Commander Fox x Senator Reader x Commander Thorn
Summary: The senator becomes the quiet obsession of two elite commanders, sparking a slow-burn love triangle beneath the surface of duty and politics.
If anyone ever asked, you’d tell them you became a Senator by accident.
You weren’t born with a silver tongue or bred in the soft halls of Coruscant. No. You earned your seat by scraping your way up through the mess of planetary diplomacy, one bitter compromise at a time. And somehow—against your better judgment—you’d gotten good at it.
Politics were war without blasters.
And most days, you’d rather take a shot to the chest than attend another committee meeting.
Still, here you were—draped in crimson silks, shoulders squared like armor, and face carved into the perfect expression of interest. The Senate roared with debate. Systems cried for resources. Sycophants whispered and bartered behind you. But your voice—when you chose to use it—cut through like a vibroblade. That’s what made you dangerous.
Padmé once told you that change was a quiet thing, made in corridors and council rooms, not just battlefields. You told her it felt more like drowning slowly in bureaucracy. She just smiled like she knew a secret you didn’t.
The Senate was a performance.
A stage lined with robes instead of armor, filled with actors who knew how to posture but not how to listen.
You hated it.
And yet, you were one of its stars—elected against the odds, sharp-tongued, unrelenting, and quietly feared by those who underestimated you. You never pretended to like the political game. You just played it better than most.
Still, days like this tested your patience. The emergency session dragged past the second hour, voices rising, layered with false concern and masked self-interest. You didn’t roll your eyes—but it was a near thing.
“Senator,” came the calm voice of a nearby aide. “Security detail has arrived to sweep the outer hall. Commander Fox, Commander Thorn.”
You turned your head slightly as the two men entered the chamber.
Fox came first.
Red armor, regulation-sharp posture, unreadable expression. His presence was quiet but absolute, a man built for control. He walked with measured steps, every movement efficient. You watched him briefly—no longer than anyone else in the room—and noted how his gaze swept the perimeter with military precision.
He didn’t look at you. Not directly. Not for more than a second.
But you noticed the exact moment he registered you.
His shoulders didn’t shift. His mouth didn’t twitch. Nothing gave him away.
But you were good at reading people. And Fox? He was good at not being read.
Thorn followed.
Equally sharp, but louder in presence. His armor bore the polished gleam of someone who took pride in every inch of presentation. He offered a crisp nod to the aides and exchanged a brief, professional word with Senator Organa.
His eyes passed over you once. No pause. No flicker. But the angle of his head adjusted half a degree your way when he moved to stand by the chamber doors. Like he’d marked your position—nothing more.
Professional. Respectful. Untouched.
You exhaled slowly and turned back to your datapad.
Two Commanders. Two versions of unshakable.
You’d been warned of their reputations, of course. Fox, the stoic hammer of Coruscant. Thorn, the bold shield. Both deeply loyal to the Guard. Both rarely assigned together. Their presence meant the Senate was bracing for tension—possibly violence.
You liked them already.
Not because they were charming. Not because they were handsome—though they were, infuriatingly so.
But because they didn’t stare. Didn’t smirk. Didn’t approach with the practiced familiarity of most men who wanted something from a Senator.
No, they were disciplined. Detached.
And that, somehow, made them more dangerous than the rest.
⸻
Later, as the session adjourned and conversation bled into the marble corridors, you passed by them on your way to the lift.
Fox gave a slight incline of his head. Barely a greeting.
Thorn stood perfectly still, gaze straight ahead.
You didn’t stop. You didn’t speak.
But as the lift doors closed behind you, you felt it in your chest—that faint, inexplicable tightness. The kind that warned you of a fight you hadn’t seen coming.
And would never be able to vote your way out of.
⸻
The reception was loud.
Not in volume—but in elegance. Every glass clink, every diplomatic smile, every strategically placed compliment. That was how politicians shouted: with opulence, posture, and carefully crafted subtext.
You stood among it all, still in your robes from earlier, the deep crimson of your sleeves catching the soft amber light of the chandeliers. Surrounding you were names that made the galaxy shiver: Organa, Amidala, Mothma, Chuchi. Allies. Friends. Survivors.
You sipped something you didn’t like and watched the room, bored.
“Twice in one day?” Mon Mothma leaned in gently. “You deserve a medal.”
“Or a decent drink,” you muttered.
Padmé snorted into her glass.
You gave them a smile—small, real—and let your eyes drift.
And there they were. Again.
Commander Fox stood posted by the far archway.
Commander Thorn lingered near the entry steps. Both in armor. Both on duty. Both immaculately indifferent to the golden reception unfolding around them.
You could’ve ignored them.
You should’ve.
But after a half-hour of polite conversation and nothing to sink your teeth into, the idea of a genuine challenge was too appealing to resist.
You slipped away from your group, threading through gowns and murmurs. Your steps were casual but deliberate.
Thorn noticed first. You caught the faint movement of his helmet tilting. Then, quickly and without announcement, you redirected toward Fox.
He didn’t flinch. Not when you stopped a polite distance from him. Not when you met his visor directly. Not even when you tilted your head and offered the first word.
“You know,” you said mildly, “you’re very good at pretending I’m not standing here.”
There was a beat of silence.
Then: “I’m on duty, Senator.”
You gave him a slow nod. “So you are. Must be terribly dull work, watching senators pretend they aren’t scheming.”
“I’ve seen worse.”
“Really?” You leaned in slightly. “What’s worse than watching politicians drink for four hours straight?”
He didn’t answer. But there was a pause—a longer one than regulation probably allowed.
Then finally: “This isn’t the place for conversation.”
“Neither was the Senate floor,” you replied, tone still light. “But you seemed comfortable enough ignoring me there, too.”
At that, something shifted. Barely.
His stance remained rigid. But there was a tightness in his voice now. Controlled tension.
“I don’t make it a habit to engage senators unnecessarily.”
You smiled. Not smug—genuinely amused.
“Don’t worry, Commander. I’m not here to engage you unnecessarily. I just wanted to see if you had a voice beneath all that silence.”
Another pause.
Then, quietly, like it had to be pried loose from steel:
“You’ve heard it now.”
And with that, he returned his gaze forward, unreadable once again.
You lingered a second longer than appropriate. Then turned, walking back to the crowd without looking over your shoulder.
Across the room, Thorn watched the entire exchange.
Didn’t move. Didn’t comment. But his gaze followed you as you rejoined your peers.
Unlike Fox, Thorn had no need for stillness. His restraint was a choice.
And he’d just decided not to intervene.
Not yet.
⸻
You hated how the armor caught the light.
Crimson and white, clean-cut, unblemished—too perfect. Commander Thorn didn’t just wear his armor; he carried it like a statement. Like confidence forged in durasteel.
He stood near one of the tall reception windows now, half-shadowed by draping silk and flickering light. Unlike Fox, who radiated stillness, Thorn watched everything in motion. His gaze tracked movement like a soldier born for the battlefield—alert, calculating, assessing.
But not unkind.
You’d caught his eye earlier during your exchange with Fox. He hadn’t interfered. Hadn’t so much as shifted his weight. But you saw the way he watched you walk away.
And now, with your patience for schmoozing officially dead, you veered toward him with no hesitation.
He acknowledged you before you spoke. A small nod. That alone told you he was already more accommodating than his brother-in-arms.
“Senator,” he said. Not cold. Not warm. Polite. Neutral.
“Commander Thorn,” you echoed, coming to a stop beside him. “You look like you’ve spent the last hour resisting the urge to roll your eyes.”
His mouth twitched. Almost a smile. “Discipline.”
“Right,” you said dryly. “That thing I’m told I lack.”
“Wouldn’t be so sure. You made it through three conversations with Senator Ask Aak without drawing a weapon.”
“That is discipline,” you murmured, half to yourself.
Thorn’s gaze didn’t waver, but there was something in the tilt of his head, the faint ease in his shoulders. He wasn’t as closed-off as Fox, but still impossibly hard to read. He didn’t lean in. Didn’t flirt. But he listened. Sharply.
“You don’t like these events,” he said plainly.
You raised an eyebrow. “I’m shocked it’s that obvious.”
“You’ve looked at the clock seven times.”
You smirked. “Maybe I was counting the seconds until someone interesting finally spoke to me.”
He said nothing to that—no flustered denial, no cocky retort. Just the same steady, unreadable look. But his fingers tapped once—just once—against the side of his thigh.
Interesting.
“I take it you don’t like politicians,” you added.
“I’m a Coruscant Guard, Senator. I don’t get the luxury of liking or disliking.”
“That’s not an answer.”
He turned his head slightly, visor reflecting soft gold.
“It’s the only one I’m giving you. For now.”
You were about to press that—to tease it open, to see if there was a warmer man behind the armor—but fate, cruel and punctual, had other plans.
“Senator!” came a voice from behind you. Shrill. Forced.
You didn’t have to turn to know who it was.
Senator Orn Free Taa. Slime.
Thorn’s posture straightened by the inch. You fought the urge to groan.
“Senator,” you greeted coolly, turning.
“I must speak with you about your position on the Sevarcos embargo. It’s urgent.” He smiled like a Hutt—greasy and too wide. “We can’t keep putting blind faith in the neutrality of mining guilds.”
You glanced at Thorn once more. He didn’t move. But the angle of his helmet, ever so subtle, told you he was still watching.
You gave him a single step back. The silent kind of goodbye.
He didn’t stop you. But his voice, soft and unhurried, followed you as you turned.
“Be careful, Senator. You look like you’re about to say what you really think.”
You smirked.
“Don’t worry, Commander. I’ve survived worse than honesty.”
⸻
“By the stars,” you hissed as the door closed behind you, muffling the tail end of the diplomatic reception, “I’m going to strangle Taa with his own headtails.”
Mon Mothma, lounging with practiced poise on your office settee, didn’t even flinch. “That’s the third time you’ve threatened to kill a fellow senator this month.”
