grinning like an idiot.
“Hey!” he called, too loud. “Good news! I found a side entrance—”
A siren wailed.
Turrets rotated.
Searchlights snapped to life and started scanning the cliffs.
You turned, face blank. “Did you trigger an alarm?”
Anakin pointed behind him. “Technically? The droid did.”
Rex, next to you, groaned into his gloves. “We’re all gonna die.”
Kenobi was already getting up, lightsaber in hand, perfectly composed as chaos exploded below.
“Plans change,” he muttered. “We improvise.”
“Oh yes,” you said flatly, drawing your blaster. “Let’s all just improvise our way into a heavily armed Separatist base. That’s definitely how I planned to spend my day.”
He gave you a look as you both started moving down the slope.
“You know,” Obi-Wan said over the rising noise, “I never thought I’d see the day you would be the voice of reason.”
You ducked behind a boulder, covering the cadets as they followed in. “Yeah, well, someone has to be the adult while your Padawan’s off starting a land war with a power converter.”
He chuckled under his breath. “You could always take him. Add him to your little army of foundlings.”
You gave him a flat look. “I already have five too many.”
Behind you, Fox tripped over his own boots and nearly bowled into Cody.
Kenobi raised an eyebrow.
You added: “And they bite.”
————
Inside the base, it was colder than the mountain winds outside — all durasteel corridors and flickering lights, the buzz of power conduits echoing through the walls like a warning.
You crouched behind a support pillar as another pair of droid sentries clanked past. The group had slipped in through the broken emergency access hatch Anakin had accidentally discovered — half of it still smoldering from whatever he'd done to override the lock.
You turned to Obi-Wan in a sharp whisper. “Splitting up is a terrible idea.”
“It’s efficient,” he replied calmly, peering around the corner. “You and I retrieve the senator’s daughter. Anakin and your foundlings run a perimeter diversion.”
“They’re kids.”
“It’s efficient,” he replied calmly, peering around the corner. “You and I retrieve the senator’s daughter. Anakin and your cadets run a perimeter diversion.”
“They’re kids.”
“Your kids,” he said smoothly. “And as you’ve reminded me — foundlings are expected to fight.”
You clenched your jaw. “They’re not ready for this.”
He met your eyes. “Neither were we, once.”
That stopped you cold.
He lowered his voice, just a touch. “They need the experience. He needs the responsibility.”
You looked across the corridor — to where Anakin was gesturing wildly with his hands, trying to give the cadets some kind of whispered briefing. Bacara was clearly ignoring him. Wolffe already had a stun grenade in hand.
You exhaled through your nose. “If they die—”
“They won’t.”
You gave him one last glare, then looked back at the boys. “If anything goes wrong, scream.”
Fox raised a hand. “Like—?”
“I will hear you. I will end whoever hurt you. Just scream.”
The cadets nodded, suddenly a lot more serious.
Anakin gave a quick salute. “We’ll meet you back at the east exit.”
Obi-Wan glanced at you. “Shall we?”
You rolled your eyes and moved out, both of you slipping into the shadowed hallway like water down a blade.
———
Your part of the mission was quick and clean. Every step was coordinated — you swept forward through dark halls while Obi-Wan silently disabled security systems, his movements graceful and lethal.
You’d never worked with a Jedi like this before — and you had to admit, it was… oddly satisfying.
No words were wasted. He moved, you moved. You dropped a droid with a blaster shot, he caught its partner’s blaster arm mid-swing and twisted it clean off. The two of you cleared the detention block in under four minutes.
“Cell 14,” Obi-Wan said, checking the datapad he pulled from a guard’s belt.
You were already unlocking the panel.
Inside, the senator’s daughter was scared but unharmed — pale, dressed in rich fabric, bound at the wrists.
“I’ve got her,” you said, pulling her close and cutting the ties.
She stared up at you. “Who are you?”
You gave her a faint smile. “Someone your mother owes a drink.”
———
Elsewhere, it was less smooth.
Anakin’s plan — and you used the word plan very loosely — had apparently included sneaking into the droid depot and causing a “small, contained distraction.”