“It’s not a threat if I have plans.” You flung your datapad onto the desk and tore off your formal sash like it personally offended you. “He cornered me twice. Once about mining guilds, and once about ‘strengthening our bipartisan bond,’ whatever the hell that means.”
Mon hummed, sipping something chilled. “You’re too good at your job. That’s the problem.”
You collapsed beside her, robe twisted at the collar and hair loosening from its earlier neatness. “I swear, if I get one more leering invitation to a strategy meeting over dinner—”
“You’ll start accepting them and sabotaging their food.”
You sighed deeply. “Tempting.”
The soft clink of glass was the only reply for a moment. It was late now. The reception had dwindled, but your irritation hadn’t. The pressure. The performance. The underhanded proposals thinly veiled behind political niceties. You hated it. Hated the hypocrisy. Hated that you had to smile while enduring it.
“I just—” you started again, quieter now. “I didn’t sign up for this to climb power ladders. I wanted to help. Not play diplomat dress-up while watching bills get butchered by people who care more about their name than the outcome.”
Mon glanced sideways at you, ever the picture of composed empathy. “And yet, you still manage to do good.”
You scoffed but said nothing more. Your throat felt tight in that old, familiar way. Not tears. Just frustration. A weight you couldn’t always name.
A polite knock cut the quiet.
You blinked, sat straighter. Mon rose, brushing down her dress with a grace you could never quite copy.
“Enter,” you called, standing as the door slid open.
Commander Fox stepped in.
Of course.
His armor gleamed despite the late hour. Hands clasped behind his back, posture impeccable, expression unreadable as always. A faint shimmer of exhaustion touched the edges of his movements, but it never cracked the facade.
“Apologies for the interruption, Senator,” he said, voice even, “but I’m required to confirm your quarters have been secured following the reception.”
You raised an eyebrow. “You’re personally doing room checks now, Commander?”
“Protocol,” he said simply. “A precaution. There’s been increased chatter about potential targeting of senators affiliated with the Trade Route Oversight.”
You and Mon exchanged a look.
“I’ll give you two a moment,” she said lightly, already stepping out. “Try not to threaten him with silverware.”
The door hissed shut behind her.
You turned to Fox, arms crossing loosely over your chest. “You weren’t stationed here earlier. Thorn had this wing.”
“He was reassigned.”
“How convenient,” you murmured, studying him.
Fox didn’t blink.
You sighed. “Well? Do you need me to stand still while you sweep for bombs? Or is this the part where you sternly lecture me about walking away from my escort earlier?”
To your surprise, there was the slightest pause. A fraction of a beat too long.
“…You’re not as unreadable as you think,” you added, gaze narrowing. “You listen like you’re memorizing every word.”
“I am.”
That surprised you. Just a little.
“But not,” he continued, “because I intend to use any of it. Only because I’ve learned the most dangerous people in the galaxy are the ones everyone else stops listening to.”
Your arms dropped to your sides.
For once, you didn’t have a clever reply. Just a pulse that thudded too loud in the quiet.
Fox stepped past you, eyes scanning the perimeter of the room. His tone was quieter when he spoke again.
“You don’t need to pretend you’re unaffected. Not with me. But you do need to be careful, Senator. You’re surrounded by predators—”
You turned slightly. “And what are you?”
He looked at you then. Finally. Even through the helmet, it felt like impact.
“Trained,” he said.
Then he stepped back toward the door.
“Your quarters are secure. Good night, Senator.”
And just like that, he was gone.
You stood in the silence, heart still. Breath caught somewhere too deep in your chest.
Too good to show interest.
But stars, did he listen.
⸻
Next Chapter
Some things I made
Happy Weekend! I was wondering if you could do an angst fic w/ TBB x Fem!Reader where they’re on a mission and the ground crumbles beneath her and she falls and they think she could be dead? Thanks! Xx
Happy Thursday! Sorry for the delay, I hope this is somewhat what you had in mind😊
The Bad Batch x Fem!Reader
Warnings: Falling, presumed death, grief, survivor’s guilt, panic
The ridge was narrow. Too narrow.
You moved with your blaster raised and your jaw set, following closely behind Wrecker as the team pushed forward. The rocky terrain was riddled with ravines, fault lines, and fractured earth—left scarred by years of shelling and seismic bombardments. The mission was supposed to be simple: infiltrate a Separatist holdout and extract data.
It was never simple.
“Movement on the northwest cliff,” you called into your comm. “Looks like clankers repositioning.”
“Copy that,” Echo’s voice crackled. “Tech, I’m sending coordinates to your pad.”
Hunter glanced back at you, just a flick of his head, a silent confirmation. You nodded. I’m good.
You were always good. Until the ground gave out beneath you.
It was subtle at first—just a soft shift under your boots, like loose gravel. But then came the snap. A hollow, wrenching crack that echoed through the canyon like thunder. The rock splintered beneath your feet. You didn’t have time to scream.
Just time to look up—into Hunter’s eyes.
“[Y/N]—!”
You dropped.
The last thing you saw was his outstretched hand, just a second too late.
Then the world became air and stone and darkness.
⸻
Above, everything exploded into chaos.
Hunter hit the ridge on his knees, arms dragging at loose rock, clawing like an animal trying to dig you back out. “No, no, no—”
Echo slid in beside him, scanning with one cybernetic arm extended. “I can’t see her. It’s—kriff—it’s a vertical drop. She went straight down.”
“I should’ve grabbed her!” Wrecker was pacing in wild circles, fists clenched, eyes wet. “I was right in front of her—I should’ve—she was right there!”
“She didn’t even scream,” Echo murmured. “She just… vanished.”
“I’m scanning for vitals,” Tech said, already tapping furiously at his datapad, but his voice was thin. “There’s no signal. No movement. Her comm—either it was destroyed in the fall or… or she’s—”
“Don’t finish that sentence,” Hunter snapped, voice like a knife.
The wind howled through the crevice she’d fallen into, dragging dust and silence with it.
Crosshair stood several meters back, motionless, his DC-17M dangling loosely in his grip.
“Say it,” Echo growled, glaring at him. “You’ve been quiet this whole time. Just say whatever snide thing you’re thinking so we can all lose it together.”
Crosshair’s eyes flicked up, storm-gray and unreadable.
“She’s dead.”
“Shut your mouth!” Wrecker roared, storming toward him, but Echo shoved himself in between.
“She could be alive,” Echo said fiercely, though his voice cracked. “It’s possible. People survive worse.”
Crosshair didn’t move. “Not from that height.”
“I said shut it!” Wrecker shoved him back, but it was all broken fury—guilt bleeding through his rage. “She was smiling, dammit. Right before. She looked at me and said, ‘We’ll all get out of this,’ and I didn’t even answer her back—!”
“Stop.” Hunter’s voice cut clean through the storm.
He stood now, rigid and furious, his back to the team, staring into the void where you’d fallen.
“She’s alive,” he said.
Tech looked up from his pad slowly. “Statistically—”
“I don’t give a damn about statistics.” His voice was hoarse. “I felt her. She was right here. She’s part of us. She wouldn’t just be… gone.”
His hand trembled slightly. Not from fear. From the weight of it.
He was the one who told you to cover the flank. He was the one who said the ridge was stable enough.
She trusted you, Crosshair had said.
No. She trusted him.
And he’d failed her.
Hunter turned and began strapping a rope to his belt.
“Sergeant?” Tech asked cautiously.
“We’re going down there. All of us. We don’t stop until we find her. I don’t care if we have to tear the planet apart.”
Echo moved first. “I’m with you.”
Wrecker stepped up beside them, his breath hitching. “Me too. Always.”
Even Crosshair nodded, silent again.
As Hunter stood at the edge, ready to descend into the place where you vanished, a single thought thundered in his mind:
She can’t be gone.
Not you.
Not when your laugh was still echoing in his ears. Not when you told him last night, during watch, that you’d be careful. Not when he never got to tell you that he needed you more than he ever let on.
He’d find you.
Or die trying.
⸻
The descent into the ravine was slow, agonizing, and silent.
The team moved as one—Hunter leading with a lantern clipped to his belt, casting narrow beams over jagged rock and twisted earth. Echo and Tech followed with scanners, mapping every crevice. Wrecker moved boulders with his bare hands, gritting his teeth with each one. Crosshair, ever the rear guard, watched from behind, but his silence was sharp, eyes flicking everywhere.
Hunter’s voice echoed through the narrow stone corridor. “Check every ledge. Every outcropping.”
“She could’ve hit a rock shelf and rolled,” Echo said, carefully scanning below. “Or worse…”
“Don’t,” Wrecker said. “Don’t even say it. She’s alive. She has to be.”
They moved deeper into the ravine—until the beam of Hunter’s light caught something.
“Wait,” Tech whispered, grabbing Echo’s arm.
There—thirty feet below them, half-buried under collapsed shale and bloodied stone—was a figure.
Your figure.
You were sprawled on your side, your body twisted unnaturally, one leg crushed beneath a slab of rock. Blood soaked through your jacket. Your head had struck something hard—too hard—and you weren’t moving.
Hunter nearly dropped the lantern.
“[Y/N]—!”
He was down the rest of the way before anyone could stop him, crashing to his knees beside you.
“Don’t move her!” Echo shouted, sliding in behind. “Not yet. Let me check—”
But Hunter’s hands were already trembling as they hovered over you, too afraid to touch. Too afraid that this—this fragile, broken thing—was all that was left.
“She’s breathing,” Echo said. “Shallow. Pulse is—kriff—irregular. She’s lost a lot of blood.”
Wrecker dropped beside them, tears already streaking the dust on his cheeks.
“Is she—? She’s gonna make it, right? Echo?”
“She’s unconscious,” Echo said quietly. “And we need to get her out now.”
“Spinal trauma is possible,” Tech added, eyes locked on his scanner. “Multiple fractures. Her femur is broken—bleeding into the tissue. Concussion. Rib damage. Internal bleeding likely.”
Crosshair didn’t come any closer. He stood just at the edge of the light, staring down at you with an unreadable expression.
“You said she was dead,” Wrecker growled, voice shaking.
Crosshair didn’t respond.
Because he knew now—death would’ve been kinder than this.
The med evac was chaotic.
Hunter carried you the entire climb back—refused to let anyone else even try. He held you close to his chest like something fragile, as if you’d fall again if he let go. Your blood had soaked through his armor by the time they reached the surface.
Back on the Marauder, the team worked together in silent urgency. Wrecker helped secure you to the gurney. Echo and Tech patched what they could. Crosshair kept watch, pacing like a trapped animal.
And Hunter… he sat beside you.
His hands were covered in your blood.
“I should’ve caught you,” he whispered.
No one argued. No one corrected him.
Because part of them believed it too.
You twitched in your sleep once—just a small movement, a flicker of pain across your brow—and Hunter nearly leapt out of his seat.
“She moved!” he barked.
“She’s still unconscious,” Tech reminded. “That doesn’t guarantee cognition. The swelling in her brain—”
“I don’t care what the scans say,” Hunter growled. “She’s fighting.”
He reached down and brushed a blood-matted strand of hair from your face.
“You hear me?” he whispered, voice cracking. “You hold on. You fight like you always do. You’re not going to leave us like this.”
Wrecker sat on the floor beside the cot, staring at your hand dangling off the edge.
“You’re not allowed to die, okay?” he said, softly, almost childlike. “You still owe me a rematch.”
Echo leaned against the wall, arms crossed, jaw clenched tight. “She shouldn’t have been the one to fall. It should’ve been—”
“Don’t,” Tech said, just as quiet. “We all blame ourselves. That’s not useful now.”
Only Crosshair said nothing.
But later—when the others had finally dozed off in shifts, and the med droid was running scans—he sat beside you alone.
“Idiots, all of them,” he muttered. “They think they lost you. I know better.”
He rested his hand beside yours.
“You’re not dead. You’re just too damn stubborn.”
There was a pause.
“…So come back. Or I’ll never forgive you.”
You didn’t wake up that night. Or the next.
But your vitals held.
You were still fighting.
And the squad—your family—never left your side.
⸻
It started with a sound.
A weak, choked wheeze from the medbay.
Wrecker heard it first—he’d been sitting on the floor beside your cot for the past hour, humming under his breath and telling you stories like he had every day since they pulled you from the ravine.
But when he heard your breathing stutter—heard that awful, wet gasp—he was on his feet in an instant.
“Tech!”
Footsteps thundered in from the cockpit.
Tech was there in seconds, datapad in one hand, expression already shifting from calculation to panic.
“Vitals are dropping. Pulse erratic. Respiratory distress—dammit—her lung may have collapsed.”
The med droid whirred a warning in binary, and Tech shoved it aside, already working to stabilize you. Wrecker stood frozen, fists clenched at his sides, helpless as machines blared and blood began soaking through your bandages again.
“She was getting better,” Wrecker whispered. “She was breathing normal yesterday. You said she was stabilizing!”
“I said her vitals were holding,” Tech snapped, voice tight and uncharacteristically sharp. “I also said we didn’t know the full extent of internal damage yet. The concussion is worsening. There’s pressure building against her brainstem. Her body is going into systemic shock.”
“Then fix it!” Wrecker’s voice cracked. “You fix everything! Please—”
Tech’s hands moved fast, too fast—grabbing gauze, recalibrating IV drips, re-administering stimulants. But beneath the precision was fear. A gnawing, brittle kind of fear that made his fingers shake.
“I’m trying,” Tech said, barely above a whisper now. “I’m trying, Wrecker.”
Your body jerked suddenly—just a twitch, but it sent a ripple of panic through them both.
Tech cursed under his breath. “She needs proper medical facilities. A bacta tank. A neuro-regeneration suite. This ship is not equipped to handle this kind of trauma long-term.”
“So what, we just wait and watch her die?” Wrecker whispered.
“No!” Tech snapped, louder this time. “We don’t let her die.”
He slammed his fist down on the console—just once—but the sound echoed like a gunshot through the Marauder. Wrecker flinched. Tech never lost control. Never raised his voice. Never made a sound unless it meant something.
And now, he looked like he was about to break.
“I’ve calculated a thousand outcomes,” Tech murmured, softer now. “And every variable keeps changing. Her body is unpredictable. She’s unstable. But she’s also resilient. She’s survived things that should’ve killed her ten times over.”
He looked up then, eyes glassy behind his goggles.
“But if we don’t find a way to get her real care—soon—we will lose her.”
Wrecker turned away, one massive hand covering his face. He’d never felt so useless. Not when they’d crashed on Ordo. Not when they’d been stranded on Ryloth. Never like this.
“I don’t know what to do,” he said. “I’m strong. I can carry her. Fight for her. But I can’t fix her, Tech. I can’t even hold her without hurting her worse.”
Tech approached quietly, placing a hand on Wrecker’s shoulder—a rare gesture.
“You are helping,” he said. “You’re keeping her tethered. She needs that. She needs us.”
The med console beeped—soft, steady. A pause.
Then a spike.
Her heart rate surged. Your head tilted slightly to the side. Blood trickled from your nose. Another alarm.
“No, no, no—stay with us,” Tech muttered, already grabbing the stabilizer. “Don’t go. Not yet.”
Wrecker dropped to his knees beside you, voice trembling.
“C’mon, sweetheart,” he whispered. “You don’t get to leave like this. You didn’t even finish your story about the time you pantsed Crosshair in front of the general. Remember that?”
He sniffed, brushing a strand of hair from your sweat-slicked face. “You said you’d tell me how you pulled it off without getting court-martialed. Said you’d sing me that dumb lullaby you like. Said you’d stay.”
Your fingers twitched.
A tiny movement. Almost nothing.
But Wrecker gasped.
“She moved!”
Tech’s head snapped up. “What?”
“She moved! Her hand—right here—she twitched.”
Tech scanned you again. “Neurological activity spiked. Minimal, but—”
You let out a weak, pained breath.
Another wheeze. Then a garbled sound—almost like a word, trapped somewhere deep in your throat.
“…H-Hun…ter…”
Both men froze.
Tears filled Wrecker’s eyes.
“She said his name…”
“She’s still in there,” Tech whispered, blinking quickly. “Cognitive reflexes are initiating. That’s… that’s something.”
He turned to Wrecker, and for once, there was nothing cold or clinical in his tone.
“There’s still time.”
They kept watch through the night. Neither slept.
Wrecker read to you from the old datapad you always teased him for hoarding.
Tech adjusted your vitals every hour, even when nothing had changed, just to keep his hands busy.
And in the silence between beeping monitors and heavy breaths, they both spoke to you—about nothing, about everything.
Wrecker told you about the time he and you almost got arrested on Corellia for stealing bad caf. How your laugh had made him feel human again.
Tech told you the probability of your survival was now sitting at 18.6%, up from 9%. And that statistically, if anyone could beat the odds, it was you.
Wrecker chuckled through his tears. “Told you, didn’t I? Too stubborn to die.”
Tech looked down at your still hand, then whispered—just once—“Please… don’t.”
⸻
The Marauder was silent.
Tech had finally collapsed from exhaustion in the co-pilot seat, goggles askew, still clutching the datapad with your vitals. Wrecker was curled on the floor next to your bed, snoring lightly with one hand near yours. Crosshair sat with his back to the far wall, arms crossed, eyes closed—but not asleep.
And Echo stayed awake.
He always did.
He was seated at your bedside, one cybernetic hand gently resting on the edge of the cot. The hum of the ship’s systems filled the space between the heart monitor’s steady rhythm. Your breathing—still shallow, but no longer ragged—was the only music Echo needed.
He hadn’t moved for hours.
You’d gotten worse. Then better. Then worse again. And through all of it, he’d held on. Let the others break. Let them rage. He had to be the one who didn’t fall apart.
But now, as he sat alone in the flickering light, his thumb brushed your bandaged hand—and he whispered, “You can’t keep scaring us like this.”
Your lips moved.
Barely.
He straightened. “Hey…?”
Your fingers twitched under his hand.
Your head shifted slightly on the pillow, a soft whimper escaping your throat. Your eyelashes fluttered—slow, disoriented, like your mind hadn’t caught up to your body.
“Hey.” Echo leaned closer, voice trembling now. “Come on… come on, mesh’la. You’re safe.”
Your eyes opened.
Just a sliver at first. Squinting into the low light.
“…Echo…?”
It was a rasp, a whisper, but it was real.
Echo’s mouth fell open.
And for the first time since the fall—since the screaming, the blood, the race against time—his composure cracked.
You blinked slowly, pain visible behind your glazed eyes. “W-Where…?”
“Still on the Marauder. We haven’t moved. We couldn’t.” His voice was low and hoarse. “You weren’t stable enough.”
Your brow furrowed faintly. “Hurts.”
“I know.” He gently adjusted your oxygen mask, smoothing your hair back. “You took a hell of a fall.”
You tried to shift, but your body betrayed you—wracked with weakness, ribs aching, limbs sluggish.
Echo placed a firm hand on your shoulder. “Don’t move yet. Please. Just stay still.”
You obeyed—too tired to fight it.
“I thought…” You coughed, eyes fluttering. “Thought I heard Wrecker crying.”
Echo actually smiled, though his eyes were wet. “Yeah. That happened.”
You let out the faintest exhale—almost a laugh. “He’s a big softie.”
“Only for you,” Echo whispered, squeezing your hand carefully. “You scared him half to death.”
There was a long pause.
You looked up at him, brow knitting again.
“…You thought I was gone, didn’t you?”
Echo’s throat tightened. “We all did.”
“But you stayed.”
“Of course I stayed.”
Your gaze lingered on him. He looked exhausted. Hollowed out. His prosthetic arm twitched like he’d been clenching it too long.
“You haven’t slept.”
He laughed quietly—bitter and warm all at once. “Didn’t want to miss this.”
Another silence.