That turned into blowing up a weapons rack, stealing a tank, and getting stuck in a three-way chase down the hallway with spider droids, sirens, and Wolffe yelling, “I SAID I WASN’T GONNA BLOW ANYTHING UP, BUT THEN HE HANDED ME A DETONATOR—”
“I thought it was a flashlight!” Anakin shouted back.
Rex was clutching the controls of the tank like his life depended on it. Bacara was on top of the thing firing wildly and screaming gleefully. Cody and Fox were halfway hanging out of the hatch, shouting directions and laughing hysterically.
“THIS IS NOT STEALTH!” Fox screamed.
“I’M DISTRACTING THEM!” Bacara grinned. “DISTRACTION MISSION SUCCESSFUL!”
“DEFINITELY not ready,” you muttered, back with Obi-Wan as you made your way to the rendezvous.
You could hear the tank before you even saw them.
Obi-Wan glanced sideways at you with a completely straight face. “Would now be a bad time to say you were right?”
You stared at the smoke trail in the distance. “I hate you.”
———
The escape was… a mess.
They made it out, of course. Somehow.
With a half-destroyed tank rolling in front of the group as cover, explosions at their backs, and Anakin cheering like they’d just won a podrace, the cadets had sprinted across the canyon with blaster bolts chasing their heels.
You’d covered the senator’s daughter with your own body the whole way.
Kenobi had deflected shot after shot, graceful and impassive, the calm center of a storm.
Once they’d finally cleared the base and reconnected with the ship, you spent the first ten minutes pacing the ramp with your helmet tucked under your arm, muttering curses in three different languages.
Then, after a full headcount and emergency takeoff, you finally collapsed into a seat in the main hold.
Everyone was quiet.
Even Anakin.
The cadets sat in a circle, scratched and bruised, letting adrenaline drain from their systems. You watched them from your spot, arms crossed, boots heavy on the floor.
Cody was staring at his hands like they didn’t belong to him.
Fox hadn’t said a word.
Bacara was still grinning, but it was thinner now.
You leaned forward, voice low. “You all did good.”
Five pairs of eyes turned to you.
“Not perfect. Not clean. But good,” you said, and your voice softened, just a touch. “You followed orders. You adapted. You survived.”
Wolffe swallowed, eyes flicking to the floor.
You stood, stepping forward, and placed a hand on the back of Cody’s neck — warm and grounding.
“You saw war today. The real thing. Not just drills. Not just training. And you all made it out.”
There was silence again.
Then Bacara mumbled, “Even if Skywalker tried to kill us all.”
“I heard that,” Anakin called from the cockpit.
“Good.”
You turned toward the boys again. “Rest up. You earned it.”
As they started to settle into sleep wherever they could — curled in corners of the hold, some using their packs as pillows — you moved quietly to the front of the ship.
Kenobi was leaning against the wall, arms crossed, watching the stars pass through the viewports.
“You think they’re alright?” you asked, keeping your voice low.
He glanced at you. “They will be.”
You tilted your head. “So. What happened to your ship, exactly?”
He didn’t blink. “Mysterious failure.”
“Uh huh.”
“Sabotage, maybe.”
“Right.”
“Couldn’t possibly have been someone crash landing our ship.”
You sighed. “You Jedi are the worst.”
“I get that a lot.”
———
You hated the smell of Coruscant. Too clean. Too bright. Like chrome and false smiles.
But the senator’s estate was quiet, at least. High above the clouds, the landing platform was bordered by hanging gardens and silent droids, the building towering like a temple to wealth and secrecy.
You disembarked with the senator’s daughter at your side — safe, whole, and grateful.
The senator met you personally, eyes shining with relief. They pulled you into a tight embrace and whispered, “I owe you everything.”
Then they looked at your five cadets, lined up neatly and looking everywhere but directly at the senator.
“These boys…” the senator said slowly. “Are they—?”
You cut in smoothly. “Foundlings. Mine.”
A pause.
The senator raised an eyebrow. “Fascinating. They’re… sharp. Disciplined.”
“Lucky genes,” you said, smiling coolly.
Behind you, Fox was mouthing don’t say anything at Wolffe, who was visibly biting his tongue.
The senator looked thoughtful. “You know… there may be a place for them in security, when the time is right. We could find funding. Official channels.”