And then, so faint it barely reached him, you whispered—
“…I’m sorry.”
Echo stared at you, stunned.
“For what?” he breathed.
“For falling. For worrying you. For being weak.”
His expression broke. “No.”
He leaned in, voice rough. “Don’t ever say that. You didn’t fall because you were weak. You fell because the ground gave out. Because war is cruel. Because life isn’t fair.”
He blinked back tears. “But you lived. And that means more than anything.”
Your vision blurred—not from injury this time, but from the emotion in his voice.
He looked at you like you were the most important thing in the galaxy.
“I thought I lost you,” he said. “And I wasn’t ready.”
You let your eyes close again, overwhelmed by exhaustion—but you smiled softly through cracked lips.
“I’m here.”
He pressed his forehead gently to your hand, exhaling a shaky breath.
“You’re here.”
When the others returned—when Hunter stumbled in and dropped to his knees, when Wrecker cried again, when Crosshair stood frozen for a full minute, just staring—you were already asleep.
But Echo met Hunter’s gaze.
And nodded.
“She woke up.”
And for the first time in days, the silence didn’t feel so heavy.
Commander Fox x Reader x Commander Thorn
The aftermath of an attack always came in waves.
Smoke cleared. Evidence was gathered. People lied. And then, the survivors were expected to sit in rooms like this and act like it hadn’t shaken them.
Bail’s office was quiet, the kind of quiet only the dangerously exhausted and the politically cornered could create. A few low-voiced aides bustled around the outer corridor, but inside the room, it was only the senators.
Organa stood by the tall window, arms crossed as he stared down at the Coruscant skyline with a frown etched deep into his brow. Senator Chuchi sat stiffly on the edge of the couch, her shoulder bandaged from shrapnel. Padmé was leaned over the table, scanning a datapad and speaking in hushed tones to Mon Mothma. You stood near the bookcase, arms folded, trying to will the fire in your chest into something productive.
It wasn’t working.
“I’m tired of acting like we’re not under siege,” you muttered aloud.
Padmé looked up, lips pressed thin. “We are. We just haven’t named the enemy yet.”
Chuchi nodded slowly. “They know what they’re doing. Each strike more coordinated. Less about killing—more about threatening. Silencing.”
Bail finally turned, face unreadable. “They want us reactive. Fractured. Suspicious of each other.”
“We should be,” you said, pacing a slow line. “No one’s admitting what’s happening. The Senate hushes it up. Security leaks are too convenient. And somehow every target is someone with a voice too loud for the Chancellor’s comfort.”
That earned a moment of silence.
Mon Mothma spoke softly. “You think he’s involved.”
“I think someone close to him is.”
“We can’t keep pretending these are isolated,” you said finally.
“They know that,” Padmé murmured. “The question is: why isn’t anyone doing more?”
Bail, now standing at the head of his polished desk, didn’t answer immediately. His jaw was set. His gaze flicked over the datachart projected in front of him—attack markers, profiles, probable motives.
“They’re testing the Republic,” he said. “Or what’s left of it.”
“They’re testing us,” Mothma whispered, voice hoarse. “And if we keep responding with silence and procedural delays, they’ll push until there’s no one left to oppose them.”
The words sat heavy.
Outside the door, the crimson shadow of the Coruscant Guard stood watch—Fox and Thorn included, though you hadn’t glanced their way since entering.
But you could feel them. You always did now.
You turned slightly, voice low. “Have any of you gotten direct messages?”
Chuchi looked up sharply. “Threats?”
You nodded.
There was a beat of silence. Then Mothma sighed. “One. Disguised in a customs manifest. It knew… too much.”
Padmé nodded. “Mine was through a Senate droid. Disguised as a corrupted firmware packet.”
You didn’t speak. Yours had come days ago—buried in a late-night intelligence brief with no sender. All it said was:
You are not untouchable.
You hadn’t slept since.
“We need to pressure the Supreme Chancellor,” Bail said.
That earned a sour look from you. “He’ll deflect. Say it’s a security issue, not a political one.”
“Then we make it political,” Mothma said, finally sounding like herself again. “We use our voice. While we still have one.”
The room shifted then. A renewed sense of unity—brittle, but burning.
But in the quiet after, your gaze slipped—just for a moment—toward the guards stationed outside the door.
Fox stood perfectly still, helmet tilted in your direction. Thorn just beside him, arms folded. Neither moved. Neither spoke.
But their presence spoke volumes.
This was war.
And somewhere between the smoke and the silence, something else was taking root—dangerous, fragile, and very hard to ignore.
⸻
The room was dark, save for the steady pulse of holo-screens. Red and blue glows blinked over datafeeds, security footage, encrypted reports—layered chaos organized with military precision.
Fox stood at the center console, arms braced against its edge. Thorn leaned nearby, still in partial armor, visor down. Both men had discarded formalities, if only for this moment.
“This list isn’t shrinking,” Thorn muttered, scrolling through the updated intel. “If anything, it’s tightening.”
Fox tapped in a command, bringing up the names of every senator involved in the recent threats. Mothma. Organa. Chuchi. Amidala. And her.
He paused on her name.
No title. No pretense.
Just:
[FIRST NAME] [LAST NAME]
Planet of Origin: Classified. Access requires Level Six or higher.
Military Status: Former Commander, Planetary Forces, 12th Resistance Front
Notable Actions: Siege of Klydos Ridge, Amnesty Trial #3114-A
Designations: War Criminal (Cleared). Commendation of Valor.
Thorn let out a slow breath. “Well. That explains a few things.”
Fox didn’t speak. His eyes scanned every line—calm, deliberate.
“She was tried?” Thorn asked.
“Yeah. And cleared. But this…” Fox magnified a classified document stamped with a Republic seal. “She made decisions that turned the tide of a planetary civil war. But it cost lives. Enemy and ally.”
“Sounds like a soldier,” Thorn said.
“Sounds like someone who was never supposed to be a senator.”
They both stared at the glowing file, silent for a long beat.
“Why hide it?” Thorn asked. “You’d think someone with that record would lean on it.”
Fox finally replied, quiet: “Because war heroes make people nervous. War criminals scare them. And she was both.”
Thorn folded his arms. “She doesn’t look like someone who’s seen hell.”
“No,” Fox agreed. “But she acts like it.”
A beat passed.
Thorn tilted his head slightly. “You feel it too?”
Fox didn’t answer immediately.
“You’re not the only one watching her, Thorn.”
The words weren’t sharp. They weren’t angry. Just honest.
And for a moment, silence stretched between them—not as soldiers, not as commanders, but as men standing at the edge of something they couldn’t name.
Before either could say more, a message flashed in red across the console:
MOTHMA ESCORT CLEARED. STANDBY FOR NEXT PROTECTIVE ASSIGNMENT: SENATOR [LAST NAME]
Fox closed the file with one last look.
Thorn gave a tight nod.
But as the lights of the war room dimmed behind them, neither could quite forget the file still burning in the back of their minds—or the woman behind it.
⸻
It was hard to feel normal with three clones, a Jedi Padawan, and a Skywalker surrounding your lunch table like you were preparing to launch a military operation instead of ordering garden risotto.
The restaurant had cleared out most of its upper terrace for “Senatorial Security Reasons.” A ridiculous way to say: people were trying to kill you. Again.
Still, Padmé had insisted. And somehow—somehow—you’d ended up saying yes.
The sun was soft and golden through the vine-laced awning above, dappling the white tablecloths with moving light. The air smelled like roasted herbs and fresh rain, but not even that could soften the tension in your shoulders.
“You don’t have to look like you’re about to give a press briefing,” Padmé teased gently, reaching for her wine.
You let out a slow breath, forcing a smile. “It’s hard to relax when I’m being watched like a spice smuggler at customs.”
Across from you, Anakin Skywalker didn’t even flinch. He was leaned casually against the terrace railing, arms folded, lightsaber clipped at the ready. Rex stood a few paces behind, helmet on but gaze sharply fixed beyond the decorative trellises. Ahsoka was beside him, hands on her hips, trying very hard to pretend she wasn’t completely bored.
Then there were your shadows—Fox and Thorn.
They stood just far enough to give the illusion of privacy. Both in full armor. Both still as statues.
You saw them watching everyone. Especially Skywalker.
“I’m just saying,” Padmé said, twirling her fork. “If I were an assassin, this place would be the worst possible place to strike. Too many guards. Too many eyes.”
“Don’t tempt fate,” you muttered.
Ahsoka leaned forward, chin in hand, curious now. “Senator Amidala says you don’t really need all this protection. That true?”
You blinked once. Padmé was smirking into her glass. Of course she was.
“Well,” you said smoothly, lifting your napkin to your lap, “some senators are more difficult to target than others.”
Ahsoka squinted. “That’s not an answer.”
“That’s politics,” you replied with a practiced grin.
From behind, Fox shifted slightly. Thorn’s head turned just barely. They’d heard every word.
Padmé laughed quietly. “She’s been dodging questions since she was seventeen. Don’t take it personally.”
Ahsoka grinned, shaking her head. “Okay, fine. But seriously—what did you do before the Senate?”
You took a slow sip of your wine. “I made a mess of things. Then I cleaned them up. Very effectively.”
“Vague,” Ahsoka said.
“Deliberately.”
The conversation drifted to safer things—fashion, terrible policy drafts, the tragedy of synthetic caf. You allowed yourself to laugh once. Maybe twice. It was good to pretend, even just for a meal.
But as the plates were cleared and sunlight dipped a little lower, you glanced once toward the shadows.
Thorn stood with his arms crossed, ever the silent shield. Fox, next to him, gave you one sharp nod when your eyes met—no smile, no softness, just silent reassurance.
You weren’t sure what made your heart thump harder: the weight of your past threatening to surface… or the way neither of them looked away.
⸻
The wine had just been poured again—Padmé was laughing about a hideous gown she’d been forced to wear for a peace summit on Ryloth—when the world cracked in half.
The sound came first: not a blaster, not the familiar pulse of war—but the high-pitched whistle of precision. You knew that sound. You’d heard it before. In a past life.
Sniper.
Glass shattered near Padmé’s shoulder, spraying the table in glittering fragments. A scream rose somewhere below, muffled by the thick walls of the restaurant. And then—
“GET DOWN!”
Fox moved like lightning. One arm shoved you sideways, sending you down behind the table just as another shot scorched overhead. Thorn dove the opposite direction, deflecting debris with his arm guard, already scanning rooftops.
Anakin’s saber ignited mid-air.
The green blade of Ahsoka’s followed a heartbeat later.
“Sniper on the north building!” Rex barked, blaster up and already coordinating through his helmet comms. “Multiple shooters—cover’s compromised!”
Another blast tore through the awning, scorching Padmé’s chair. You yanked her down with you, shielding her head with your arms.
“Two squads, at least,” Thorn said over comms. “Organized. Not a distraction—this is the hit.”
Skywalker growled something dark and bolted forward, vaulting over the terrace railing with a flash of blue saber and fury.
“Ahsoka!” he shouted back. “Get them out of here—now!”
She was already moving. “Senators, with me!”
You didn’t hesitate—your combat instincts burned hot and automatic. You grabbed Padmé’s hand and ran, ducking low behind Ahsoka as she slashed through the decorative back entrance with her saber. The door hissed open—Fox and Thorn moved in tandem, covering your escape with rapid fire precision.
“Go!” Fox shouted. “We’ll hold the line!”
You and Padmé bolted through the kitchen, past startled staff and broken plates. Behind you, the sounds of a full-scale assault filled the air—blaster fire, shouted orders, another explosion shaking the foundations.
Ahsoka skidded into the alley, saber still lit. “Rex, redirect the speeder evac—pull it two blocks west! We’re going underground!”
Padmé looked pale. You weren’t sure if it was the near-miss or the fact that you were dragging her like a soldier, not a senator.
“This way,” you said, yanking open a service hatch. “Down the delivery chute. Go.”
She blinked. “You’ve done this before.”
“Later.”
Minutes stretched like hours as Ahsoka led you and Padmé through Coruscant’s underlevels. The girl was quick, precise—but young. She kept glancing back at you, questions on her face even in the middle of a mission.
Padmé finally caught her breath. “Are we clear?”
“Almost,” Ahsoka said. “Rex is circling a transport in now. We’ll get you back to the Senate.”
You exhaled slowly, the adrenaline catching up to your bones.
Ahsoka looked at you directly this time. “You weren’t afraid.”
You shook your head. “I’ve been afraid before. This wasn’t it.”
And though she didn’t press, something in her eyes said she understood more than she let on.
Because that wasn’t fear. That was reflex. Memory. War rising again in your blood, no matter how carefully you’d buried it.
And you weren’t sure if that scared you more… or comforted you.
⸻
The plush carpet muffled your steps as you entered the secured room, escorted by the Chancellor’s guards but notably free of the Chancellor himself. Thank the stars. The tension in your jaw was just now beginning to ease.
Padmé sat beside you, brushing glass dust from the hem of her gown. She wasn’t shaking anymore, though her eyes betrayed the flickers of adrenaline still fading. Ahsoka stood at the window, her arms crossed, gaze sharp as she scanned the skyline.
“I should’ve worn flats,” Padmé muttered, leaning toward you. “Last time I try to be fashionable during an assassination attempt.”
You gave a small, dry laugh. “Next time, we coordinate. Combat boots under formalwear. Very senatorial.”
Ahsoka turned slightly, studying you.
Padmé smiled faintly, but her next words were laced with meaning. “Well, you would know. I’ve never seen someone pull a senator out of a sniper’s line of fire with that kind of precision. It was… practiced.”
You didn’t miss the weight in her tone.
“Remind me never to tell you anything personal again,” you quipped, keeping your smile light. “You’re terrible with secrets.”
Padmé raised a brow, amused. “I am a politician.”
“You’re a gossip,” you shot back playfully.
Ahsoka tilted her head, clearly intrigued. “Wait… practiced?”
Before Padmé could answer—or you could pivot—the doors slid open.
Thorn entered first, helmet under one arm. His eyes immediately scanned the room. Fox followed a step behind, helmet still on, shoulders squared, every inch of him sharp and unreadable. But you felt his eyes on you. The pause in his step. The tension in his jaw.
Neither man spoke right away. But they didn’t need to. Their presence filled the room with the kind of silent protection that wasn’t easily taught. Not one senator in the room doubted they’d cleared the entire floor twice over before allowing the doors to open.
Fox’s voice cut through after a beat. “Are you both unharmed?”
Padmé nodded. “We’re fine. Thanks to all of you.”
Thorn’s eyes shifted to you—just a second longer than protocol called for. “You’re calm.”
You shrugged. “Panicking rarely improves aim.”
Ahsoka didn’t let it go. “So… you have training?”
You gave her your best senatorial smile. “Wouldn’t every politician be safer if they did?”
Padmé gave you a look. “You’re dodging.”
“I’m deflecting. There’s a difference.”
Before Ahsoka could press, the door slid open again, and Captain Rex stepped in.
His brow was furrowed beneath his helmet, his tone clipped and straight to the point. “General Skywalker captured one of the assassins. Alive.”
That got everyone’s attention.
Fox stepped forward. “Where is he now?”
“En route to a secure interrogation cell. Skywalker’s escorting him personally. He wants the senators updated.”
Your fingers curled slightly into the fabric of your robe. For all your practiced calm, something burned beneath your ribs.
Someone had targeted you. Again.
⸻
You barely sat.
Your body ached to move—to fight—but instead you paced the perimeter of the small, sterile waiting room the Guard had shoved you into while Skywalker handled the interrogation.
Two chairs. A water dispenser. No windows.
And a commander blocking the only door like a wall of red and steel.
Fox.
You’d seen Thorn step out to “coordinate with Rex,” but Fox hadn’t budged since Rex walked in with the update. Motionless. Head tilted just enough to follow your pacing.
It had been seven minutes.
You stopped finally, resting your palms flat on a small metal desk.
His voice, when it came, was rougher than usual.
“You need to sit down.”
You didn’t look at him. “No.”
“And drink water.”
“No.”
A longer pause.
“You may be a former soldier,” he said quietly, “but you’re still human.”
That actually made you spin around—lips curling into a sharp smile.
“Funny. You treat me more like china than human, most of the time.”
Fox didn’t move, but you could feel the shift.
“You’re not breakable,” he said flatly. “That isn’t the point.”
“What is?”
He was quiet.
You stared at him, taking a slow step closer. You knew it was reckless before your feet moved. But you did it anyway.
“Tell me, Commander.”
Fox didn’t answer immediately.
But then—his head turned just slightly toward the ceiling. As if he was measuring something he didn’t want to name.
You were about to fold your arms, press harder—when he spoke.
Voice low. Tight.
“If anyone’s going to break you, it should be your choice.”
For half a second, your heart stopped.
Your eyes snapped to his visor—not in disbelief, but in something far more dangerous.
He held your stare.
Then turned his body back toward the door in a sharp movement—like he’d reset an entire system with one motion.
“Sit down, Senator,” he said, brushing the moment away like it was protocol.
You did.
But not because he told you to.
Because your knees suddenly felt unsteady.
And outside, Thorn’s shadow was pacing too.
⸻
Thorn wasn’t brooding.
He told himself that twice. Then once more for good measure.
He wasn’t brooding—he was thinking.
Processing.
Decompressing, even.
Helmet off. Armor half-stripped. He leaned against the long bench in the quietest corner of the barracks, pretending not to hear Stone snoring two bunks down. Pretending not to care that Hound’s mastiff, Grizzer, had somehow crawled under his bunk and now slept like it was his.
He ran a hand through his hair.
It should’ve been a normal day—hell, even a standard post-attack lockdown. Escort the senators. Maintain security. Nothing complicated.
But she had looked at him.
Really looked. Past the phrasing, past the title. Past the helmet.
And worse—he’d let her.
That smile she gave when Fox told her to sit, that off-hand comment about being treated like china—it stuck in his mind like a saber mark. Not because of what she said, but because of what she didn’t. The way she tested the air in every conversation. Pressed and pressed until something cracked.
And if she pressed him again—he wasn’t sure he’d hold as well as Fox did.
Thorn sighed sharply and stood, heading for the hall.
He needed air.
Thorn didn’t expect her to be out.
It was late. She’d had a hell of a day. She was a senator.
But there she was, near the far fence where the decorative lights bled softly across the foliage. Arms crossed. Expression unreadable. Alone.
She turned her head a little when she heard his approach, then fully—half a smile forming.
“I wondered who’d come to check on me first.”
Thorn raised an eyebrow. “You expected someone?”
She shrugged, but it was coy. “Let’s not pretend either of you would let me go unmonitored tonight.”
He smirked, just faintly, and stepped closer. “You’re not wrong.”
They stood there, still, in the humid night air. The stars were dim from all the light pollution—but Thorn didn’t look up.
He looked at her.
The silence stretched again.
“You know,” she said after a beat, “for someone who’s so damn good at his job… you’re terrible at hiding how much you care.”
He didn’t deny it. Not this time.
Thorn’s voice was low when he replied. “And you’re good at provoking reactions.”
“You didn’t give me one.”
He met her gaze. “Didn’t I?”
That landed harder than she expected. Her smile faltered.
And when she didn’t answer, Thorn gently touched her elbow—brief, almost professional.
But not quite.
“You’re not just another asset,” he said quietly. “I just don’t know what that means yet.”
Then he stepped away.
And she let him.
But she didn’t stop thinking about it all night.
⸻
The day was mostly quiet—too quiet. Meetings had ended early, and most senators had retreated to their quarters or offworld duties. She had slipped away from the dull chatter, climbing the stairs to the lesser-known observation deck—her sanctuary when the pressure of politics felt too tight around her throat.
But she wasn’t alone for long.