Your blood went cold.
But you smiled anyway.
“I’ll think about it.”
The senator nodded, clearly meaning well — but clearly dangerous.
You filed it away. Another warning.
They were not ready to be seen.
Not yet.
That night, back on the ship, the boys sat on the floor around you again, waiting for your orders.
But you just looked at them — really looked at them.
Wolffe’s bruise under his eye. Rex’s busted knuckles. Bacara’s scraped cheek. Cody’s silence. Fox’s slumped shoulders.
You said nothing at first.
Then, softly: “You did good.”
Five sets of eyes flicked up.
You gave them a small nod. “Get some rest. More training tomorrow.”
“Yes, buir,” they all said at once.
And you didn’t correct them.
Not this time.
————
Kamino had never felt this quiet.
Rain still lashed against the glass corridors. The white lights still hummed. Clones still trained, marched, sparred. But the air carried a tension now — tight and sterile, like the Kaminoans were watching every step.
Because they were.
The cadets noticed it first.
Extra cameras in the mess hall.
Silent observers hovering near the training chambers.
One of the newer units mentioned being taken aside and scanned after sparring.
And then, there was the way the five field cadets were treated.
Rex, Cody, Bacara, Fox, and Wolffe.
They were whispered about now — envied, doubted, even resented.
Rex heard a pair of cadets muttering behind his back in the armory.
“Think they’re better than us.”
“Just ‘cause they left Kamino.”
Bacara caught a shove in the hallway.
Fox started training harder, angrier.
You noticed it — how they stuck close together now. A small, tight unit. Good for war. Bad for brothers.
You were in the middle of correcting Bacara’s form during a sparring drill when you saw Jango watching from the overlook.
He didn’t call out to you. Just tilted his head, a silent signal.
You followed.
He was leaning against the wall in a private corridor, arms crossed.
“They’re pissed,” he said, voice low and steady.
You didn’t need to ask who.
“The Kaminoans?”
He nodded once. “Didn’t like you taking your cadets off-world. Especially not without their approval. You rattled their control.”
You leaned your back against the wall, arms folded. “That was your idea.”
He huffed a short breath of amusement. “They’re already talking about locking down field excursions. Increased isolation protocols.”
Your jaw tensed. “They’re kids. Not droids.”
“They’re property,” he said bitterly. “According to Kamino.”
You looked down at the floor, teeth clenched.
“They’re more than that,” you muttered.
He gave you a look. “Then you better teach them to act like it. Before this place eats them alive.”
————
Later that day, it happened.
Two cadets shoved Fox after a sparring match. Said he thought he was too good for the rest of them now.
Fox didn’t fight back.
But Wolffe did.
Cody pulled him off before it escalated, but not before everyone saw.
The whole training floor went dead silent.
You walked into the middle of it.
And no one said a word.
You turned, looking around at all of them — rows of half-grown clones, armor scuffed, breath caught.
“Line up.”
They did.
All of them. Even the ones still panting from the fight.
You stood in front of them, helmet tucked under your arm, rain streaking down the windows behind you.
“I’ve been too soft on you.”
A murmur rippled through the room.
You raised your voice.
“I wanted you to feel like brothers. I wanted you to find your names. To find yourselves. But that doesn’t mean forgetting what you are.”
You started to pace, slow and sharp.
“You are soldiers. You are Mandalorian-trained. You are disciplined. And above all — you are loyal.”
A pause.
“Not to me. To each other.”
They watched you like they were trying to breathe your words in.
“This?” You pointed at the dried blood on Wolffe’s lip. “This jealousy? This division? It’s not strength. It’s weakness. And weakness gets you killed.”
You stopped walking, facing them head-on.
“I don’t care who went off-world. I don’t care who hasn’t earned a name yet. You are brothers. And from today on, the training gets harder. The drills get longer. The expectations rise.”
A long, steady beat.
“Earn your place. Earn your name. Earn each other.”
No one moved.
No one dared.
You dropped your voice just enough.
“This is your warning. Tomorrow — the real training begins.”
You turned on your heel and walked out.
Behind you, they stood taller.
Silent.
Together.
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