Thorn stepped through the archway, helmet under his arm, posture rigid as ever.
“I figured I’d find you up here,” he said.
She arched a brow. “Am I that predictable?”
“No,” he said. “You’re just hard to keep track of when you want to be. But you only disappear when something’s bothering you.”
She tilted her head slightly, giving him a quiet once-over. “And what makes you think something’s bothering me?”
Thorn didn’t answer right away. Instead, he stepped to the edge, eyes scanning the skyline. When he finally spoke, his voice was low. Measured. “You wear your control like armor, Senator. But it’s heavy. I can see it.”
She turned away from the view to face him fully. “You really shouldn’t say things like that.”
“Why?”
“Because you’re not supposed to care.”
His jaw tensed, the shift subtle, but not lost on her.
“And yet…” she continued, stepping closer, “…here you are. Always near. Always watching. I’m not blind, Thorn. You don’t flinch when there’s danger. But you flinch when I look at you too long.”
He didn’t respond. Not at first.
So she pushed again.
“You’re a good soldier. Loyal. By the book.” Her voice dropped. “So tell me—how much longer are you going to pretend I don’t affect you?”
Thorn’s composure cracked.
It was a split second.
But in that second, he moved—one hand cupping the side of her face, the other bracing her waist as he kissed her. Not roughly. Not rushed. But with the kind of restraint that felt like it was burning both of them alive from the inside out.
He pulled back just enough to breathe—but not enough to let go.
And then—
“Commander.”
The voice cut through the silence like a knife.
Thorn froze.
She turned her head slowly, her heart hammering, to find Fox standing at the top of the stairs—helmet on, voice emotionless.
Almost.
“You’re needed back at the barracks. Now.”
“Sir—”
“Immediately.”
Thorn stepped away, face hardening into a mask. He didn’t look at her again. He simply nodded once to Fox and walked away, every step heavy with restrained emotion.
Fox waited until Thorn disappeared from sight before turning back to her.
“Senator,” he said, voice quieter now, almost too quiet. “That was… out of line.”
She raised a brow, pulse still thrumming from the kiss. “Which part?”
Fox didn’t answer.
But his silence said enough.
Jealousy had sharp edges. And for the first time, he wasn’t hiding his anymore.
⸻
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The scent of smoke and metal still clung to the air as your heels echoed down the marbled hallway of your battered palace. The ornate glass windows had been blasted out, replaced with ragged holes and jagged edges. Sunlight streamed through in fractured patterns, landing across the gold embroidery of your gown and the heavy sapphires around your neck. The dress was too fine for war, too stiff for practicality—but you wore it anyway.
You were Queen.
And queens did not cower in simple cloth.
You now stood unmoving at the top of the grand staircase, the full weight of your crown pressing into your brow. You wore gold today. Not out of vanity, but strategy. A queen in splendor inspires hope. Even in ruin.
"Your Majesty," came the low voice of your advisor, hurrying behind you, "the Republic forces have landed. General Kenobi himself leads them, along with the 212th."
You nodded once, expression like carved obsidian. "Take me to them."
_ _ _
Obi-Wan Kenobi looked every bit the seasoned general, robes dusty from landing, beard trimmed despite the chaos. At his side stood a clone in white and orange armor, helmet tucked under one arm. He stood straight-backed and still, as if carved from the same stone as your palace columns.
You descended the steps slowly, every movement deliberate. You knew how to command a room. You knew how to wield silence as a weapon.
"General Kenobi," you greeted coolly.
He bowed. "Your Majesty. We regret the delay. The 212th is ready to assist."
Your gaze drifted to the commander. Younger than the general. Sharper somehow. His dark eyes met yours, unreadable.
"And who are you?"
"Commander Cody, ma'am," he said, voice clipped and precise. "At your service."
You took a moment, letting your silence test him. He didn't shift. He didn't waver. Good.
"I'm not interested in pleasantries, Commander. The Separatists hold my people hostage in the east quarter. If you're here to help, do it. If not, get out of my city."
Cody inclined his head, neither offended nor intimidated. "Understood, Your Majesty."
Obi-Wan cleared his throat, clearly amused. "I believe you'll find Commander Cody is quite... efficient."
You turned, the gems on your gown glittering with every step. "Then I expect results."
_ _ _
You watched the battle unfold from a tower overlooking the eastern district, eyes tracking orange and white armor sweeping through the rubble like fire. Commander Cody moved like he was born for it—blaster ready, tactics sharp, calm under fire.
You found yourself watching him more than the battlefield.
It wasn't just attraction. No, you'd been courted before. Dignitaries. Princes. Senators. But none of them understood war. None of them had bled for something greater. None of them had stood unmoved when you raised your voice.
He had.
Later, he found you in the ruined throne room, maps and war reports strewn across a cracked obsidian table. You didn't look up as he entered, but you felt him pause. Watching you.
"You're not what I expected," he said.
You arched a brow. "Because I'm young?"
"Because you're beautiful," he said bluntly. "And still more terrifying than most warlords I've met."
A slow, dangerous smile touched your lips. "Careful, Commander. That sounded almost like admiration."
He stepped closer. "It was."
"We leave at dawn," he said quietly.
You nodded. "You've done well."
He gave a faint smile. "So have you."
There was silence, the kind that hangs just before a storm—or a kiss. You stood close. Closer than duty allowed. Your hand brushed against his arm as you passed him, deliberately slow.
"I'm not the type to wait around, Commander," you said softly. "But I remember loyalty."
And with that, you left him standing in the ruins of a palace he helped save—his heart torn between orders and the ghost of your perfume.
_ _ _
Night blanketed the capital in quiet shades of blue and silver. The fires had died down. The people slept. The palace—scarred but standing—breathed silence through its stone corridors.
You stood alone on the balcony of your private quarters, the city below wrapped in darkness. A wind brushed through your hair, catching on the delicate sapphire pins at your temples. You weren't in ceremonial silk tonight—just a velvet robe, deep indigo, soft against your skin. Lighter. Easier to breathe in.
"You should be resting," came his voice behind you, low and steady.
You didn't turn. "So should you."
Cody stepped forward, stopping beside you, eyes scanning the skyline. He looked out of place here—so sharp and war-worn against the softness of your world—but somehow, he belonged.
"They'll be fine without me for a few hours," he said.
You let the silence stretch. Then: "It wasn't just my people they came for. The Separatists wanted to break me. Make an example of this world. Of me."
Cody glanced at you, surprised by the honesty in your voice. Your chin was still high, your spine still regal—but your voice was softer now. Human.
"I've never been this close to losing everything," you murmured.
He didn't offer pity. He didn't rush in with hollow reassurances. He just stood beside you, letting your words exist without judgment.
"You didn't lose," he said finally.
You turned to look at him, his face half-lit by moonlight. You studied him—creased brow, quiet strength, the scar at his temple. Not beautiful, not polished. But real.
"You leave at dawn," you said.
He nodded. "We've been reassigned. New system. New war."
You looked down, then away. "Will I see you again?"
The question slipped out before you could cage it. A raw thread of vulnerability woven into your otherwise unshakable voice.
Cody didn't hesitate. "If there's a path back here, I'll take it."
You stepped closer, close enough to feel the heat of his skin through his blacks.
"Then go with honor," you whispered. "And come back with your heart still yours."
He tilted his head slightly, brow furrowing. "Why mine?"
"Because..." You hesitated, just for a breath. "You're the first man who's ever looked at me and didn't see just a crown."
His jaw tightened, barely. His gaze dropped to your mouth. Then, slowly—carefully—he reached up, cupping your face with a gloved hand.
"Then I hope when I come back..." he murmured, voice low, "you'll still be wearing it."
You leaned in before you could think twice. Your lips met his—soft, sure, but brief. A kiss meant to linger.
It wasn't passion. It wasn't fire.
It was a promise.
When you pulled away, your forehead rested against his for just a moment longer.
"Until next time, Commander," you whispered.
"Until next time... Your Majesty."
And then he was gone, swallowed by the quiet night, the war, and the stars.
I love how you write tech! And how you have him all flustered is written amazingly!
As someone who is high functioning, I love hearing people talk about what they’re interested in. Could you do a tech x Fem!reader where she loves listening to him and he gets flustered and add some of your own flare to it? Xx
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The cantina was its usual mess of sour drinks, old booths, and worse music. A storm brewed outside, the dusty kind that stuck to your clothes and made the whole world feel static-charged. Inside, though, it was warm. Dim. Safe.
And across from you, Tech was talking—hands animated, datapad in one hand, drink in the other (untouched, as usual).
“You see, the issue with the ion displacer isn’t so much the core processor as it is the overcompensating voltage feedback. Most engineers forget to recalibrate the thermal sync, which is frankly a rookie mistake.”
You nodded slowly, chin in your hand. Not because you were bored—but because watching him talk was like being allowed to peek inside a galaxy of stars. Not many people noticed how his eyes lit up, how fast he moved when he was in his element. He was like a hyperdrive: complex, brilliant, and far too often overlooked.
“I mean,” he went on, tapping something on his datapad, “with the right calibration, you can amplify power efficiency by at least 23.8 percent. If you’re clever about it. Which, most are not.”
“You’re clever,” you said simply, before you could think to dial it back.
He paused. Blinked. Looked up from the pad, blinking again behind his goggles as if the compliment hadn’t quite registered.
“Pardon?”
“You’re clever,” you repeated, letting a little smile curve your lips. “I like hearing you talk about this stuff.”
Tech straightened, shoulders going stiff like someone had just issued a direct order. His ears flushed a soft pink beneath the curl of his hair.
“You… do?” His voice had gone up just slightly, like you’d knocked him off-balance. “I was under the impression that most people find my commentary… verbose. Occasionally overwhelming.”
“Not me.” You shrugged. “It’s nice. Makes me feel like the galaxy still has things worth understanding. Even if I’ll never understand them as well as you.”
He stared at you for a moment too long.
Then, very slowly, he lowered the datapad. His fingers twitched near the edge of it, like they weren’t sure what to do without typing.
“I… appreciate that.”
Silence settled between you. Not awkward. Just… soft. Outside, thunder rolled. Inside, Tech leaned back in the booth, flustered but visibly trying to play it cool.
“If you’d like,” he added, voice quieter now, “I could explain the modular wiring system I built for Hunter’s blade gauntlet. It incorporates… well, it incorporates some rather interesting electroreactive alloy.”
You grinned.
“I’d love that.”
And so he talked, and you listened, both of you orbiting the same quiet space—two people who had survived too much, holding on to the little things that still made the galaxy feel… good.
Tech was halfway into an explanation about conductive filament lengths—his voice smoothing out, more relaxed now that he knew you actually wanted to hear him—when a sharp voice cut through the low hum of the cantina.
“Well, well. Isn’t this cozy.”
You turned to see Cid standing a few feet away, arms crossed, one brow raised like she’d caught the two of you holding hands under the table—which, for the record, you weren’t. Yet.
Tech sat up straighter immediately, clearly thrown, and you fought the urge to roll your eyes.
“Good evening, Cid,” he said, formal as ever.
Cid glanced between the two of you, unimpressed. “You sweet on him or just have a death wish sittin’ through all that tech talk?” she asked, jabbing a clawed thumb toward you, then Tech.
You smirked. “A little from column A, little from column B.”
Cid snorted. “Well, hate to break up the love-in, but if you two are done whispering sweet circuits to each other, we’ve got a situation.”
Tech’s expression snapped back into mission-mode like a switch had been flipped. “What sort of situation?”
“Kind that pays, if you don’t mess it up,” she said, tossing a datapad onto the table with a clatter. “Package needs retrieving. Discreetly. You’re the brains, and she”—she gestured to you with a smirk—“is the only one who doesn’t treat the clientele like targets.”
“I do not—” Tech started, clearly offended.
You cut him off gently, patting his arm. “It’s fine, Tech. She’s just mad she interrupted the best lecture I’ve had all week.”
Cid made a gagging sound and walked off, muttering about nerd love and people trying to run a business.
Once she was gone, Tech turned to you with a strange look—half embarrassed, half something warmer.
“Did you… mean that?”
You looked at him.
“Of course I did. You’re brilliant. And kind. And you make me feel like I can actually understand the stars, not just look up at them.”
That flushed-pink look returned to his ears again. He swallowed.
“Well then,” he said, offering you his hand with a shy, almost formal air. “Shall we retrieve a package, Miss…?”
You took his hand, letting your fingers linger just a bit longer than necessary.
“We shall, Mr Genius.”
And as you stood, his hand still holding yours, you noticed the datapad had been left behind on the table—still open to the schematic he’d made just for fun, just to show you something he loved.
And you realized, maybe he hadn’t really been explaining it for the sake of talking.
Maybe he’d just wanted you to understand him.
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Pabu Festival Night
The sun dipped below the horizon, casting golden light over the sea as the village of Pabu came alive with lanterns, laughter, and the mouthwatering scent of street food. Strings of glowing paper lights swayed between buildings, and music floated through the air—something old, joyous, and deeply local.
You were elbow-deep in flour and slightly burnt noodles at a stall near the center square, laughing as a group of children tried to help and made an absolute mess of everything. Your hair stuck to your face, there was something sticky on your pants, and your smile had never been wider.
Hunter leaned against a post nearby, arms crossed, eyes locked on you like you were the only person on the planet. His squad hovered beside him, all wearing variations of amused smirks—except Tech, who was deeply invested in analyzing the music’s rhythm pattern with furrowed brows.
“Stars, he’s doing it again,” Echo said, nudging Hunter’s side with his elbow.
“Doing what?” Hunter muttered, not looking away.
“Staring at her like she’s a dessert he’s too afraid to order,” Wrecker said with a laugh. “Come on, Sarge, just tell her she looks pretty with noodles in her hair.”
“She does,” Hunter said under his breath, then quickly shook his head. “Shut up.”
“She’s going to think you’re broken,” Tech added dryly. “Most humans engage in verbal communication when expressing attraction.”
“You’re all insufferable,” Hunter growled.
“Hey, Hunter!” Omega’s voice chirped brightly, cutting through the banter as she skipped over, cheeks pink with excitement. “Did you ask her yet?”
Wrecker snorted. “Maker, Omega, we’ve talked about subtlety.”
“Oh! Right,” Omega grinned, then leaned up conspiratorially, stage-whispering way too loudly, “You should ask her though. She wants you to. I asked.”
Hunter stared at her, stunned. “You what?”
“Matchmaking,” she said proudly. “Crosshair said you’d drag your feet forever so I thought I’d help.”
“Crosshair’s not even here.”
“Exactly. I’m doing his part too.”
Before Hunter could come up with a coherent response, you turned and spotted them. Your smile brightened when your eyes landed on him.
“Hey! You guys just gonna lurk or actually join the party?”
Hunter stood straighter, clearing his throat. “We’re—uh—considering our options.”
“I’m voting for food and dancing!” Omega beamed, grabbing Hunter’s hand and dragging him forward. “Come on, she saved us noodles.”
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Later, By the Dancing Lanterns
You swayed barefoot on the warm stone path, clutching a sweet drink in one hand and laughing as locals pulled strangers into their dancing circles. The music had picked up, and lights flickered off the sea like tiny stars had dropped into the water.
You spotted Hunter hanging at the edge of it all, looking like a soldier at the edge of a battlefield he didn’t quite understand.
You approached him slowly, grinning up at him as you offered your hand. “Dance with me?”
He blinked. “I don’t dance.”
“You’ve got enhanced reflexes and perfect rhythm,” you said, teasing. “You’ll be fine. I’ll even go easy on you.”
A beat passed. His eyes searched yours, and then—to the shock of everyone within fifty feet—he took your hand.
The music wrapped around you like warmth as he followed you into the circle, stiff at first, focused too hard on every step.
“You’re thinking about it too much,” you whispered, drawing closer. “Let go. It’s just you and me.”
His hand slid to your waist, a bit hesitant, a bit bold. “Easier said than done.”
“Well,” you murmured, brushing your fingers along his chest, “if it helps… I’ve wanted to touch you like this for a long time.”
He exhaled sharply, eyes darkening. “You really know how to mess with a guy’s focus.”
“I have excellent timing.”
He finally smiled—small, crooked, but real. “You do.”
You moved together, slower now, drifting into your own little orbit as the circle of dancers spun around you. The music faded into the background, and all that remained was the warmth of his hands, the steadiness of his breath, and the unspoken pull that had been building for months.
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The festival had died down, lanterns bobbing on the sea, distant laughter echoing through the trees. You and Hunter sat by the water, his arm loosely around your shoulders, your head resting against him.
“Didn’t think I’d ever have this,” he said quietly.
You turned toward him. “What?”
“This kind of life. Something soft. Someone like you.”
Your heart twisted. “You deserve this. All of it.”
His fingers brushed against yours, then threaded together slowly. “I used to think needing someone made me weak.”
“And now?”
He looked at you, voice low. “Now I think it makes me human.”
You leaned in, letting your lips brush against his. “Took you long enough.”
From somewhere up the hill, Wrecker’s voice bellowed: “Pay up! I told you they’d kiss before midnight!”
Omega cheered. “You’re welcome!”
Hunter groaned and buried his face in your shoulder. “They’re never letting this go.”
“Good,” you smiled. “Neither am I.”
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All my homies love Mace Windu, nobody could ever convince me to hate Mace Windu, coolest Jedi out there, Mace Windu please come save me from this fandom
Commander Fox x Senator Reader
They brought her out at dusk.
The sky above the capital bled violet and gold, and the light made her look almost ethereal as she was marched up the execution platform. Chained. Stoic. Dignified even in ruin.
Crowds were forced to gather—citizens herded into the central square at blaster-point. Droids lined the rooftops. Separatist banners hung in place of the planet’s colors, waving like a threat in the wind.
She climbed the steps herself. Unassisted.
And when she reached the top, she paused—not for fear. But to look at them. Her People.
Their eyes were wide with despair, faces hollow from weeks of fear. Some wept. Others stood still. Waiting. Hoping. A broadcast droid hovered beside the stage, recording every breath. Streaming it across the planet.
A voice crackled through the speakers: “The prisoner has been granted final words.”
And that’s when she stepped forward.
Back straight. Chin raised. Wrists still bound in front of her.
The wind caught her hair as she spoke.
Clear. Commanding. Unshaken.
“To those watching—this is not the end. Not of me, and not of our world.”
“The Separatists think that by putting me to death, they are ending our resistance. But they have forgotten something: power taken by force is fragile. It fears truth. It fears unity. It fears voices like mine, and hearts like yours.”
“They want me to kneel. They want me to beg. But I will not.”
“I will not validate tyranny with silence.”
“You are not alone. You are not broken. And this planet—my home—is not theirs to take.”
“Let my death be the last one they claim. Let it mark the moment we stop fearing them.”
“Let it mark the beginning.”
The droids shifted.
The crowd held its breath.
She smiled, just a little—chin still raised, defiant.
“Now do what you came to do.”
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Inside the lead gunship, the air was thick with silence—not calm. No one dared speak.
General Kenobi stood near the holoprojector at the center of the cabin, his arms crossed, lips pressed into a grim line. The flickering holo-feed of the senator’s execution streamed in front of him, unstable from planetary interference—but still very real.
Commander Cody stood beside him, helmet in the crook of his arm, eyes fixed.
The Senator stood tall at the execution stage, her final words still ringing through the feed like a siren in every clone’s chest.
Then—movement.
A droid officer stepped forward. The executioner. Mechanical. Cold. Lifting the electro-guillotine’s lever with clinical efficiency.
A hush fell over the crowd in the square. And the gunship. Cody’s hand curled tight around his helmet.
Kenobi’s voice was low, nearly a whisper “Punch it. Full speed. No stealth.”
“Sir, we’re still—”
“I said punch it.”
The gunship lurched forward, engines screaming. Through the cockpit, the capital city loomed on the horizon—flames and smoke rising in dark plumes, Separatist cruisers blotting the sky.
The other ships of the 212th fell into formation behind them.
Then— Back on the holo, the droid’s hand reached for the trigger.
Cody spoke, rough and urgent:
“ETA?!”
“Forty-five seconds!”
“That’s too long!” Cody snapped, slamming his helmet on.
Kenobi looked at him.
And Cody looked back, voice hard and cracking.
“We’re not losing her. Not today.”
The droid’s arm lifted. The crowd gasped—some screamed. The Senator did not flinch.
And then— A shriek cut through the sky.
Not from the crowd. But from the air above.
Gunships.
The sky erupted in sound and fire. The first blaster bolts rained down on the droid ranks from above—precision strikes that sent sparks and scrap flying. Clones rappelled from hatches, dropping in formation onto the stage and into the square, weapons drawn.
The executioner droid turned its head toward the noise—too slow.
Cody landed hard, blaster raised, shot clean through its neck.
“Move!” he barked, before even touching ground fully.
He was at her side in seconds, cutting her binders off with a vibroblade, catching her by the elbow as explosions tore through the square.
She stared at him, breathless—confused, stunned.
“Told a friend I’d bring you home,” he said, already pulling her toward the evac point.
She could barely hear over the thunder of battle, but—
“Fox?” she managed to ask.
Cody gave her a sharp look.
“He’s waiting.”
The capital was a storm.
The skies above roared with the thunder of Republic gunships, a flurry of blaster fire lighting up the heavens. Clones dropped from the ships like falling stars, armor gleaming through the smoke. The ground was a mess of war cries and destruction. Explosions lit up the streets as they tore through the Separatist droids, reclaiming what had once been the heart of a peaceful planet.
Commander Cody led the charge through the square, his blaster spitting rapid fire as he moved with precision. The 212th behind him was a wall of determined soldiers, every step driven by the need to push back the invaders.
The Senator was not far behind, protected now by Cody and a handful of soldiers. She had been silent after their initial exchange, still catching up to the fact that she had not just been freed, but had escaped. That moment, the seconds between life and death, still played in her mind. But now, her survival was in her hands—her people were counting on her to lead.
Cody’s voice cut through the chaos.
“Keep moving! We retake the streets, now!”
He fired again, taking down a B1 battle droid that had been lining up to fire on them. The clatter of its parts hitting the ground was quickly drowned out by the next round of blaster fire.
The droids were falling fast—at first, it had been a gamble, a sudden drop on the city with the 212th spearheading the attack. The Separatists had been too scattered, too slow to adapt.
Kenobi’s gunship circled low, dodging enemy fire, as the General looked toward the street where Cody had just led a successful push.
“Cody, report,” Kenobi called over comms, his voice calm but laced with urgency.
“We’re advancing into the city center, General,” Cody’s voice crackled through the comm.
“The Separatists are holding strong, but we’re pushing through. We have Senator [Y/N] with us.”
Kenobi paused, a hint of something like relief crossing his face.
“Understood. We’ll clear the way from here. Hold your position.”
The Senator was breathless but unwavering as they moved. She could feel her pulse pounding in her chest as they cut through alleyways and streets, the sounds of blaster fire and explosions echoing around them.
“We’re close,” Cody said, glancing over his shoulder. He had a protective edge in his eyes now, the intensity in his posture evident. “We’ll get you to safety, but you need to stay down.”
She nodded, moving faster, more instinctive than ever. She had always been a symbol of hope, but now, in the face of overwhelming danger, her defiance turned into raw strength.
Her eyes flashed as she scanned the buildings ahead of them.
“We must take back the government building. We need to signal the people of this planet.”
Cody didn’t argue. There was no time for it. They continued their advance, cutting through Separatist forces as they went.
As they neared the government building, they were met with resistance.
A small battalion of droids stood guard, the tallest among them a heavily armored AAT. The droid commander barked orders as blaster fire erupted in every direction.
“Cover fire!” Cody yelled.
The squad spread out, with Thire, Stone, and the others taking positions to cover the senator. The sound of blaster fire echoed back and forth, the crash of explosions reverberating in the streets.
Cody moved first, leaping into the fray with blaster raised, cutting through the advancing droids. His men followed suit, the ground littered with the bodies of fallen droids and debris.
And then, from above—the unmistakable roar of an incoming Republic ship.
The 212th’s gunship descended rapidly, flanking the droids from the rear and creating chaos in their ranks.
Kenobi’s voice rang out over comms, firm and commanding.
“Cody, the building is clear. Move the senator there. We’ll handle the remaining forces.”
Without hesitation, Cody gestured to the senator.
“This way, Senator,” he said, his tone softer now.
She nodded, allowing herself to be guided into the government building’s entrance. The sounds of the battle faded for a moment as they crossed the threshold.
The Republic forces held their ground.
Minutes later, the Separatists began to retreat, their lines weakening under the relentless pressure from Kenobi and his men.
As the last of the droids fell and the gunships circled overhead, the city slowly began to settle. The fires still burned, the sky still blackened with smoke—but for the first time in weeks, there was something that felt like hope.
Cody took a moment, his blaster still at the ready, scanning the surroundings for any remaining threats. The senator stood tall beside him, her eyes locked on the city outside the window.
“We’ve done it,” she murmured, though her voice lacked the triumph one might expect.
“Not yet,” Cody said, his gaze steady. “But we will.”
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Me: I'll stay silent so they don't know I'm judging The face I'm silent with:
Commander Cody x Village Leader Reader
Their ship barely had time to land before blaster rifles were pointed at them.
“I told you I didn’t want help,” came a voice from the treeline—sharp, challenging, full of attitude.
Commander Cody raised a hand to signal the 212th to hold. From behind him, Obi-Wan calmly stepped forward.
“We’re not here to interfere, only to support your defense—”
“You are interference,” the voice snapped.
Then you stepped into view.
A whirlwind of belts, loose straps, feathers, and leather. Goggles shoved to your forehead, hands on hips, expression full of contempt. You looked at the fully armored, clean-cut clones like they were an invasive species.
Obi-Wan bowed slightly. “You must be the village leader—”
You held up a hand. “No, no, don’t butter me up with that Jedi etiquette crap. You’re uninvited.”
“I think you’ll want to hear what we have to say,” Cody said, stepping forward.
You blinked at him. Then walked slowly around him, circling like a predator.
“Mm. Square jaw. Soldier posture. Serious as a stun baton to the ribs. You’re the commander?”
“Yes, ma’am.”
“Unfortunate.” You gave a nasty grin. “I was hoping for someone I could beat in an argument.”
He didn’t flinch. “You’re welcome to try.”
You smirked.
Just as you squared your shoulders, ready to argue—maybe throw a punch—a group of kids came tumbling out from the trees. A little one tugged your coat.
“Boss! Are we really getting Republic soldiers? That means laser tanks, right? And hot rations?”
You didn’t even turn. “Not now, shitheads, I’m busy beating up strangers.”
Cody blinked. Waxer coughed to hide his laughter. Ahsoka’s eyes went wide. Anakin mumbled, “Oh, Force.”
Later, around a crackling fire in your chaotic half-open planning tent (made of repurposed sailcloth and wire), Obi-Wan laid it out clearly.
“The Separatists are planning a full invasion. Three battalions of B1 units, two AATs, and an orbiting cruiser for support.”
You sipped from a cup of what smelled like fermented jungle fruit and blinked slowly. “So… what you’re saying is… there’s gonna be a fight?”
“Yes.”
“And it’ll be… big?”
“Yes.”
You sat up straighter. Your grin turned hungry.
“Fine. I accept your help.”
Cody raised a brow. “That fast?”
You threw your arms out dramatically. “You brought me violence! You should’ve led with that!”
Boil leaned over to Waxer. “She’s gonna get us all killed, isn’t she?”
Waxer whispered back, “Yeah. But it’ll be fun.”
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Two days later, you were mid-dismantle of a thermal sensor when Cody approached.
“You shouldn’t be in the blast zone. This isn’t standard military procedure.”
You blew a strand of hair from your face and smirked. “I’m not a standard anything, Commander.”
Cody exhaled. “You’re reckless.”
You held up a small grenade. “I call it chaotic innovation.”
“It’s dangerous.”
You grinned. “So are your cheekbones, but I don’t hear anyone complaining.”
He blinked. “…What?”
You tossed the grenade to him. He caught it reflexively.
“Good hands,” you said. “I like that.”
He stared down at the live grenade in his palm.
“Is this—armed?”
You winked. “Might wanna disarm before you end up splattered on that wall.”
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When the droids finally attacked, you were thriving.
You rode into battle standing on a makeshift hover-skiff, brandishing a long spear with fireworks tied to it, cackling like a banshee.
Cody shouted into the comm: “Can someone please get her out of the crossfire?”
Waxer replied: “We tried. She bit Boil.”
Boil yelled: “She did NOT! I just tripped—!”
“You tripped because she kicked you!”
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Later that night, after the battle, the village lay safe. The droids were in pieces. And you sat on a fallen log with your knees tucked up, staring at the jungle.
Cody approached, helmet off.
“You did well today.”
You sighed. “Don’t ruin it with compliments.”
He smirked. “I’m trying to be civil.”
You eyed him. “Why? Planning to ask me to dinner?”
A pause.
“…Would you go?”
You stared.
Then laughed. “Commander. If you take me to dinner, I’ll probably start a bar fight and make you pay the tab.”
“Noted.”
You tilted your head. “You’d really take me?”
Cody shrugged, voice quiet. “You fight for your people. You’re unpredictable, reckless… and you’ve got guts. I respect that.”
You squinted. “That’s either the sweetest thing anyone’s said to me… or the scariest.”
He held out a hand.
You took it, grinning wide. “Alright, Tensejaw. Maybe I’ll let you stick around.”